Katsuhito posted a comment on Wednesday 3rd July 2013 4:58pm for Chapter 5
I was re-reading this story again, and I chuckled again at "not wanting to push a recalcitrant demon." I always appreciate an author that can use $10 words like "recalcitrant" and
"anthropomorphising" in their works. Now if you can work "onomatopoeia" into a story, I'll be impressed. ;)
joeBob posted a comment on Friday 29th April 2011 6:04am for Chapter 5
Hmmm. I must have missed the notice of this chapter when it came out.
Naruto's a bit of a Gary Stu, but the chapter's still entertaining.
Random typo note:
Is it busboy or bellhop? Does Naruto travel with a bunch of china? :)
Shinobu Weasley posted a comment on Thursday 28th April 2011 7:07am for Chapter 5
Awesome! I always wanted to hear Naruto say Bollocks, even if I never knew it!
Ancalador posted a comment on Tuesday 26th April 2011 10:15pm for Chapter 5
Very nice. I probably said this on a previous review, but this is one of my favorite Naruto stories in progress or completed, and I look forward to seeing how you will continue it.
You are my favorite author on this site, and I very much hope you will keep up your brilliant work.
sterata posted a comment on Thursday 21st April 2011 8:55pm for Chapter 5
UPDATE !!!!!???!!!? ... please this is a great story.
Gaelyn posted a comment on Thursday 21st April 2011 3:54am for Chapter 5
Just caught this story, J. LOVE IT!!! I started it on a whim and ended up reading until I was completely up-to-date. As usual, I enjoy your work.
Have a good one!
csad posted a comment on Sunday 10th April 2011 8:49am for Chapter 5
Oh, man, this story is *insane*. I saw "comedy" listed as genre among the others, but I didn't expect crackfic. Probably because of the wordcount. But who cares! I loved the insanity of it all. *g*
Of course the story also contains so many elements you *wouldn't* have been able to get away with had it been anything *but* insanefic.
But a review is not a place to be impertinently telling you things you know anyway. And because I don't want to subject you to my fangirly gushing this time around, I will only say this:
Adorable and hilarious story. *Loved* it. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Decumo9 posted a comment on Wednesday 6th April 2011 11:45pm for Chapter 5
I really do like your writing, however I find myself in a quandary. Most of your stories feature an overpowered protagonist whose only real problems are moral issues, or personal relationships, or enemies who never really amount to much trouble at all. There's no real struggle, it's just humoral and a bit pointless. I do not know whether reading your stories provides as much satisfaction anymore. However you are more dedicated than most and I commend that.
ketchamkl posted a comment on Friday 1st April 2011 3:06pm for Chapter 5
Love this story read it 4 times already, Cant wait until the next chapter.
sithknight01 posted a comment on Friday 4th March 2011 12:57am for Chapter 5
damn i love this story i only wish you could update faster but i know how life gets in the way
zoroz posted a comment on Wednesday 16th February 2011 6:24am for Chapter 5
awesome xmas present :)
xardoth posted a comment on Wednesday 9th February 2011 7:27am for Chapter 5
Ugh, how'd I miss whenever you updated this chapter? It was awesome. Glad I decided to go over some old fics I wanted to reread. I think the development so far is reasonable for the kind of start you have, which is something that seems to skyrocket or fade away in most fics I've been reading lately. Hope you keep having inspiration for this - and your other works.
SingerRenn posted a comment on Tuesday 1st February 2011 5:46pm for Chapter 5
This is a beautiful story and the scene between Naruto and Tsunade was perfect. I love your realism about what the duties and life of a ninja are, you haven't hidden the fact that they are actually assassins/soldiers and that their life isn't easy. BUT, at the same time you didn't make Tsunade a coward for turning her back on that life. Your Naruto actually thinks, he still has some of the base goof/prankster in him but he has grown. Yes you made him insanely strong, and it is unrealistic however it isn't a problem as you provided a means to the end he didn't just wake up with the knowledge but it comes from both training and the Kyūbi, so it is feasible. This world works, have fun with it, I love getting to read more.
thehoboking posted a comment on Wednesday 26th January 2011 10:42am for Chapter 5
Great story from a great author...plz keep up the great work
dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Friday 14th January 2011 6:03pm for Chapter 5
I could say more, but that's what it all boils down to.
Pai posted a comment on Sunday 9th January 2011 4:55pm for Chapter 5
Great to see this updated as allways. Going to be interesting as Tsuande learns more about naruto.. and what ever jyria's upcomming punishment will be
dan26 posted a comment on Wednesday 5th January 2011 2:18am for Chapter 5
Tsunade blinked at him, and then at his apprentice who was on her third cup of sake
Just replace the word his with her in this sentence to sound better
Pointer posted a comment on Monday 3rd January 2011 1:31am for Chapter 5
I know Naruto doesn't have the maturity to deal with people this way, but it would be nice.
If you haven't perchance already read it, try 'I wouldn't exactly call that sitting' by dogbertcarroll, over on tthfanfic.org. Fun Story.
AnimaLynx posted a comment on Monday 3rd January 2011 12:29am for Chapter 5
Happy New Year!
Awesome story I look forward to seeing more of this soon.
dan26 posted a comment on Saturday 1st January 2011 10:32am for Chapter 5
Anko is loud and boisterous; she enjoys life, but doesn’t know where the line is sometimes. Kurenai is her moral compass.
“Kurenai is quiet and more willing to watch, and then offer her opinion. Anko pushes her so that she’s more forceful, and it helps
What an honest justification of yuri comes to mind