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Ronnie McMains posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 2:30pm for Chapter 7

Sounds like someone's about to get a reminder of just who killed Voldie. My question is: Just how much of France will Harry leave?

Nice how you put Narcissa in her place: The head of Gringotts London, arguably the most powerful goblin in the country, and his unofficial chief advisor on wizard affairs is an effective 17-year-old who's only been awake for a few days. I did like the bit where Grapplegus asked if Harry was part-goblin.

Too bad about Hedwig. At least it was peaceful.

Not sorry at all about Flint, however. Comes to recruit Potter, then states in front of two competitors (one an ex-Hufflepuff, and the other a woman) that he's going to break Harry and Gabbi up so he can move in on Gabbi? Maybe he's lucky Harry got there first!

Cedric and Cho's arguments about Quidditch just reiniforce one of the problems of Harry doing it for a living; are they coming to see Harry play, or the BWL?

Loved the matter-of-fact reactions Harry's been giving everybody when they say "You're Harry Potter!", especially Natalie's here and Mr. Lovegood's last chapter. I imagine there'll be quite an angrier version in the next chapter however, more "you've kidnapped my girlfriend, and that is
not a safe place to stand. I'm Harry Potter. Look me up."

Just noticed something; when Narcissa is talking to Harry in Gringotts, she mentions she's the wife, mother, and sister to people who have tried to kill him. That last doesn't fit, unless she's referring to Bella being a DE in general, because wasn't she in Azkaban when Harry made Tom an ex-dark lord, which killed all the DEs too?

...it showed starkly that the world really had changed while he was unconsciousness.


I think that should be 'unconscious.'

Loved the first year; Natalie Jones, Heir of Hermione. :) You know, last time I saw someone saying, "I'm a good girl" like that, something blew up right after...Poor Minerva though, giving one of the New Marauders free run through her House dorm like that...

All in all, great story, and I'll be sitting on the edge of my seat until next week, waiting for the exciting conclusion (kinda like I am for Dr. Who, but that's only another 2-3 days).

Jeconais replied:

Thanks for the typo point out - that's now fixed.

As I went to bed last night, I wondered if anyone would pick up on that. I noticed it just before I posted it, but was to tired to change it.

I think at some stage I'll have to do a:

"you're Harry Potter!"

"Yes, but only at night, during the day I'm a mild mannered reported for the Daily Prophet" ...

jono74656 posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 2:20pm for Chapter 7

I think I just ruptured something trying not to laugh!
"A Wizard's Staff" has to be the best song for anyone to sing in Hogwarts.

I like the justification for 'invading' France, not that any is needed.

amulder posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 2:14pm for Chapter 7

One Week More, we can make it....

Yunaine posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 2:12pm for Chapter 7

Hermione's scheme to get Harry together with Harry is brilliant, since she would definitely want to have Harry happy when he wakes up.

Hedwig's demise was well done, another reminder to Harry of what he missed out on...

I've never read the Discworld series so I've never seen the song, it was fun though. Never bought the books because I find them too expensive for such small books, perhaps my loss :p.

"Harry is invading France" made my evening. Exaggeration of kids, got to love it :P

If I missed anything, it's because I'm half asleep, so I'll blame the other half.

Philipe posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 2:05pm for Chapter 7

ROFL!!

Still laughing about that song.. it was hilarious.. I like Natalie a lot. She seems like a fun girl :D:D Very interesting new character..

Loved Albus prank, and the reason behind it.. Tho i wouldn't want to be him when H. finds out.. *Chuckles*

I liked that you humanized the goblins.. makes for more interesting conversations.. not so sure about Narcisa on a long time commitment..

All in all, a great fun chapter.. the prank really was awesome..

redjacobson posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 1:53pm for Chapter 7

Naughty Naughty Albus! *GRIN*

I have to say that losing Hedwig was a kick in the gut, though!

I'm sorry that there is only one more chapter of this story, hopefully you have the sequel already being beta'd so we can see what happens next.

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