Jack B Nimble posted a comment on Saturday 31st December 2005 9:37am

Poor Willow? Poor Buffy? How about poor reader? Any chance of you finishing this one?

In any case, interesting premise, fun characters, and good dialog. I can tell you wrote it a while ago, but it is a good read none the less.

I have read a few of your Buffy stories now, and I certainly prefer your X/D over X/B. Your Dawn character manages to balance resolve and strength with humor and (when not the witch) some innocence. Xan is necessarily sarcastic, cynical, and a bit hard nosed -- a good balance to Dawn. Buffy is already too cynical and hard, though she could use some humor, but X/B just don't seem to connect as well.

As I said in my (unsigned) Wild Horses review, I will add this to my watch list. I do hope you eventually complete it. Thanks for all the hard work and thanks for sharing the results!

Jack

Exarikun posted a comment on Wednesday 14th December 2005 4:45am

nice! are you going to finish the story? cause i'm itching to know what happens next.

Brad Crawford posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd November 2005 11:32am

well ihope you plan to write some more of this soon tim i loved it!

SotF posted a comment on Saturday 3rd September 2005 10:26am

Please finish this, I really like the fic

Brian posted a comment on Friday 1st July 2005 6:24am

MORE!!!

Great story two thumbs up from me.

brad posted a comment on Wednesday 29th June 2005 12:52am

wow tim i loved the first three parts to this story i cant wait for you to finish the fourth part! wow keep up the great writing!

Eleas posted a comment on Tuesday 14th June 2005 9:18pm

I always liked this story. I am wondering, though, is it abandoned, or is the ending in sight?