DukeBrymin posted a comment on Tuesday 9th October 2012 2:34am for Chapter 8

Fabulous! And even fabulouser! Which I just added because my post had to be more than 10 characters.

wrhicks13 posted a comment on Tuesday 9th October 2012 1:49am for Chapter 8

i love you man

rowin posted a comment on Tuesday 9th October 2012 1:16am for Chapter 8

Great 2 chapters nice to see some new stuff looking forward to what comes out next.

supergirl3684 posted a comment on Tuesday 9th October 2012 12:54am for Chapter 8

Go Harry!! LOVED it!! 2 chapters in as many days! We're gonna get spoiled! LOL I was in class when I saw this was posted, sneaking in a check of my e-mail while the instructer talking about coding and i couldn't stop the smile! And then i had to read!!!

WhiteElfElder posted a comment on Tuesday 9th October 2012 12:17am for Chapter 8

I am greatly enjoying this story so far. Most of the humor is gone by this last chapter, but there are a few sweet spots. Harry has a bit of a cheating advantage because his magic will help to heal him as he rests. Can't wait for the next fight with the Ministry and to see them have their hats handed to them. We haven't heard much from Voldemort, but that is probably because the final task has not come up yet. I dread the cat fight that is going to come out between Kate and Fleur, but I think Fleur would be a better relationship match.

This story is remarkably just like one I have read on fanfiction . net and everything seems to identical up to Harry being thrown in jail where it stopped. I cannot remember what it was called, but I do not think it was the same name. Just thought you should know in case someone is posting your stuff there.

Zicou posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2012 8:26pm for Chapter 8

Awesome chapters!!!!

continuuuuuuuue,

Z.

Ben Russell-Gough posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2012 7:01pm for Chapter 8

Oddly enough, that's the best Snapedeath that I've read in a long time. It was all the more gripping that Snape had realised he had pushed Harry too far and had decided that he wasn't going to demean himself by running or making a pointless attempt to defend himself. This was a Harry who coldly took a life with premeditation. What is interesting is that it is a Harry who was aware that what he did was a sin and would be punishing himself for it for the rest of his life.

That bit of writing reminds me why you are one of the better writers out there in the HP verse. I have to say that I was losing interest in the fandom but you reminded me of what I like in it. Well done!

freakkonaleash posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2012 6:57pm for Chapter 8

really really good please keep up the good work. my fav scene was the drunk

TheCow posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2012 6:44pm for Chapter 8

Thanks for the new chapters. I was starting to get worried!

Nights_Silhouette posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2012 6:29pm for Chapter 8

A great couple of chapters, its great to see you alive and kicking. Keep it up.

John Wilburn posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2012 6:29pm for Chapter 8

Dear Tim,

I can't believe how good this story is! I sat down and read both chapters without stopping. I'm just glad that more than two chapters, because once I start read your stories I can't stop.

Thank you

John

Riegert8 posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2012 6:17pm for Chapter 8

Very good chapter

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2012 5:52pm for Chapter 8

Excellent chapter, made me wish there was another one ready when I reached the end.

Slytherin66 posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2012 5:26pm for Chapter 8

A great chapter and thanks for it.

I am glad Harry had a good night.

How Harry spoke to Gabrielle was well done, telling her he loved her was the perfect thing to say it’s not often Harry says those words to anyone but Gabrielle would greatly appreciate them especially as "I do love you" emphasises that he does and more so than the ladies he was with.

I adore the cute moments between Gabrielle and Harry but there are times I wish she was older as she might struggle to find someone who loves her as much as does Harry and she does deserve the best. Harry with his good nature, capacity and desire to love he really does need and deserve the intense and expressive love of a Veela. Harry would always know he is loved with a Veela and that is something he needs.

A lap dwelling Veela would make Harry’s day better after dealing with Snape. I am pleased Harry is using his necklace.

An informative conversation between Fleur and her sister about the nature of the relationship Gabrielle has with Harry and what Fleur could have with him. Gabrielle was direct but her words the truth. The joy a Harry hug gives her was sweet. I look forward to Harry/Fleur I am a big fan of the pairing.

Great lines "I will never ask my people to do something I wouldn’t do myself" and "Why stop when you could block?"

I am pleased at the fate of Snape and that he died with dignity as I think he would face death with great stoicism no matter what. A very effective way to deal with the body and some good will from giant man eating spiders is always good to have.

A nice line and a polite one "you’re a lady of negotiable affection"

A well done talk between Kate and Harry she really is an amazing friend, smart, insightful, logical and with great empathy. It was a good idea to mention Harry’s as often their memory can be manipulated or used to guilt trip or control Harry yet their expectations is something he needs to deal with. The pre-meditated murder was vital as well, Harry will have to kill Riddle so being prepared for it and why will make killing him easier.

