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Mistress of Potions posted a comment on Friday 9th June 2017 1:20pm for Chapter 5

I know this is going to sound really nit-picky, but a roundhouse kick is with the top or ball of the foot, not the inside of the knee.

OriksGaming posted a comment on Wednesday 24th June 2015 12:26pm for Chapter 5

I keep forgetting to say it, but your twin speak is masterfully done. It just feels natural. I agree with most of what you said during the first part of the chapter, I didn't need the explanation as I understood pretty much all of it, though I'd never thought of it that way with Bill lol. I really want to continue reading so this review was super short(by my standards). I'm still loving the story. Keep it up ;)

Aries-Antares posted a comment on Monday 18th May 2015 1:50pm for Chapter 5

It would be nice if you did not need a wand though. One of the biggest weaknesses would be gone. Without a wand they are just muggles and easier to kill or control.

kstchr posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 10:44pm for Chapter 5

Wow, I loved the insightfulness of Harry's little speech, explaining everything they need to know about Magic. I also very much enjoyed Gred & Forge's meeting at the beginning of the chapter!!

noylj posted a comment on Monday 20th October 2014 4:32am for Chapter 5

And Molly really is a shrew...

sh8ad8ow posted a comment on Friday 10th January 2014 3:16am for Chapter 5

Great chapter and explanation on Magic and how it works it was simple, to the point and made sense in the HP-verse.

gtgrouch posted a comment on Wednesday 2nd October 2013 1:01am for Chapter 5

" . . . meeting of the Weasley twins . . . "

I love it!

qadoshkyrie posted a comment on Sunday 14th July 2013 9:03pm for Chapter 5

Gah! Really! Did you have to point out that you are foreshadowing? I sincerely hope that that isn't about the wandless, because that is something that has bothered me forever and a day, it seems!

Keep up the writing. =c)

gara5289 posted a comment on Saturday 28th July 2012 8:05am for Chapter 5

You write the best Weasley Twins ever.

Katsuhito posted a comment on Monday 14th May 2012 8:46pm for Chapter 5

Once again, I'm re-reading one of your fics. :)

Something caught my attention in this chapter, and that's the name of the maitre'd of that "top london resaurant." For a minute, I thought I recognised the name as one of Gordon Ramsey's employees, but after double checking, I realised it was his head sommelier who was named Jon (at Claridge's, I think, although it could be the RGR), and not the maitre'd. Anyway, is that restaurant based on a real one, or just coincidence? I'm assuming the latter, but it would be neat if it was the former.

ILikeToRead posted a comment on Thursday 5th April 2012 5:00am for Chapter 5

Great to see the interaction between Harry and the Delacour family with the exception of Fleur. Thanks for sharing!

jules3677 posted a comment on Tuesday 6th March 2012 9:29am for Chapter 5

The twins annual meeting, absurdly riveting to read. Harry's take on magic the best analysis I have ever read. Was it original or related to something else with magic subsituted where another word/item should be? Harry's wine venture should make for merriment. Great chapter.

Mathew McCrillis posted a comment on Sunday 4th March 2012 6:09am for Chapter 5

It was a lot of fun, now I am moving on to the next chapter!

Cheers!

BioHazard82 posted a comment on Saturday 3rd March 2012 9:47pm for Chapter 5

Great chapter.

Celebrithil posted a comment on Monday 20th February 2012 5:07pm for Chapter 5

I feel a bit sad for the Weasleys, especially Arthur, because, if they really are like that in this story, he's tied up with his family, while Gred and Forge can get away. The name thing, though, now that was sad. I wonder if they're going to bring it up at some point - possibly while sitting down and speaking with the family, before all the Weasley decide to grow up. I liked the idea of Harry noting he needed to get an actual vineyard to do something with, once he began spinning tales about it. And, of course, who better than Christophe to help with that? I laughed at the "it’s the sort of thing that only an Englishman emigrating to France would buy" part, since he seems to have forgotten that it's exactly what Harry is. I rather liked his way to make a buying decision, too. And Renée seems like a nice woman (even if you misspelled her name three times out of four ;-) ). Was Harry making his speech about magic along as he was speaking, or did he think about it before? Or possibly had it already with Sidney?

John Wilburn posted a comment on Friday 10th February 2012 1:47am for Chapter 5

Tim

Ok, this is the third or fifth time I've read this chapter and it's just as good every time as the first time. What I'd like to know is what happened to Chapter Six. It was here before you changed the format. I'm really enjoying this story, so Thank you very much for all the hours of enjoyment.

Sincerely,

John Wilburn

jknezek posted a comment on Sunday 5th February 2012 6:56pm for Chapter 5

I love this story and was thrilled to stumble across chapter 6 last night. A great addition and I hope it posts "for real" soon. I read it quickly while feeding my twin infant boys, so I didn't catch everything figuring I'd see it posted today. So far no luck, but I feel lucky to have read what I did.

Wolf470 posted a comment on Friday 30th December 2011 4:26am for Chapter 5

Plus Mrs. Weasley is obnoxious, loud and loving but with her way of doing things it's less Petunia Dursley and more magical Mrs. Cleaver. If you don't know that referance think of a stay-at-home mom that has raised 3+ children.

Isura posted a comment on Saturday 10th December 2011 2:34am for Chapter 5

Superb story and I love the way you write. The way Harry develops in this story is the bet example. I'm glad you actually tried to make him stronger mentally as well as magically and not just focus on one aspect of his devlopment as so many have done before you. I especially love how Harry treats Kate and many of his other dates in this story. Sort of makes you wish you had a man like that for yourself huh...........Anyway I cant wait to see who he ends up with if he gets paired up at all. I've read some of your other stories and love Harry and Gabrielle pairing the best with Harry and Daphne close behind. I would love to see more stories in that pairing but no pressure......Keep up the good work.ISURA.

makieus posted a comment on Thursday 8th December 2011 11:17pm for Chapter 5

Every couple of months I come back to this story and read it. Love it. Thank you for creating this website.