Davideg posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2012 2:26am for Chapter 8

wow thank you for sharing another fantastic chapter please continue to update a.s.a.l.a.

Isumo1489 posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2012 2:21am for Chapter 8

Ok, wow, I just caught up with this story, and truth be told, I've yet to be as impressed with any fic as I have with the last two chapters. Deviation from source material is the hallmark of fanfiction, but your character developement showed the transition from beginning to present very well. The Snape dieing thing was a bold move, but makes sense given the context, and the reaction was very well done. it was beleivable knowing Harry's character, and his reaction was as genuine as I'd likely have myself, though I'd likely be worse off myself.

That said, Fleur and Kate's act was somethign to behold indeed, most would underestimate what such charms could do to a male who's both unprepaired and utterly outclassed. This story has been a joy to read so far, and I hope to see it through to it's end. Even then, it holds a standard of writing I myself hope to attain one day. Thanks again for a great chapter, and I look forward to reading more of your work.

ladysavay posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2012 1:31am for Chapter 8

Brilliant chapters. I have not laughed out loud at any story for a couple of months, but when McGonagall listed Snapes injuries, I was deeply grateful my mouth was empty. Laughed so hard and so loud my roomate heard me through two closed doors. Good Stuff!

I am very gareful as well to you for posting these two chapter updates! Can't wait for more and I can only hope you're connection gets stronger and more frequent.

Thanks

iamjmph01 posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2012 1:20am for Chapter 8

i want to thank you for taking the time to write these amazing stories. I have checked for updates daily, and will continue to do so, you stories are just that good. Cant wait for more!

mwinter posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2012 12:57am for Chapter 8

Here I sit and took a quick glance at the site to see if you had posted anything new. Low and behold you had. Not just one chapter but two. Thanks to you for posting. Awaiting more.

Greg Johnson posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2012 12:35am for Chapter 8

Thanks for posting the chapter. It was fun to read. Can't wait for more.

Michael Cornfoot posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2012 12:34am for Chapter 8

i love this story and i cant wait for the next chapter to be released

Michael10 posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2012 12:24am for Chapter 8

thanks for the updates.

I went back and read the first six chapters again, so keep up the good work. hopefully Perfect Slytherins and Konoha Legion will be next.

keep it up and know you still rock

greywizard posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2012 12:23am for Chapter 8

I LMAO reading this chapter, my friend, and I have to, very emphatically, insist that it is the funniest HP chapter I can ever remember reading!! ;-)

The line "Hey, it’s Dumbledore, everyone wave at him!" has now been elevated to one of the best character speeches I've ever been fortuante enough to read. ;-)

The only problem I can see with this chapter is that it has now created a new 'minimum level of greatness' we can expect for any subsequent works you write in the future. Not that that has ever been a problem for you before this, buddy.

Thanks for sharing this with us.

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2012 12:13am for Chapter 8

That was fun, seeing Harry do something that was entirely his own. I think he dealt honorably with Severus Snape, the man had made his own grave and at least had the fortitude to face up to the consequences of his actions (it doesn't make him a good man, just an honorable one). Finally, it's rather enjoyable to see "Team Potter" coming together so well; I suspect they'll cause considerable ripples where ever they go.

Finbar posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2012 12:08am for Chapter 8

I think, that the darkness of the murder of Snape, fittind in rather well. I'm liking where the story is going. Though, I am curious as to how Voldemort will be taken out. Harry is powerful and skilled, but I suspect, not as powerful and skilled as he would like to be. Which means, a fight would be nasty. I suspect you have something else planned. I look forward to it.

Eternity posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2012 11:13pm for Chapter 8

Awesome chapter, as for offing Snape, considering how Harry his grown, and the way he's grown it had to happen, the only question was when really, I think you handled it well. I and I'm sure everyone else will be looking forward to more of this in the future, also good luck with your connection, I know what its like to go from a good connection to next to nothing and its never fun

Lee Dickie posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2012 10:45pm for Chapter 8

A well written, darker more conflicted Harry.

LoneWolf282 posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2012 10:42pm for Chapter 8

One of my absolute favorite stories of all time. Can't get the updates fast enough. Have reread what's here several times. Never disappointed with anything I've found under the Jeconais banner. Keep up the good work!