tangentsferret posted a comment on Saturday 30th April 2011 4:34pm for Chapter 6

Yay, chapter! This story is SO much fun. And uh-oh, this version of Hanabi will be utterly scary as Scheming Mastermind, if she gets that far with it.

Thanks for writing!

Namito16 posted a comment on Saturday 30th April 2011 11:25am for Chapter 6

I dont think I have ever laughed as hard as I have while reading this story well done please continue you it soon! Btw Hinata and Naruto and even Hanabi and Naruto make cute couples. Good luck.

darthloki posted a comment on Saturday 30th April 2011 8:06am for Chapter 6

*grins widely*

Awesome!

Kortir posted a comment on Saturday 30th April 2011 5:46am for Chapter 6

Gotta hand it to you, this rates at least in my top five Naruto fics that I can recall at this point. I've spent more time laughing than is even close to normal, and I absolutely love what you're doing with the entire Narutoverse. I'm very much looking forward to seeing where you'll go from here. The separate personalities of the clones is excellent as well, it's a lot of fun to see them interact with each other and other people. Nice thoughts with Kyuubi translating dog speech, and the jinchuuriki sensing ability- those are particularly awesome additions. So, Tsume is now getting involved, huh? Sweet. I hope Hana will show up as a result? I've always liked seeing Hana when she gets characterized properly, and she has tons of potential as a character and as a romantic pairing with Naruto.

Thanks so much for posting again! I hope things in your personal life are resolving well. I just found out about your twitter updates when browsing the site, so naturally I'll be watching there to see how things are going as well. Same name as mine here. Looking eagerly forward to the next chapter!

whitefish066 posted a comment on Saturday 30th April 2011 5:41am for Chapter 6

This story is absolutely hilarious, and you've made a Naruto that I like immensely. I've read some of your other works from this site and have found then all to be brilliant. I haven't noticed any of those spelling errors you mentioned in the beginning, but I could have just been too engrossed in the story to notice. You give aspiring writers, like me, something to shoot for. Thanks for the quality entertainment.

darkelf12 posted a comment on Friday 29th April 2011 5:01pm for Chapter 6

I love this fic. I really do. Can't wait for more of it.

firetown posted a comment on Friday 29th April 2011 8:15am for Chapter 6

you are such a great author, i love you stories!!!

joeBob posted a comment on Friday 29th April 2011 7:39am for Chapter 6

Fun. Thanks for the update.

switchhammerhit posted a comment on Friday 29th April 2011 6:27am for Chapter 6

Hello Jeconais,
many, many thanks for the update. I must admit that I am still smirking as I respond to this update. This was a lot of fun, I especially enjoyed Naruto's revenge on Jiraiya, very well thought out. It's something that I would not have thought of, hence the reason that I am not an author but a reader. Keep up the great work. I look forward to the next update!

David Thacker posted a comment on Friday 29th April 2011 5:21am for Chapter 6

That was great and very funny.Keep up the great work.

loiosh posted a comment on Friday 29th April 2011 5:01am for Chapter 6

Love this story! Ive probably re-read it like 5 times now and every time gets laughs! keep up the good work!

Jim_xinu posted a comment on Friday 29th April 2011 3:20am for Chapter 6

Fun chapter, thanks for sharing it with us.

thehoboking posted a comment on Friday 29th April 2011 3:11am for Chapter 6

Great chapter...love the interactions between Naruto and the sennin...please if possible keep the Naruto/harem to the end of the story Naruto defiantly deserves to marry a harem of girls...thnx for posting and please keep. Up the great work

Quincy posted a comment on Friday 29th April 2011 2:57am for Chapter 6

Hahaha, thats one way make a point.
It's good to see that Naruto isn't going to manwhore his way through every female ninja who's passed through puberty.

zoroz posted a comment on Friday 29th April 2011 2:53am for Chapter 6

this chapter was full of awesomeness and im glad you updated this story as its one of the best on the web. I really hope you decide to continue it and have regular updates :)

selonianth posted a comment on Friday 29th April 2011 1:36am for Chapter 6

It's about time mate. Can't wait for more.

Zaxxon posted a comment on Friday 29th April 2011 12:09am for Chapter 6

This is a great story and a very lovable and interesting Naruto. I am greatly enjoying this story and version of Naruto.

Looking forward to more, whether it comes out.

Zachattack868 posted a comment on Thursday 28th April 2011 11:51pm for Chapter 6

Nicely done. I'm looking forward to the next one :)

jayjons posted a comment on Thursday 28th April 2011 10:59pm for Chapter 6

love this story. wish you'd update more often.

Lee Dickie posted a comment on Thursday 28th April 2011 10:46pm for Chapter 6

The personalities that the clones are developing are great and Naruto's growing maturity is equally entertaining, well done and thanks.