Phoenixdor Dragonclaw posted a comment on Friday 10th February 2006 5:42pm for 8 - Hogwarts

Nice I love it. I really liked the part where Draco was trying to get innto Gabby's pants, I thought it was HILARIOUSHILARIOUS I say. My Favorite part:

"Take your hand off me," she demanded.

He nodded.

"Will you do me a favour?" she asked.

He nodded again, eagerly this time.

"Run as fast as you can into that tree."

"Anything," Draco exhaled

Update Soon!!

Ashley posted a comment on Friday 10th February 2006 5:20pm for 8 - Hogwarts

Your work is amazing. Several of my friends and myself look forward to the updates. I love the romance and intrigue, and I look forward to the next installment. Thank you for all you provide to the Harry Potter fans.

Princess Fictoria posted a comment on Friday 10th February 2006 3:01pm for 8 - Hogwarts

Totally loved this chapter. I was very impressed with the quick way that Gabrielle took care of Mr. Malfoy. I eagerly look forward to the match between the respective staffs as well as the ultimate defeat of Dumbledore. I am not familiar with the geography of Germany... but must assume that with you placing Durmstrang there that it is located in a very cold place per the disriptions given to us from the fourth book. I had always assumed that it was somewhere in russia or a slavic nation. You did a great job with the commentary it was informative and devilishly fun as were Lee's previous ones while in school. Please post more soon!

Hannah3 posted a comment on Friday 10th February 2006 2:36pm for 8 - Hogwarts

Not fair, ending it there...oh well, it was really good, as always.

Lucia Depenhart posted a comment on Friday 10th February 2006 2:35pm for 8 - Hogwarts

An absolutely wonderful chapter!

GknightS posted a comment on Friday 10th February 2006 2:08pm for 8 - Hogwarts

awwwwwwww it's soo good.. wow you actually updated.. i mean.. updated this fast.. and such a long chapter too!! : ) i hope the next one is up soon.. like before next month or something.. but it is ok if your busy and has other things to do.. but i have to say this is be far one of the best Harry fanfictions i have ever read..

thank you for this wonderful story and i hope i will be able to read more.

HoagieOfDoom posted a comment on Friday 10th February 2006 1:40pm for 8 - Hogwarts

Excellent, as always. I have to congratulate you on your characterizations; they make for a fun story!

Brad Crawford posted a comment on Friday 10th February 2006 1:24pm for 8 - Hogwarts

wow loved what gabby did to malfoy cant wait to read what he has to say when they find him in the morning or say later that night or hey hopefullya acromatilla will drag him off into the forest as it's dinner! well thanks again tim for a absolutely wonderful reading experience! keep up the fantastic writing! dont let the flame morons get you down!
Brad

Logan_MacLeod posted a comment on Friday 10th February 2006 12:56pm for 8 - Hogwarts

I LOVE this story!!! PLease please get it updated soon. That was great seeing Lee again, I have always enjoyed his commentating.

Louis IX posted a comment on Friday 10th February 2006 12:16pm for 8 - Hogwarts

Good! Great! Wonderful! Magnifique! Encore!

Nelly posted a comment on Friday 10th February 2006 12:02pm for 8 - Hogwarts

Love the end,


great chapter.

Omagic posted a comment on Friday 10th February 2006 11:50am for 8 - Hogwarts

Another really good chapter. I like that you used Minerva (I roll on a first name basis with the resident transfiguration prof) to help address the "squick" factor of Harry being older and a professor to Gabrielle. Excellent use of a character who seamlessly melds into that roll.

A very well written chapter, kept very tight for the most, and left me wanting more at the end.

Thanks for writing,

Omagic

Fiona O'Neill posted a comment on Friday 10th February 2006 11:23am for 8 - Hogwarts

There are times when I think you are a very cruel man the way you leave us just itching for more. I'm always dying to read just a bit more when your chapters finish. I like the detail you go into regarding your understanding into the theory of magic so that we the readers have an understanding of where you are going with a plot line. I also liked the scene with Gabby and her team mates as they confronted her.

As always thanks for writing, it's always enjoyable to read what you've done

Fiona

Renzo7 posted a comment on Friday 10th February 2006 11:22am for 8 - Hogwarts

well done, the story is progressing nicely. Only thing is, would you please try to keep updates more frequent?

Scott Sakraida posted a comment on Friday 10th February 2006 11:02am for 8 - Hogwarts

excellent, just excellent. nothing else could be said.

hoss posted a comment on Friday 10th February 2006 10:31am for 8 - Hogwarts

Bloody hell, late for work again you would think that by now I'd know better then to start reading one of your chapters in the morring, there to good too stop hoft way throuhgt. Oh well Thanks

Leisha posted a comment on Friday 10th February 2006 10:18am for 8 - Hogwarts

What a fantastic picture to leave us with! I can imagine that the only reason Harry didn't tear Malfoy to shreds is because he was bleeding and unconscious already. I hope Harry doesn't get too angry with him and that he will find a way to help the Beauxbatons chasers be better in the next match. I also love Hermione's plan to help Harry and Gabby out. Can't wait for the next chapter. Fantastic as usual.

lap10 posted a comment on Friday 10th February 2006 10:06am for 8 - Hogwarts

I like that Harry and Gabby's relationship was discovered by the other Beauxbaton students, I thought that some aspects of it must have been noticeable.

"We’ve had some fun conversations with the Durmstrang students, as we both speak bad English," Simone said cheerfully. "Some of the Hogwarts students are okay, but some seem a little arrogant."
It's not like the Hogwarts students have offered to learn French or German, either.

I'm really glad Harry still has an ally at Hogwarts in Minerva, and I can't wait to see the Hogwarts reaction to the B. professors team.

Overall, a wonderful chapter in a truly enjoyable story.

turnlach posted a comment on Friday 10th February 2006 9:48am for 8 - Hogwarts

I have a feeling that Draco is going to try and stir up trouble for Gabrielle after that little run in. There's probably some sort of rule about how a Veela can't use their powers to make a man hurt themselves like that and you can bet that Malfoy will want revenge.

Are you going to have a Harry/Dumbledore confrontation? I would like to see one where Harry really lets the old bastard have it!

Crys posted a comment on Friday 10th February 2006 8:11am for 8 - Hogwarts

Slightly new perspective of Gabby's post-Mating. We'd heard the story before, but not from her POV.

"It had been another reason for his frequent use of the Cruciatus curse; it had disguised the true reason why they had sometimes felt weak and tired."
Clever idea.

AD put that memory in his pensieve . . . *frown* I just hope something doesn't "click" the next time he stirs it.

*cheer* Go, Gabby! Great speech.

*blink* Min? Well, I know you like McG . . . Good relationship/friedship for Harry, here, methinks.

Hmm. Okay, a line from Harry that APPEARS to be a command may or may not be. Gabby knows when he means them and when he doesn't. Gives you wiggle room as needed.

"But it’s supposed to be something he doesn’t want to do."
"Oh," Gabrielle said innocently. "In that case, I want sex."
I love this girl. I really, really do.

*evil grin* Good reaction to the ferret, Gabby. Now just to determine if they should report him to Albus and covertly to DMLE . . .

Looking forward to more ferret, AD, Snape, and Trewlaney bashing. And the MoM if he pokes his head up.

Great story, boss.