keichan2 posted a comment on Friday 16th March 2012 8:08pm for Chapter 9

Thanks for the new chapter!

I have to confess that I REALLY like Four ;-)

I hope to read more soon!

Wonderbee31 posted a comment on Friday 16th March 2012 7:27pm for Chapter 9

Great fun here, even as Naruto got hurt and fixed, and then hurt right again, but will be hopeful that things continue on their nice pace, even as Anko is likely plotting big time to get some loving with the whirlpool.

dan26 posted a comment on Friday 16th March 2012 1:06am for Chapter 9

Four walked back in to the waiting room. "He’s going to be fine," she said. "Chakra exhaustion and blood lost. Hard headed idiot."

No one commented on the irony of a clone of Naruto calling someone else hard headed

Actually I believe that it takes a hard-headed person to know somebody trying to be 1 as well

Xuck007 posted a comment on Tuesday 13th March 2012 8:54am for Chapter 9

awesome chapter mate

update soon now

TheWickedTruth posted a comment on Tuesday 13th March 2012 3:55am for Chapter 9

You had a permanent female clone of Naruto quote Ace Rimmer before going on an assassination mission...

Awesome

GremlinXTJ posted a comment on Monday 12th March 2012 9:24pm for Chapter 9

You sure like putting Naruto in the hospital! :D How long was he out after curse seal before he got back in for the stabbing? :)

alec_potter posted a comment on Monday 12th March 2012 5:02am for Chapter 9

Nice chapter, quite power packed. Can't wait to know what you plan to do with the impeding war.

BaltaineShadow posted a comment on Sunday 11th March 2012 10:47pm for Chapter 9

Great chapter :)

I like all the little facts and machinations you managed to put into this fic - as it is: canon is so over-rated ;)

Until the next time!

Greetings,

Baltaine

Mathew McCrillis posted a comment on Sunday 11th March 2012 7:15pm for Chapter 9

Another great chapter, thank you for sharing!

Cheers!

loiosh posted a comment on Sunday 11th March 2012 6:29pm for Chapter 9

Love the new chapter! I'm sad that this fic has almost reached its conclusion but I am looking forward to the last few chapters!

Lee Dickie posted a comment on Sunday 11th March 2012 5:53pm for Chapter 9

Another excellent chapter with a darker thread running though the non-action scenes.

Cynrom posted a comment on Sunday 11th March 2012 5:49pm for Chapter 9

Two stories updated in one day! Yep, ima happy camper now! :)

Chris :)

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Sunday 11th March 2012 5:12pm for Chapter 9

Fun to read!

fx posted a comment on Sunday 11th March 2012 4:52pm for Chapter 9

Thank you for the update Tim!

Hansi_Rahl posted a comment on Sunday 11th March 2012 4:36pm for Chapter 9

Great work!

HopelessFan posted a comment on Sunday 11th March 2012 4:25pm for Chapter 9

There is something I just really like about Naruto commanding an army of clones. I find reading this story is always calming in a way - like a talk with Four ;-)

David Thacker posted a comment on Saturday 4th February 2012 12:27am for Chapter 9

This is a great chapter can not wait to see what happens next.I did not get any alerts for this chapter.

headbanger posted a comment on Friday 6th January 2012 2:59pm for Chapter 9

What's with the hidden chapters, mate?

tekan posted a comment on Friday 6th January 2012 7:42am for Chapter 9

I eagerly anticipate more, as always.

Maximus HoOH posted a comment on Saturday 31st December 2011 5:52am for Chapter 9

Ok to begin great work, i love reading this one and Hogwarts Dawn.

Now i onto an issue, neither this chapter nor the last from Hogwarts Dawn, are showing up on the main page or even on the chapter list from this storys, dont know if its intended or a mistake. Anyway thought you should know either to fix it or know someone noticed

Keep up with this fics, Thanks