Matryoshka Vignettes
Introduction
By Jeconais
Reviews
Rexnos posted a comment on Saturday 17th November 2007 10:32pm for Introduction
A piece that makes you think really... I can't really decide whether to be sorry for Ron, Hermione and Ginny or to blame them. They stepped out on Harry when he needed them, but... their only fault was growing up more slowly than Harry did. They were only seventeen(ish) when everything was going down. Can they really be blamed?
Regardless, as this piece is causing me moral issues, it's obviously a nice piece of work. I like the character interaction and you honestly didn't change much from the real storyline. Basically, you just had Harry grow up a little faster than the rest. As much as I hate seeing Harry and Ginny's relationship go down in flames, I honestly think the same should have happened in the series. It would have been glorious to watch Ginny clock Harry and tell him he was being an idiot.
Anyway, tremendous work from all involved. I suppose it's expected for the ending to be ragged since it was written the way it was, but I can't help but like it. It's obvious it was all going to end quite well, but it would have been nice to see Dumbledore forcibly ripped from his high horse. I've noticed that you don't seem to like him much on the whole...
Later,
Rex
Aelita posted a comment on Sunday 28th October 2007 8:42am for Introduction
Please write som emore on this story I love it!
petrina posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd October 2007 3:45am for Introduction
this was a nice change to the usual fics you write! there was a spelling error somewhere but i forgot to note it down for you. makes a nice read, thank you for writing! (:
Hemotem posted a comment on Saturday 8th September 2007 1:50pm for Introduction
Great work I liked how the story played out sequel??
Hemotem
Seel'vor posted a comment on Thursday 6th September 2007 9:22am for Introduction
You know, this is a really good sequence of stories. The only thing I would want is the "Epilogue". What happens to them all.
sith2886 posted a comment on Tuesday 24th July 2007 9:26am for Introduction
the list is slightly out of order the unforgiving minute should be after a promise made
daewos posted a comment on Monday 23rd July 2007 11:24am for Introduction
Superb - excellent writing style and highly entertaining. However, I thought the ending of the McGonagall vignette was too sad - they had forgiven her so why did she walk away? (Minerva is one of my favourite characters so i may be biased!) I hope that you will write more of these at some point - I would love to see how your characters evolve
finally_sso posted a comment on Friday 15th June 2007 12:28pm for Introduction
I like this story. Is that the end or are you going to finish the story?
Robin Westerly posted a comment on Tuesday 5th June 2007 7:40am for Introduction
WOW!
wow
thank you.
i love them!
thank you
TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Monday 28th May 2007 9:15pm for Introduction
Looks interesting.
gunny
Queenoftears posted a comment on Sunday 27th May 2007 3:35pm for Introduction
This was great! I had really liked Perfect Situations, and I thought it would be cool to have a aqueal to it. Then I saw this and I read it.
sanghamitra posted a comment on Saturday 26th May 2007 12:25am for Introduction
excellent bunch of stories !!
Little Flower Princess posted a comment on Thursday 24th May 2007 5:43pm for Introduction
What happened with Peter Pettigrew? Was he killed?
Karenelaine posted a comment on Wednesday 23rd May 2007 9:31pm for Introduction
Very good. I'm looking forward to Dumbledore getting his.
PhoenixAnkaa posted a comment on Wednesday 23rd May 2007 5:11pm for Introduction
I greatly enjoyed every one of these little vignettes. The different reactions and circumstances are wonderful little peeks into all the separate lives of those around Harry. I hope to see more of this universe in the future. Harry and Daphne seem to make a very complementary couple. And of course, all the little plot lines you left for us to nibble on are probably going to drive most of us batty with curiosity, sooo.....
PA
sammi posted a comment on Wednesday 23rd May 2007 3:36pm for Introduction
Is there a chapter missing with Luna Lovegood visiting a certain hotspot of the world?
hpffmysterious posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd May 2007 5:32pm for Introduction
Not what I was hoping to see updated but this was a very good read and "sequel" to another of your great stories. I had been "hoping" for Hope but this was very enjoyable.
Keep up the good work!
SP posted a comment on Monday 21st May 2007 9:11am for Introduction
<_<; Erm... I mean... Good read. *nod*
SP posted a comment on Monday 21st May 2007 9:10am for Introduction
^_^ Squee!
archdog77 posted a comment on Monday 17th March 2008 7:51pm for Introduction