Gseven posted a comment on Monday 12th September 2011 7:50am for Chapter 5

More!Must have MORE!

Tarja posted a comment on Saturday 10th September 2011 10:48am for Chapter 5

Can't wait for more!!!

gregstar posted a comment on Tuesday 6th September 2011 11:58pm for Chapter 5

Really enjoy every update to this story although I would have loved to see the twins and Gary more involved together like in the first chapters.

Second task next time round?

The Resident posted a comment on Wednesday 31st August 2011 4:35am for Chapter 5

As always, another excellent story. Yes, you could probably end it at the end of this chapter, but my imagination is fed by others. I can 'see' and 'hear' what is happening in a story when guided by a talent such as yours. What I'm trying to say is that I have enjoyed the story to this point and I eagerly look forward to more. Keep up the great work.

Prince Charon posted a comment on Friday 26th August 2011 5:41pm for Chapter 5

Its good. I like it a lot, and hope to see more.

Soon, please.

sarahgirl12384 posted a comment on Friday 26th August 2011 2:04am for Chapter 5

Love this story... I really like Harry's attitude! I love the characters that you have created... I think they really add good depth to the story!

Tyanne posted a comment on Monday 22nd August 2011 4:16am for Chapter 5

*snert* Awesome chapter. I love your characterizations...especially the twins. I find them to be a riot. And your note at the end...hilarity abound.

Mac452 posted a comment on Sunday 21st August 2011 4:05pm for Chapter 5

Love the story, i mean sincerely. Also The allegic to fir trees line was fantastic.

Addlcove posted a comment on Wednesday 17th August 2011 11:05pm for Chapter 5

just re-read this, awesome story I love the character interaction you create.

Hobbs1985 posted a comment on Tuesday 16th August 2011 9:18am for Chapter 5

Great Story! Keep up the good work.

kittua posted a comment on Sunday 14th August 2011 6:02am for Chapter 5

excellent story. Once again hope for an update soon. I do believe you have an excellent imagination and could make a living off of your writing. Update soon please!

jafo2008 posted a comment on Thursday 11th August 2011 8:24am for Chapter 5

great chapter

vhemacha posted a comment on Tuesday 9th August 2011 8:56pm for Chapter 5

This is a great story, and I'm really enjoying it. It's exciting, fun, and makes you smile. Looking forward to the next update!

Tenchifew posted a comment on Monday 8th August 2011 9:29pm for Chapter 5

Glad to see new chapters of this very unusual and well written story! The plot develops nicely and some I am sure that the second task won't o too well, considering the hostage situation.
Thank you for writing.

Phoenix Lord posted a comment on Saturday 6th August 2011 3:31pm for Chapter 5

Brilliant story!!!! Need more......Please???!!!

DannyBoy2k posted a comment on Saturday 6th August 2011 3:22pm for Chapter 5

I LIKE it. But then, I've liked pretty much everything you've written. I do have a problem, though. See, you put up chapter 4 and chapter 5 within 14 days of each other...and now I fear I'll have to wait MUCH longer for chapter 6. And that makes me sad. :-P Please write more, and soon, is all.

Children-of-Bodom posted a comment on Wednesday 3rd August 2011 10:37pm for Chapter 5

You know you are one of my favorite authors in the whole FanDom (and have been for more than 6 years now) but still I hesistated for a long time before reading this for a reason I can no longer recall.

So today I was looking forward to a 5 hour train-ride and was browsing fanficauthors.net to look for a good story to re-read. I found this one decided to give it a try and not re-read something else. I ended up reading it in one go without taking any notice of anything happening around me. The time went by in a rush.

Now I am back at home and have to say, that you AGAIN outdid yourself with this fic. I absolutely loved it and I see me browsing ffa.net next year looking for stories to re-read on a long train-ride and chosing this one :)

You rule! Keep up the good work and thank you for sharing your incredible talent.

Ringo666 posted a comment on Wednesday 3rd August 2011 6:59pm for Chapter 5

Every time I think your stories can't get any better, you keep surprising me. From the very first one I read (This Means War), your stories have made me laugh and brought me to tears. Whenever I'm having a really bad day, I come home and pull up one of your stories and relax in a place where there are real heroes and good does ultimately win over evil. Thank you for keeping us amazed and delighted.

mystara123 posted a comment on Tuesday 2nd August 2011 12:23am for Chapter 5

Another great chapter sorry i havent reviewed in so long been busy helpin my stepfather build onto my parents place if the question in your tweet was for me about the 3 story updates they are Hogwarts Dawn REALLY great story and Konoha Legion another great and Perfect Slytherins i look forwar eagerly to your updayes i just wanted a day to look forward to instead of looking 2 or 3 times a day thanks for the great chapters

reader1writer1 posted a comment on Thursday 28th July 2011 10:39pm for Chapter 5

I'm truly enjoying this Harry, even though he's so much older than 14. I can't wait to learn what he does next--Dumbledore's going to be SO surprised *g*