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PandaWings posted a comment on Sunday 23rd April 2017 8:43am for Chapter 8

I like all the teasing and flirting between Harry and Michael.

i initially thought it was a 1-time thing, so I'm pleasantly surprised to see it again :)

RHJunior posted a comment on Sunday 29th January 2017 9:06am for Chapter 8

I could see Harry killing Snape, if he knew that Snape had himself actually killed someone. But outside of that--- it amounts to killing a man for being a git. So no this doesn't work.

OriksGaming posted a comment on Wednesday 24th June 2015 1:54pm for Chapter 8

Interesting thing you have going with Michael. I'm not that into slash, so I hope it just stays as a longstanding joke, which I think it will. It would be weird, extremely weird if it went further. Anyways, great work, keep it up!

kstchr posted a comment on Monday 24th November 2014 2:16am for Chapter 8

Exciting kick-boxing tournament! Some of the rules were contradictory, first saying that it's illegal to kick the back of the head, then in the next paragraph saying it's worth more points to kick the back of the head??????

You're one of the best fan fic writers I've ever read, seriously, so I always enjoy your work. Just watch the grammatical stuff and the spelling a bit more, such as to/too; loose/lose; choose/chose; you're/your -- for these can really make people cringe. I'm sorry if this screams criticism, but my thought is when a writer is as good as you are, mistakes like that just seem all the more glaring. I love your stories, and really hope to see some Harry & Ginny sometime...or a certain one of your steamy Harry/Ginny stories (the one about their enjoying their empty nest) finished, pretty please??? :)

noylj posted a comment on Monday 20th October 2014 7:21am for Chapter 8

Write up thoughts on just why Hogwarts is the worst boarding school in history? Not hard—just quote practically every class Harry has and every crime committed that Bumbles lets go (unless committed by a "good" guy). You would have to dig through a pit of Abraxan dropping to possibly find the a single hidden good thing about Hogwarts.

sh8ad8ow posted a comment on Friday 10th January 2014 10:41pm for Chapter 8

Excellent chapter, great surprice with the kickboxing competition, and is good to see you didn´t leave Kate forgoten.

David Thacker posted a comment on Monday 25th November 2013 7:11am for Chapter 8

Love how you write Gabrielle this. And if any every does their own version of this idea I hope that they are at least has good has this.

twilightwanderer posted a comment on Sunday 3rd February 2013 9:29am for Chapter 8

Just rereading this because of the new chapter, and I had a thought based on your rationale for choosing kick-boxing. When Harry gets to France he should do some cross-training in Savate, or maybe have him pick up a little Bartitsu over the summer if you want to go really obscure :-) As always, your stories are as good the third or fourth time through as they are the first. Cheers

Xylion posted a comment on Friday 4th January 2013 7:15pm for Chapter 8

This story is really good :D

Keep up the wonderful work !!

Tchouss

azurehart posted a comment on Wednesday 2nd January 2013 10:25am for Chapter 8

I've just read the 8 chapters you have up in one go staying up past 2 in the morning to do so. This is a wonderful idea. Too many people have Harry just using his wealth for clothes or maybe buying the Prophet and that's it. Loving Fred and George's take on keeping Harry alive with body guards and lessons in seduction. The food fight scene had me laughing so hard my dog fled the room. Thank you so much for a very enjoyable read!

butch6167 posted a comment on Tuesday 18th December 2012 4:51pm for Chapter 8

glad 2 see u r back in action. been 2 long.

santiln posted a comment on Tuesday 18th December 2012 6:13am for Chapter 8

2 great updates. As always this is one of the best ff WIP at the moment and the story that makes the most about Harry's money. I don't know why everybody makes him rich and then only buy material things for him or for the war. Never to enjoy life and make it better for his friends and himself.

I can't wait for your next update.

Greetings and Happy Holidays

Tutenstein posted a comment on Tuesday 4th December 2012 8:15pm for Chapter 8

I frankly don't understand the Fleur fixation you've got going when Kate seems to be doing all what a loving gf does for Harry even if she was an escort at the begining. Both Harry and Kate seem to be really emotionally invested in each other.

LordNemesis posted a comment on Thursday 29th November 2012 8:33am for Chapter 8

Not really sure what to say about this story. Its ok and its flows but dose it really get you wantting the next part. The trueth I have to say no it just leave me dry. Sorry will I read more of this story sure but will I be waitting for the next part no. Keep writeing your story and when it done I might read it as a whole.

heffronma4 posted a comment on Thursday 15th November 2012 5:17am for Chapter 8

This story is the BEST ! I look forward to the next exciting chapter. Until then thanks.

-Mark A Heffron ( Plymouth, UK )

brad posted a comment on Friday 9th November 2012 11:57pm for Chapter 8

Oh dear. I don't like this Harry. He's pushing all of my UGH buttons. Prostitutes. Murder. Flirting. Flirthing with a *male*. An earring, even! :-) Ugh.

I guess you're enjoying pushing him where no Jeconais!Harry has gone before, yes? BRING BACK OUR NICE!Harry!!!! :-)

Gabrielle's cute but a bit overdone on the hug-toy front I feel. And I don't like her candid reflection of Harry's sex life (see the above).

It's still an entertaining read, but a bit too silly/unlikeable for me in those and other places. 'Smasher', 'Crusher' and the rest?

I'll keep reading - your stuff is fun - but this story, these chapters, surprised me on the 'ugh' front. Don't push yourself and your Harry too far just for the sake of it Tim! Cheers.

Ancalador posted a comment on Friday 26th October 2012 9:21am for Chapter 8

Red Jacobson is now my god... or something. Thank you for updating one of my favorite stories (although a lot of your stories could be considered as favorites) and I look forward to any future updates.

00_Knight posted a comment on Wednesday 24th October 2012 11:59pm for Chapter 8

Great to read something of yours again!

Zamia posted a comment on Thursday 18th October 2012 6:49am for Chapter 8

Rereaf this yarn again and still get a good laugh out of it. So glad Hogwarts didn't try to soothe Harry's pain by saying "it was for the greater Good". Great interaction between the lot of them. Cheers.

Z

firedrakegirl posted a comment on Thursday 18th October 2012 5:02am for Chapter 8

This was wonderful!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!