Happily Ever After
Chapter 7
By Jeconais
Reviews
DrT posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 5:41pm for Chapter 7
Just one more chapter? Can't wait. It was nice to see Harry operating on his own so well, and making a new friend
kate19 posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 5:41pm for Chapter 7
you and your ways!! absolutely loved that song!! always the humor, love it!! can't wait until the last chapter, so that i can read the whole story in one go!! bye p.s. hope you don't have problems churning out that last chapter and that we may be happy with another of your stories succesfully completed(feeling a bit sqeaumish with saying all those sappy things, but sometimes my weird part of the brains take over!!).
Kortir posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 5:40pm for Chapter 7
Highly amused, as always. :D Thanks man, for your amazing devotion to this story. It's been a good ride, and I look forward to the final installation next week. Thanks for the great reading!
riegert8 posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 5:27pm for Chapter 7
I think that it something that Harry would hire Narcissa, but the good news for her is that she debt free with doing something that will hurt her proud. Wow for the time being that Harry would own Malfoy manor, that should drive Draco around the bend. It seem that Harry is becoming a very good businessman and hiring an lot of people, I look forward to who Harry hired next. It very sad that Harry's first friend died Hedwig was a very loyal owl, Hedwig stayed with Harry to her final days. I find the talk with Cedric very interesting, but I thought it was more interesting the fight between Cho and Cedric. Well Gabrielle is kidnapped and it funny that she went to her parents house, since Gabrielle is the only mention that is being held I wonder if the parents won't let Gabrielle leave their home it be one way keeping her away from Harry. Dumbledore prove that he is a low life by letting take the longest trip possible, a girl is being held as a prisoner and he wants payback.
ladyimmortal posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 5:13pm for Chapter 7
LOVEly :D.
Very Lovely.
Viridian posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 5:10pm for Chapter 7
Yeah, I smelled a rat in the sudden trip to France.
That prank had me breathless with laughter. A great tribute to Terry Pratchett.
So... was it Hermione reading that to Harry while he was asleep? Not sure who else would have such reading tastes.
Andrew Niehaus posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 5:08pm for Chapter 7
Ah, the parents are the villians. Of course. And now Gabby is locked up in an ivory tower...
Great chapter. Can't wait for the last one!
Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 5:04pm for Chapter 7
*laughs* Ah, yes, more fun times all around. I wonder how many years it will be 'til Princess Holdings controls a massive chunk of the wizarding world? I love the business negotiations and pranking. Hermione's revelation about Hedwig was sad though, given all that she went through with Harry, not totally unexpected.
The kidnapping of Gabrielle is going to prove a major mistake on someone's part and I daresay Harry will prove it. I rather suspect that where ever the kidnappers are, that territory is going to have to just look the other way 'til after Harry departs as he's going to provide a vivid demonstration of why you shouldn't stand in his way.
DJ posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 4:58pm for Chapter 7
Grate chapter. But I still do not know who the "Bad Guy" is and I hate to feal dumb thanks for the wondorful story see ya next week.
Galadrion posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 4:11pm for Chapter 7
To quote someone - I forget just who - "Well, if you're feeling pithy, thtop taking it out on uth!" *Grin* Theriouthly, great chapter, and I'm with most of the rest of the commenters: there are a lot more stories waiting here to be written, so I hope this - and any sequels - continue for a while.
Lon Huey posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 3:27pm for Chapter 7
I'll quit complaining about the lack of card playing now.
A great build up to, I'm sure, a great climax. Can't wait to see the summation and build up to Castles.
Michael10 posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 3:27pm for Chapter 7
Pithy would be good, but great work is better, and that's what you keep putting up. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter, and yes, Terry Pratchett is a literary god.
jilumasam posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 3:26pm for Chapter 7
Nice......
Invading France! That's a bit of a surprise!
Lady-Hope posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 3:20pm for Chapter 7
wowowowowowowowowowowowow!!! this is totally the best chapter so far for this story! i swear to god, if u dont have a sequel for this i will hunt u down and force u at gunpoint top write one. then again...that might not make for a very good writing atmosphere...hmmm...
anyway, fav parts:
-fred and george. they r amazing.
- OMFG!! the thing w/ nat and albus is gonna rock!!
-and the song...was is jst me or did that have some very perverted references in it? rotflmfao
beuatiful.
i wish there was more.
as for the evil dude...im leaning towards malfoy or the psychiatrist, but u r known to suprise me...
Crys posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 3:12pm for Chapter 7
Narcissa as [i]Sirius's[/i] social secretary? Oh, that'll be quite a kick at the pureblood social order.
That's sad about Hedwig, but fitting.
> I’ve got a three o’clock appointment with a ferret."
> "Have fun."
> "You know I will," she smirked.
Oh, can we [i]please[/i] have a follow up look at how she deals with him?
I rather liked Natalie. Hestia's kid? Ah, you answered that later.
> "Yup. And you know, I just had a crazy idea."
> "Should I hide?"
*evil grin* Oh, this could be a running gag.
He keeps saying that to different people. They keep coming back with different answers. "At least give me a head start on my escape." "Congratulations! I knew you could do it."
> we agreed that we wouldn’t even ask for a separate changing room if he joined.
*violent coughing* Cho should be thanking her lucky stars that Gabbi didn't hear that.
Oh, and Cho "changed teams"? ;)
> "And us," Cedric continued. "The Wanderers
Weren't the Wigtown Wanderers the team with the dirtiest reputation? I'd suspect Flint would be part of that crowd.
> "Harry," Natalie called. She’d been waiting around the corridor.
For the hours that the meeting with AD had taken?
Ah, another of your mysterious sig lines shows up.
Fun stuff.
Silo posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 3:09pm for Chapter 7
god i cant wate for chapter 8
Rick D Gale posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 3:03pm for Chapter 7
Oh, This is just SO GOOD!
I know you said there was only one more chapter left, but as far as I'm concerned, you have more then enough material to go on for several more chapters or books.
The prospects of stories regarding Albus and his wife; or Padma and Dobby's trials int their resturant; or the adventures of Su Li and the twins (not to mention Harry and Gabrielle taking over the magical world) would give untold hours of entertainment to potter-heads the world over!
You are a very talented writer! I salute your skill and talent!
I look forward to the next chapter!
rdgale
Nic Clarke posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 2:41pm for Chapter 7
I like it - best chapter so far (IMHO, of course). Possibly because it's a bit more 'traditional' than 'fairy tale' - not that the earlier chapters have been bad, just that the fic has a more unusual premise than most, and takes a bit of getting used to.
I'm sure Nanny Ogg is cackling somewhere - any chance of the Hedgehog Song in the last chapter?
UdderPD posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 2:34pm for Chapter 7
I think that this story keeps getting better and better.
You seem to want to write Fairy Story's; Princess was a Fairy Story! Please consider finishing it.
TTFN UdderPD
Deborahsu posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 5:45pm for Chapter 7