Rahul posted a comment on Monday 20th June 2005 12:59am for 2 - Paris

Wonderful! I'm a big fan of your stories on fanfiction.net. I was terribly disappointed that you have abandoned the site... It's imperfect, but there is a lot more good than bad. That site has propelled Harry Potter fanfiction, and in general, interest in writing and reading like few other organizations.

Anyway, in regards to this story, I find it absolutely splendid! It's magical and amazing, just as I have come to expect from you. You have once again crafted a Harry that is human and loveable without sacrificing the magic. Please update this soon!

PS, Just in case you may care (which is doubtful, given the quantity of the reviews you have gotten over the years), my Fanfiction.net handle is "Dumbledore".

Hubert posted a comment on Monday 13th June 2005 10:50pm for 2 - Paris

i quite enjoy this story and hope that it is contenued soon. is there any more storeys like this out there.

DF posted a comment on Monday 13th June 2005 11:52am for 2 - Paris

more :)

mashimaromadness posted a comment on Sunday 12th June 2005 7:36am for 2 - Paris

Ooh, I see trouble a-brewin'!! Hehe. That doesn't seem like it'll be too good. Can't wait till you update. I loved it!

len vandiveer posted a comment on Friday 10th June 2005 10:54am for 2 - Paris

I love this story. It is in he realm of the better stories, so far.

Kordolin posted a comment on Wednesday 8th June 2005 2:54pm for 2 - Paris

LOL! And of course Harry is to smart for his own good and starts to figure it out!:) Of course it wouldnt be a good fic if he didnt. So far this story is awesome and I am really looking forward to more! Update soon!
-kordolin

Ben Small posted a comment on Tuesday 7th June 2005 12:39am for 2 - Paris

Strangely enough, I've never read a Harry and Gabrielle story before. I was pleasantly surprised, although that's an understatement.

I enjoyed this story immensely. I enjoy most of your stories, true, but this one in particular stands out as a fantastically written yarn. I find myself drawn to Gabrielle, her calculated ambition and full understanding of the complex interests of Harry Potter. Wow. Just wow.

There were little instances, polished gems in my opinion, that made this story incredible. The few paragraphs last chapter illustrating Gabrielle's intense longing and fantasy was endearing. I felt no pity for her character, instead I felt the powerful urge to cheer her on. I love the way you've written Gabrielle.

I hope you update soon, I'll check every single day until you do. Even if it takes a month or two, no hard feelings on my part. Do your best, and if you don't feel like writing today then don't. I'm eager to find out what happens next chapter, of course, but it's your life. I hope nobody else is trying to convince you otherwise. Good luck, Jeconais.

~Ben

Haeton posted a comment on Tuesday 31st May 2005 4:44pm for 2 - Paris

All I can say is that this story is excellent as are most of your stories. I do find it frustrating that you have so many that I enjoy with no end in sight.

Gabriel posted a comment on Sunday 29th May 2005 1:07am for 2 - Paris

Hello Tim:

Reading again the history something I call me the attention..

How Harry learn french? Hermione use to teach him some type of enchantment, a special pensieve or something like that...

Sorry for the bad english... i am spanish speaker

Brent posted a comment on Saturday 28th May 2005 10:55am for 2 - Paris

I'm not sure there's a story you've written that I haven't liked. Update this one soon; I like it.

Patches posted a comment on Saturday 28th May 2005 2:08am for 2 - Paris

Well, as usual Harry is more astute than people give him credit for. At least he is checking into things. I like the fact that Gabrielle is trying to get to know Harry better. Also that she wants him to learn to love her for herself. That shows a lot of character on her part.

I like this story line and I want to see what you come up with next. As well as White Knight/Grey Queen and TMW!

Keep up the good work. Thanks

hasapi posted a comment on Wednesday 25th May 2005 10:13am for 2 - Paris

Awesome couple of chapters! I am very impressed with this story...and would definitely like to see more of it!

Chorin posted a comment on Saturday 21st May 2005 1:12pm for 2 - Paris

I really like this story. I found it when I was going to read the tenth chapter of TMW, and I geuss I didn't really expect to like it, but I do. Normally, I'm only a H/G shipper, but this seems like a really good pairing the way that you write Gabrielle. I don't think that Harry will be to angry whenever he finds out that he was semi-manipulated, but what do I know, you're that author. Please, continue with this story, update soon please. And it wouldn't hurt if you updates TMW....

Karen175 posted a comment on Friday 20th May 2005 6:22pm for 2 - Paris

I love were you are going with this story. Its very rear to fine a Harry/Gabrielle fic, and a well written one at that. Please update soon!

Payne posted a comment on Thursday 19th May 2005 9:59pm for 2 - Paris

This is the first story I have read with this pair....Its great so far....hope to read alot of fluff....lol...

Sonicdale posted a comment on Thursday 19th May 2005 1:01pm for 2 - Paris

Steven Augart posted a comment on Wednesday 18th May 2005 2:52pm for 2 - Paris

I'm enjoying the story. I like the picture you've painted so far, bringing in lots of different threads: giant society, Veela society, Veela goals in choosing a spouse, Harry's relationship with Ron and Hermione, what Harry did to end the war, what happened to Draco, and many more.

Stahchild posted a comment on Tuesday 17th May 2005 12:26pm for 2 - Paris

My God!

You have to continue this story. I've just realised that you don't post all your stories in one website, and that some stories you have on other site and others you don't.

This story grabbed my attention for the sole reason that it wasn't a Harry/Ginny ship. That ship is becoming so common that its now almost cliche everytime I read one. So to find a fic that has Harry with someone who doesn't play an important part in the Canonized fics - its enthralling!

Hermione and co should have listened to Ron. Harry's going to feel like he's been manipulated when he finds out. He'll probably feel like the only reason why Gabrielle is with him is not because she loves him for himself but because she doesn't want to go crazy and die. They have good intentions but as the saying goes....

I really do hope that you decide to update this. Please don't abandon it, it's one of the more original ships that I have read. And it's refreshing to read.