keichan2 posted a comment on Friday 31st December 2010 3:23pm for Chapter 5

Thanks for the new chapter!
I spent half of it howling with laugher, and the rest was serious and informative! All in all, a very good chapter that reads very well!

You know, I was really wondering with the tale that Ino spun to Sakura... Until she told, I was wondering what the hell was going on, and if I had missed a chapter!
A question about Ino and her tape recorder... Were they aware of it? If not, she may have heard about the final question asked, and it could have some consequences... (that and she could have heard about some things that were not for her to hear)

Uh? I fear I just spotted a plot hole ;-p (I'm reading the chapter again, last night, I was too tired to comment) The gigantic table (sized for them) with the boss summons would be FAR to big to play poker on it, when in human form! (forget that: the table expanded to allow Naruto to sit, so it could have shrunk, and you just didn't specify it...)

Hey! Can you imagine this:
During the invasion, Manda stops his rampaging when spotting Naruto and exclaims: "Hey, kid! It worked! We have the pictures!" and then they both dissolve into laughter. I can't help but picture the faces on the Sound ninjas! (That, and the faces of the ninja witnessing the summoning :-D)
And I guess that the favor will be important...

I just realized something: If Naruto's scent changes when he changes into a female, then he could use this to evade trackers...

I hope to read more soon!

frankocsic posted a comment on Friday 31st December 2010 12:41am for Chapter 5

Great read. Thanks for all the updates!

Philip Jacobs posted a comment on Wednesday 29th December 2010 6:09am for Chapter 5

This is a nice extra present for the holidays. I think I've said this before, but I am truly enjoying your take on a Naruto that not only has intelligence, but uses it in quite creative ways. I loved the Summons' poker game, and I am with Naruto in hoping that Manda gets pictures of his next summoning to share. I think that it will be interesting to see how often Naruto takes advantage of the invitation to sit in on the game in the future. He may not have gotten the Rasengan completed yet in this version, but he's also running ahead of schedule, and truthfully, I'm not even sure that he really has a need for it with the backing he has here. I'll be looking forward to the next installment when your Muse feels up to sharing more with us.

Tammin posted a comment on Tuesday 28th December 2010 5:09pm for Chapter 5

Brilliant. A short but sweet addition to this story. Thank you for this gift.

blackmage18 posted a comment on Tuesday 28th December 2010 7:11am for Chapter 5

After getting over the fact that everyone is UBER ooc, I like this story. :)

NuitTombee posted a comment on Tuesday 28th December 2010 6:39am for Chapter 5

The only chapter that you should add more to is the next chapter. XD

Great chapter by the way, hope to read more soon.

Now on to The Flying Thunder God.

-Nuit

selonianth posted a comment on Monday 27th December 2010 6:06pm for Chapter 5

It's not exactly a henge anyways...

Nights_Silhouette posted a comment on Monday 27th December 2010 12:19pm for Chapter 5

I dont normaly follow Naruto fics and have never seen the tv series, but your writing is good enough that I can enjoy this dispite that; even if I don't get all the more subtle aspects of your fic. Keep it up.

LordSia posted a comment on Monday 27th December 2010 12:34am for Chapter 5

... Pure Awesome. I wonder what Tsunade would do if she found out about Naruto participating in the fortnightly Boss Summon Poker Game? Offer him her firstborn for a chance to sit in? Her soul? Konoha's Kunoichi Corps?

ficbob posted a comment on Sunday 26th December 2010 2:04am for Chapter 5

Great poker set-up. A real fun read.
Hope for more soon and a merry christmas in RL
Thanks

Trscroggs posted a comment on Saturday 25th December 2010 9:44pm for Chapter 5

This was a wonderful Christmas gift, thank you very much for giving it.

Lee Dickie posted a comment on Saturday 25th December 2010 8:45pm for Chapter 5

A great introduction to the sannin and the world of summons.

Thank you & wishing you a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year.

katrinadax posted a comment on Saturday 25th December 2010 5:51pm for Chapter 5

AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait for ch 6!

Steve Vanek posted a comment on Saturday 25th December 2010 4:36pm for Chapter 5

Great update! Thanks so much for writing and sharing. Here's hoping that 2011 gives you a smooth year to pursue what makes you happy!

Davideg posted a comment on Saturday 25th December 2010 3:41pm for Chapter 5

fantastic chapter thank you for sharing i love this story please continue to update a.s.a.l.a. = as soon as life allows have a Merry Christmas and a happy New Year

Chiyo posted a comment on Saturday 25th December 2010 1:46pm for Chapter 5

loved it as always!

Kruen posted a comment on Saturday 25th December 2010 12:52pm for Chapter 5

Thank you for sharing your stories. This was as great as I've expected from you. Happy Holidays.

GremlinXTJ posted a comment on Saturday 25th December 2010 11:07am for Chapter 5

Ok, the chapter is great and all but I can help but feel that sometimes you make Naruto a bit too ... deep and wise. Just my 2c.

goddessa39 posted a comment on Saturday 25th December 2010 7:49am for Chapter 5

Well, merry Xmas!

Fifth chapter, yay. I liked it and am glad Baa-chan is going to be Hokagesama. You worried me there with the slightly tempting other option. Naruto sent Jiraiya off to a whorehouse? Man, I would be worried both for any progeny of Jiraiya's running around-he is such a whore. I like Shizune and she seems like a fairly normal person to befriend unlike everyone else he is close to. He can live around her as a friend and not expect anything.

Anko and Kurenei having Inochi get him to talk under false circumstances? Not a good idea. Ino and Sakura kissing? Too bad that cannot be their pairing.

kartal posted a comment on Saturday 25th December 2010 7:21am for Chapter 5

Wow! Went serious on this one, I like it. I love this fic, and hope you have definite plans for where it's going to go. Keep it up!