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PandaWings posted a comment on Sunday 23rd April 2017 8:18pm for Chapter 11

I love how spontaneous and playful your Harry is, such as when he leaves the discussion of Aurora's pay raise up to them, or the moment when Dumbledore is suspicious of when Harry puts his arm around him as they enter in the morning.

They are refreshing to read, and makes your characters feel more rounded and 3D

OriksGaming posted a comment on Wednesday 24th June 2015 3:01pm for Chapter 11

Wow, I didn't expect that at all. Can't wait for him with Sinatra or Fleur, I am a male teenager, and so I completely support Harry with a hot blonde. ^_^ Great work and keep it up.

gtgrouch posted a comment on Friday 30th May 2014 2:20am for Chapter 11

Oh my! You did give Hogwarts a personality enough chapters ago that I can't complain about it, but I think the plot was complex enough!

WhiteElfElder posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2014 4:30pm for Chapter 11

This is going to be very interesting. I have read another story where Hogwarts manifests a female child's body and call Harry her daddy. In that story the body spends a lot of time learning to be real and then shows up to Harry when she feels she has mastered the skills we take for granted.

K Gibbs Winters posted a comment on Thursday 27th March 2014 6:33pm for Chapter 11

But, but, but... where's the rest of it.....?

Luna'sWrackspurt posted a comment on Wednesday 26th February 2014 1:17am for Chapter 11

I love your story! I can't wait for the update

MrHolbyta posted a comment on Thursday 20th February 2014 7:23am for Chapter 11

I love this story. It's a different confident Harry than I'm used to. I was sad not to hear from you at all for so long. I was very pleased with Enslavement's first chapter, but I hope you haven't forsaken this story at such a key moment.

Hoping your muse returns,

MrHolbyta

Starman800 posted a comment on Tuesday 18th February 2014 2:43pm for Chapter 11

Great story, Please update. :)

Katherine posted a comment on Thursday 13th February 2014 6:41am for Chapter 11

Can you let me know if there is going to be an update to this story soon? Your coming up to the year mark of the last time you updated. How was Dawn Hogwarts made? Was it Harry's magic or Harry and Hogwarts magic together. Or Hogwarts magic through Harry as a focus? Is Dawn Hogwarts Harry's daughter biologicly? Where did Hogwarts get Dawns DNA from?

Katie

Parkergirl69@hotmail.com

grookill posted a comment on Wednesday 12th February 2014 8:17am for Chapter 11

Wow.

I have no idea why I have not read this before, especially since I consider "Hope" and "WKGQ" as being two of the best examples of Harry Potter fanfiction.

I'm glad you are going to get more serious in future chapters as I think there has been a lack of conflict in the last few. (No, I don't consider the kick boxing championship to be a conflict - it was a plot point to put Harry into a particular state, to gain legitimacy for a future event.) Harry needs to have a few set backs, a nemisis, a challenge.

Two of the things that really work for me is how you are developing Harry's relationships with Fleur. I have no idea where it's going, and I have no idea of where I would want the relationship to go. The other thing I like are the "body guards" because they exist, but I do wish you would flesh them out a bit more as right now they are pretty much all interchangable. Perhaps you could have a few paragraphs of "a day in the life of *sher", it might be kind of fun to read how the day unfolds from their point of view.

Two requests though, first, please keep the humor; and second, don't go all out with angst.

I hope to see more of this soon! It's been an addicting read so far!

sh8ad8ow posted a comment on Saturday 11th January 2014 5:23am for Chapter 11

excellent story so far please continue again soon.

kewllewk posted a comment on Sunday 22nd December 2013 3:16am for Chapter 11

For some reason(possibly intentionally), this whole chapter seems to have a sense of finality to it. I think it's because of the sense of momentum combined with so many things wrapping up. I would be disapointed but understanding if you ended the whole thing right here. Understanding because this really does feel like an end point, and yet dissapointed because despite that I love watching/reading about this Harry shaking things up, as well as feeling that there are still things that could be done. I was in fact greatly looking forward to his meeting with the veela court. The fact that the tri-wizard still isn't resolved and the whole Dawn scene nearly assures me that there are still things you plan to do, so I'm not overly worried. I look forward to any continuation you decide to put towards this story, but I feel like I could be fairly content to find the finish was here.

Wolf470 posted a comment on Monday 25th November 2013 10:04pm for Chapter 11

I can only say - wow. I probably could have seen this coming but I was enjoying the ride and mindreading takes it out of a fella. Great story. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.

David Thacker posted a comment on Monday 25th November 2013 8:17am for Chapter 11

That was great. I just reread this story and just WOW!!! Please can we have some more.

M4RKL4R posted a comment on Monday 25th November 2013 7:13am for Chapter 11

WOW!!! Great writing.

I liked the very apt comparison of Harry to Batman and Ironman.

Please keep up the good work.

-M4RKL4R

red jacobson posted a comment on Saturday 16th November 2013 11:07pm for Chapter 11

Hey Tim; it's been several months, and I remembered you saying that you were planning on updating a little while back, after your relatives left. Any news on that front?

Red

thetaxzombie posted a comment on Sunday 3rd November 2013 5:42pm for Chapter 11

This is one of my top three HP stories. The way you've portrayed Harry sings to me. He is someone that can and will change the world. For the betterment of all, not the one. A good soul, a guardian, a protector. It is a truly pleasing read. I do hope that you will someday continue it. It deserves to be completed. Thank you for what you have posted so far. It was brilliant.

Vision-138 posted a comment on Saturday 2nd November 2013 2:29am for Chapter 11

Wonderful story I enjoyed reading it. Can't wait for more.

Jason

Starman800 posted a comment on Thursday 31st October 2013 1:17pm for Chapter 11

This is a GREAT Story, Please write more.

GBTtown posted a comment on Thursday 24th October 2013 3:07pm for Chapter 11

Wonderful story. I was at first going to read the story and accept that during the Hogwarts years the Twins would help guide Harry through the Tournament, then conquering Voldie and in between laughs were had by all. Which, if I remember correctly has been done at least a couple of times. The great "Financial Plan For the Future" in still up for judgement. It is a bit too close to another fic's "Great Idea" but, again, I will reserve judgement until I see how your story proceeds.

The Kate character is a great addition, again, that has been done similarly before, but I would not have necessarily drawn a line in the sand about a Harry/Kate/Fluer ship. It seems, as you have written them, that they compliment one another and support one another. Also, I can see the distinct possibility of Gabby joining the family once she is old enough. No, I am not considering this should be turned into some smirking, deviated Harry/Harem story. Instead I keep looking at the characters and there individual strengths and weaknesses as you have written them. They all seem compatible.

I like the superhero comparison as long as he really doesn't outfit himself in tights and a cape. That would be too over the top. The manner in which you treated the death of Snape was inspired! Dark but not unredeemable Harry action.

Hogwarts manifesting a human body is not new so I am reserving judgement on how you treat this. No, she is not human, she cannot join in some harem fantasy!