Orion posted a comment on Sunday 9th May 2010 7:57pm for Chapter 2

Great! Thanks.

William Fowler posted a comment on Sunday 9th May 2010 7:49pm for Chapter 2

HAHAHAHAHAHA!

That was awesome! I'm a big Naruto fan and this is the most original rewrite of the series I've ever seen! A manipulative/Kawaii Naruto who everyone underestimates until it's too late! And the one person that didn't got Fatality'd!

Awesome, and thanks, I still enjoy all your works I've read, Jeconais.

William Fowler

Vilkath posted a comment on Sunday 9th May 2010 6:49pm for Chapter 2

Good funny chapter over all but I have to say I loved the boat stuff the most. The Wave arc is perhaps one the most over done plot points in Naruto fanfiction, and usualy has very little give to changes. So the idea of Naruto taking himself a boat and possibly becoming a pirate later is just great. Even One Piece cross overs really never do anything like that.

darthme1011 posted a comment on Sunday 9th May 2010 6:39pm for Chapter 2

OMG great just so funny

Chris1 posted a comment on Sunday 9th May 2010 5:45pm for Chapter 2

Hee! totally awesome :D I was grinning through all of it.

It's cracky and it's not serious at all... but then you've got moments like the talk between Neji and Hiashi, or the little speech Naruto made when he chose Anko to demonstrate the jutsu. I think I'm enjoying this fic the most, out of all your works.

Thank you so much :D

Chris