iamjmph01 posted a comment on Saturday 22nd May 2010 11:33pm for Chapter 2

Ha, im having trouble figuring out just what to type, i think i back spaced ten opening statements soo... lets go

I dont usually review as i think i tend to make an idiot of myself, but oh well if you think im an idiot im ok with that...

Thank You. Alot of the newer fanfic out nowadays is horrible. Utter crap. So thank you for taking the time out of your life to write your amazing stories.

Also, i love how this is going. The more mature women thing is great. Probably my favorite part...:) I like how he "subdued" Kyubbi, and his reasonings about the... quirks.. of the experienced ninja is actually something i completely agree with... I always love a more intelligent naruto... I cant stand canon naruto, but you've come up with a way of making him... well he's still kinda childish, and not a genius(by their standards at least) but he's learning.

Well, im off to reread Hogwarts Dawn, thank you again

Tengokujin posted a comment on Tuesday 18th May 2010 5:01pm for Chapter 2

The first thing through my mind as I read these first two chapters:
WHAT. THE. HELL. WAS. THAT.
The second was:
WANT MORE.

While some uses of suffixes were off, that doesn't detract nearly enough from the story to be a problem. :3

Would love to see where this all goes.

-Tengokujin

frankocsic posted a comment on Sunday 16th May 2010 10:27am for Chapter 2

nice au naruto story. loved reading it so far.

zoroz posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 5:05am for Chapter 2

awesomeness :P

marcelhm posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 10:38am for Chapter 2

it's insane..... which is great fun to read so thanks for the giggles!

swordsandspells posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 5:49am for Chapter 2

I freaking love this so far. Please keep writing and I will keep reading.
Wonderful Stuff!

dan26 posted a comment on Wednesday 12th May 2010 10:42pm for Chapter 2

Hey," Naruto exclaimed, "this is a perfect time to try out my new Jutsu, and break this weird atmosphere." He made some hand signs, "Homo No Jutsu!" he cried.

In the middle of the table, five Narutos appeared. The first was dressed in leather chaps, and had a moustache that matched his long hair. The second had a bare chest that glistened with oil, and was wearing tight jeans. The third was in a tight fitting sailors uniform, complete with a formal shirt. The fourth was in a ninja uniform that was at least two sizes too small for him, and the final was just wearing a swimming costume.

This configuration of Cloned Naruto's reminded me of the group Y.M.C.A that's why it should be called Y.M.C.A no jutsu

GinnyMyLove posted a comment on Wednesday 12th May 2010 7:23am for Chapter 2

I like it! It is fast paced and fun to read, so fast paced that I didn't really think about how they knew what they knew...I mean Kyuubi is thousands of years old right? Certainly she has picked up some human Jutsu as she kills and was able to observe Minato during her battle with him so she can pass on his moves to Naruto.

In any case, I have really missed new stuff from you, and though I started as an HP ff fan I have recently gotten into Naruto. Even though you only have 2 chapters and they are un-beta'd, this story is way up there on my favorites list and I eagerly await the chaos you wish to unleash next.

Thank you so much and I am so happy to see you back to writing!

GML

seekertlk posted a comment on Wednesday 12th May 2010 7:08am for Chapter 2

Fantastic!

I was hoping you'd have fun with Gai & Lee, and you exceeded expectations.

It's interesting; you mentioned with some concern that your stories aren't being edited so extensively. While perhaps this might show some less polish, that polish sometimes took some of the "Tim" out of the stories, so to speak.

I like your approach, I like your humor, and I'm very much enjoying the unadulterated story.

Davideg posted a comment on Wednesday 12th May 2010 5:29am for Chapter 2

fantastic chapter thank you for sharing please update again a.s.a.l.a. = as soon as life allows

Pai posted a comment on Wednesday 12th May 2010 5:23am for Chapter 2

My, naruto's lining up the girls huh? And a pair of them as his errr herself. Thats win all around.

Punster-Zero posted a comment on Tuesday 11th May 2010 3:20pm for Chapter 2

I don't care how much you protest, this story *does* have a plot, and it's a flipping hilarious one!

It's rare to find a story that has me cackling at various instances, and rarer still to find one that's well written and *continuously* funny. I reread chapter one before heading to chapter two, and it was just as good as the first time - the only difference was the sniggering on my part as I *approached* the daft scenes that I so loved (of which there are too many to count).

I have only one question, when Anko was threatening the Pinkette and the truly annoying Blondie, she threatened them with tying them to the flag pole and renting them out - the question is, did you mean for her to rent the girls out to the villages, or the villagers... cos while it *could* be a spelling mistake, this *is* Anko we're talking about...

*grin grin*

Keep up all the good work, and I'll be looking forward to reading the next installment ^_^

jason papile posted a comment on Tuesday 11th May 2010 2:43pm for Chapter 2

Tim, I haven't even read the chapter yet, but holy carp!!! A 25 hour shift! Was that all in one day?

bshaw0000 posted a comment on Tuesday 11th May 2010 9:48am for Chapter 2

This is an amazing story. you've gone in a direction that i've never read before and this is quickly becoming one of my all time favorite reads. Keep up the good work mate.
Ben

coronal posted a comment on Tuesday 11th May 2010 4:05am for Chapter 2

so he gets to keep his own pirate ship?

hell, *I* love this Naruto!
btw, homo no jutsu? that is both so wrong and so incredibly funny

dan26 posted a comment on Monday 10th May 2010 11:48pm for Chapter 2

," Naruto exclaimed, "this is a perfect time to try out my new Jutsu, and break this weird atmosphere." He made some hand signs, "Homo No Jutsu!" he cried.

In the middle of the table, five Narutos appeared. The first was dressed in leather chaps, and had a moustache that matched his long hair. The second had a bare chest that glistened with oil, and was wearing tight jeans. The third was in a tight fitting sailors uniform, complete with a formal shirt. The fourth was in a ninja uniform that was at least two sizes too small for him, and the final was just wearing a swimming costume

This is more like Y.M.C.A no jutsu to me

Oh oh," Neji muttered
Don't you mean uh oh for this part

OdinMage posted a comment on Monday 10th May 2010 10:59pm for Chapter 2

Ok, as always I love your work, my comment is more on your authors note from the beginning. Just the thought of a 25 hour shift made me contemplate shooting myself in the head; what the hell do you do that you could live through that?

ThunderGod posted a comment on Monday 10th May 2010 9:12pm for Chapter 2

love this story, its entertaining and enjoyable...you are a great writer

jgkitarel posted a comment on Monday 10th May 2010 8:50pm for Chapter 2

This is fun to read, probably almost as much fun as you have writing it. Light, amusing, occasionally serious and moody; it has all of your trademarks thrown in.

Kaji posted a comment on Monday 10th May 2010 7:54pm for Chapter 2

Pure awesomeness plain and simple. Can't wait for the next chapters.