Hope
11 - Sydney
By Jeconais
Reviews
azul posted a comment on Friday 4th May 2007 11:58am for 11 - Sydney
Interesting poetry. Kinda describes the Bond, does it not?
dakinumas posted a comment on Friday 4th May 2007 11:37am for 11 - Sydney
god , I hate Hermione in this story! why does shehave to get her way?
The bond , Gabby and Harry have is special, and they both went a long way and undergo a lot of paint before happiness and plus, Veela mating Bond , She should be a Veela to be able to duplicate that!
She's Simply able to block the bond and not got the nerve to research and copy it!
The bond feels not so special anymore, If everyone can do it.
argghhh bloody know it all, I h , well I don't like her!
can you tune down her annoyingness, no , that's not the right word! well, her annoying habit! PLEASE
dakinumas posted a comment on Friday 4th May 2007 11:26am for 11 - Sydney
as being someone at Hogwarts,mystery woman?
why are you doing this?
he still has a lot of affection for....
.......it's not McGonagall, is it?
YOU are BAD......sniff corrupting my innocent mind like this!!!!!
jalva200 posted a comment on Friday 4th May 2007 11:12am for 11 - Sydney
Hehehehe i really liked this chapter so when they going to find and beat the hell out of Draco... will he insprince a painful death followed by a enterndy in hell??
John Fitzgerald posted a comment on Friday 4th May 2007 11:09am for 11 - Sydney
I hope that you will update again soon. Thanks.
Aquilara posted a comment on Friday 4th May 2007 10:42am for 11 - Sydney
Hello!
This chapter is an amazing start in the weekend. Fabulous. I just loved.
Hope the next one comes soon.
jedifanatic posted a comment on Friday 4th May 2007 10:21am for 11 - Sydney
There is a way that you could write the mystery woman into the Hope universe, simply write it as an independent story. It wouldn't probably take you all that long to do it since you seem to have the back story pretty much filled out already.
DizzyG posted a comment on Friday 4th May 2007 9:53am for 11 - Sydney
The first time I read the sentence I thought it said "I note that Snape is here — standing in as the Hogwarts *roach*, I assume?"
Now I could just need some sleep but that seems strangely appropriate.
vivekgk posted a comment on Friday 4th May 2007 9:41am for 11 - Sydney
Great chapter! I like how you've developed Gabrielle, and the connection to Harry. I also love Ron and Hermione in this story.
The only sour note I have is with the bit about Ginny screwing centaurs. Frankly, I thought that was a bit of bashing that could have been avoided.
Aimee951 posted a comment on Friday 4th May 2007 9:29am for 11 - Sydney
This is another great chapter, although my imagination is not quite as good as yours so i would love to hear the story of Harry's mystery girl please!!!
Aimee
ursis001 posted a comment on Friday 4th May 2007 9:21am for 11 - Sydney
Excellent chapter, as allways.
please write more.
Thanks, ursis001
Shayne Rich posted a comment on Friday 4th May 2007 9:10am for 11 - Sydney
What a wonderful story and a wonderful chapter.
I have absolutely loved this story and while I can't wait for the final installment, I kind of hate to see it over. Thanks for sharing it.
Shayne
SerendipitousNightcrawler posted a comment on Friday 4th May 2007 8:35am for 11 - Sydney
Brilliant chapter, albeit something of a misnomer. Personally, I would have thought naming it Camelot would have been perfect considering the Ball, but whatever.
Love the twins. I can't say enough about how well written the supporting cast is in this story. Just curious, but that mobile phone thing sounds eerily similar to Ron's "Voice Floos" from "Test of Time". Is that where you got the idea?
I especially feel for Katie, I mean she's going to have a hard time finding a partner when she's always comparing him to Harry. Makes me wonder if she doesn't decide to just try and enjoy casual trysts and eventually have a child on her own (maybe ask Gabrielle is Harry could donate?). Anyway, I was surprised that she slipped up like that to be honest. I mean considering how well they've done at keeping it a secret it seems odd that she blurted it out like that.
Anyway, thanks again. Can't wait until the next chapter.
Alcatras posted a comment on Friday 4th May 2007 8:07am for 11 - Sydney
I realy love your extra long chapters.
You take your time and make them long and filled with good stuff while others just write much.
freshwater posted a comment on Friday 4th May 2007 7:31am for 11 - Sydney
Loved the meeting and the ball. Harry's choices for their costumes and charming the great hall was big enough, but then the twins' insight and the switcheroos to protect their privacy: totally brilliant!
You MUST do a bit on the mystery woman at Hogwarts....just have her bump into Harry briefly, then take us into her wistful recollections....yes?
Another reviewer suggested an outtake on the shopping trip to Sydney, and I'd like to second that motion.
Thanks for a heartwarming and amusing read yet again.
morriganscrow posted a comment on Friday 4th May 2007 7:02am for 11 - Sydney
Excellent!
Beautifully written, densely packed, chapter with much to think on.
Keep up the great job.
Todd Rodgers posted a comment on Friday 4th May 2007 7:02am for 11 - Sydney
You realise, of course, that you ruin us for other writing.
I really enjoyed this chapter, I specifically liked the cutting off at the school meeting and how quickly he brought the meeting to a close -- I was sitting on a conference call while I briefly browsed that section. A Harry/Snape duel in this particular version of the HP world. Wouldn't that be just too amusing -- and sadly too short.
Now where was Draco?
Mayjest posted a comment on Friday 4th May 2007 6:11am for 11 - Sydney
Hehe, that was brilliant. Not too much in the way of moving on the plot, but some great little scenes. The scene with Snape in was brilliant.
My only worry is that you're making Harry TOO good - almost TMW proportions. In TMW it was all right, it seemed a little too much at times, but I thought you were trying to move away from making Harry super!Harry? Or did finishing off TMW put you back in that vague mood? It just strikes me that there seem to be similar features in your Harry and Ginny (sorry, Gabrielle - but that just proves that there are similar elements. The fact that they're 'perfect' for each other in pretty much the same ways as TMW) in both stories. It's certainly closer to your TMW Harry than your Perfect Situations or Alone type Harry.
Entilzah posted a comment on Friday 4th May 2007 5:55am for 11 - Sydney
You do a towering love story in the last chapter, and a (for the most part) fun, lighthearted romp in the day in the life of the most powerful newlyweds (and their friends, of course) in centuries. As well as throw in backstory to some or the secondary characters. And it flows as the best story I have read in years. Literally.
And why did Jean spouting french poetry to Aimee immediately think of Morticia and Gomez Addams? :-)
Magnificent as always. My praise can never come close to the beauty of your prose, but we mortals can but try.
Christopher Patton posted a comment on Friday 4th May 2007 1:25pm for 11 - Sydney