The hug from Gabrielle was welcome as well.

Its unfortunate Harry told Hermione I am surprised she took it so well. Melissa is right Harry told too many people although I think Gabrielle would be aware of it but she obviously understands and still loves him regardless.

Yes its not often we see Fleur smile, she would look radiant I hope she will smile more as we have yet to really see the nice or softer side of her.

I am happy for Gabrielle she finally get to sleep with Harry and got to wake him up as that I think is something she would be good at. I bet Fleur enjoyed her long lie.

A brilliant way to pierce Gabrielle’s ears, Harry did the right thing; I am pleased he got his ear done as well. No pain is always a good thing so well done Harry ensuring Gabrielle did not hurt or get upset.

Harry took travelling in style to heart if he could dance while travelling and not miss a step, very impressive and a welcome change as Harry tends to find magical transport difficult.

Gabrielle perched on Smasher’s shoulders is always fun to imagine.

I am pleased Harry did not remove his necklace.

A great day for Harry he does not often have fun.

I had forgotten about the flirting between Harry and Michael it was well done and very entertaining as such banter is rarely done by Harry.

A Kate and Fleur teaming up would finish any man except Harry I can hope/dream of such a thing by stories end. There were most impressive.

Fleur would have good taste even if she would look good in anything.

"Gabrielle patted him consolingly, and then went back to devouring her food" and a good little detail to include as was how Gabrielle healed the bruising.

An excellent line one Harry should remember "You make your own luck." Or maybe someone was referring to the liquid luck potion.

Thank you for having Harry do something about Snape as its rare for him to do so even with Harry having every reason to deal with him.

Kick boxing is a change.

Very cool working at the school that was part of Hogwarts.

I have always thought Hogwarts was a terrible school aside from not being safe, the education is poor and there is nothing to do for most people, students would turn to the Dark Arts just for something to do.

Cheers for the two chapters, I am so very happy the story is continuing and I eagerly anticipate the next chapter.

DannyBoy2k posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2012 5:17pm for Chapter 8

So, it's Red's 'fault' that I'm reading this? And here I was thinking I had suddenly gotten mental powers, as I was on the site yesterday, and read other stories, while pondering if and when the next chapter was to come. Imagine my surprise when 'I' got not one but two today.

The Snape thing was HARSH, and I would expect it to affect Harry...but it certain was new and diffrent.

For general, and mostly useless, knowledge, Brass Monkeys have, originally tails, ears, nose or whiskers, and later balls, to freeze off, because of the cold, but it would need to be REALLY cold for that.

And, witches, originally thought to be in league with the devil, would have little to no maternal feeling at all, leaving their tit very 'cold' for any potential child to suckle at.

Thus, Brass Tits and Witches Monkeys, as it were.

Oh, and kick-boxing isn't a martial art? Since when? *curious* The only system I know of that isn't, is Krav Maga.

Pai posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2012 4:23pm for Chapter 8

Good chapters and fun to read. Tho im starting to wounder if gabby's going to end up some velee goddess with all the love she's getting.

Larry F posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2012 3:53pm for Chapter 8

"The bouts are judged on points. You get points for punches to the body, front side or back of the head, kicks to the body, full sweep — and if you do sweep, your hands and body can’t touch the floor. Kicks to the head, jumping kicks to the body get you more points, and the most points is for jumping kicks to the head.

"Illegal moves are dropping to the floor to avoid being hit, hitting the opponent in the back of the head, on the back, the neck or the shoulders, or the groin. No elbow strikes and spinning back fists either."

in the first paragraph, you say they get points for punches to the back of the head, and in the next, you say hitting the back of the head is an illegal move. So they get points for illegal hits?

Dale Dietzman posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2012 2:36pm for Chapter 8

Two excellent Chapters after a lon-n-n-ng pause. Glad to see new stuff going up for you again. I know you have maintained that you will never outdo some of your earlier work, but you don't have to. Keep writing and just explore new directions. Even the "Immortals" like Robert Heinlein and Arthur Clark didn't write their best work every time they wrote, from the view point of some fans, but they kept on writing, and that was what was most important.

Sibling Creature posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2012 2:06pm for Chapter 8

'"Fleur and Harry sitting in a tree," Gabrielle chanted happily, "F — U — C — …"

"Gabrielle Anne Delacour!"'

This had me laughing loudly. :-)

Amamama posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2012 1:58pm for Chapter 8

WOW. Wowowowow. What a treat! What a fab day. I even managed to be quite productive and get stuff done before I was sucked into this awesomely fun fanfiction world. Yay for an original solution to the Snape problem, I liked Hogwarts helping Harry.

Thanks a bunch, Tim! And please, do write up your thoughts on Hogwarts as boarding school. I've nothing to compare it with, but it still seems pretty crappy to me. :-)