wavelink99 posted a comment on Thursday 26th June 2008 8:20pm for Chapter 6

You almost had me fooled with the who is the bad guy question, but you can't trick me! Nope, I saw right through that ploy. Doris is the bad guy! Never trust someone named Doris...seriously don't.

Jiapa posted a comment on Thursday 26th June 2008 8:11pm for Chapter 6

Lovely chapter again. I can't believe you're only planning two more chapters, though. I want to see not only all the clever plans that Harry and Gabrielle have, but also the outcome of those plans.

I also want to see Hermione's confrontation with Gabrielle's shrink, and Gabrielle's redefinition of herself, and I have a hard time imagining you fitting all that into just two more chapters.

*wry grin* Regardless, I'll read and enjoy the next two chapters and be grateful for them, even if I don't get any more in this universe. Thank you.

Gardengirl posted a comment on Thursday 26th June 2008 8:05pm for Chapter 6

*cheers loudly*

Yet again, you had me laughing, hard, out loud. My dogs, however, are none too pleased with you just now.

Ken Warner posted a comment on Thursday 26th June 2008 7:40pm for Chapter 6

Just so dang much fun - Gred and Forge did just fine on the speech - nice balance on the jokes - love the way you handled Dumbledore - that was an instant classic.
The numbers joke and the lederhosen looks as though you intended it to be On Harry and Luna...??

thanks for sharing

Lady-Hope posted a comment on Thursday 26th June 2008 7:19pm for Chapter 6

maybe im just dense but i really have no clue. i didnt get it in TMW either...

i like the story but gabbi annoys me. she just seems...i dunno but somethign about her annoys me.

deathzealot posted a comment on Thursday 26th June 2008 6:49pm for Chapter 6

Let me guess the Idiot psychiatrist is the so called bad guy. Heh! I wonder...

Lon Huey posted a comment on Thursday 26th June 2008 6:26pm for Chapter 6

I'm starting to get very impatient with the lack of card playing.

A Luna flash is all well and good, and it appears Harry has the necessary knowlege of the game. Isn't it time the cards were played?

Absolutely LOVED the exchange w/ Logutious.

Wonderbee31 posted a comment on Thursday 26th June 2008 6:24pm for Chapter 6

Most excellent indeed. Great to see an Albus who is really trying as a person, and is actually coming across as a man, instead of the overblown manipulator of so many fics as well as canon. Really enjoyed the moments in the pensieve and Harry's reactions to Gabbi and her development over the eyars. The wedding scene was well donw, with a bit of sadness present because Harry wasn't there. Overall warm and well done.

Deborahsu posted a comment on Thursday 26th June 2008 6:14pm for Chapter 6

I am loving this story! It's fast-paced and silly, yet serious. It's cohesive and just plain fun!

riegert8 posted a comment on Thursday 26th June 2008 6:03pm for Chapter 6

It nice that after so many years that Hermione still have a need to protect Harry, I nice that Gabrielle is going to talk with her upset parents but I find it odd that Hermione would have a portkey ready.It almost like Hermione knew that Gabrielle would not say no, I would love to hear the talk between Gabrielle and her parents. I find it interesting the couple talk that Harry has with Dumbledore, you have to feel bad for Dumbledore that his wife left him because he neglected her way to long.It something else that Harry get the chance to talk with Albus wife Doris Dumbledore and giving her the chance to tell Albus the pain that he caused her, it been 30 years since he talk to her last and lot of thing could change. I really was waiting for McGonagall ask Harry where Dumbledore was, It be interesting why Doris went by the last name of Jones so many years it seem to me that she did not want to be found. Doris may have stop Dumbledore from making some mistake but we never know since they were not together, there is no chance to changed the past. It show great trust that Gabrielle would let Harry have the key to the pensive and let him see her memory's, it is interesting that Gabrielle would give Harry a updated year by year. It good that Harry get the chance to see Ron & Hermione wedding, but sad at the same time that Harry have miss this special day for his best friends. It nice that Harry would stop by to talk with Ginny and give her an interview, the best thing about the interview that Ginny got a pay raised.

jilumasam posted a comment on Thursday 26th June 2008 6:01pm for Chapter 6

"is it any clearer who the bad guy is now?"

Nope, I'm completely clueless here!

Having said that, I'm just along for the story...which is pretty good!!!!!

Thanks

Lizzy :)

Silo posted a comment on Thursday 26th June 2008 5:45pm for Chapter 6

kool man i want to see what happens next i hope u update sooner

kb0 posted a comment on Thursday 26th June 2008 5:32pm for Chapter 6

Some nice background and some very funny bits there, especially the F&G speech. Just 2 more chapters? Bummer!

Bad guy? There's a bad guy in this story? Are you sure? :-) Based on this chapter, I'd have to say either Gabbi's parents (probably her dad) as she left and didn't come back, or Hermy with her pyscho-claptrap and trying to put poor Gabbi in "a box" with her know-it-all attitude. (shrug) I guess you'll have to surprise me.

Thanks for sharing! Kevin

Mrs.TiffanyPotter posted a comment on Thursday 26th June 2008 5:27pm for Chapter 6

It's nice to know that Gabrielle is not a scociopath like we thought. Here's hoping we get to see Hermione take down the Idiot doctor that diagnosed her.

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Thursday 26th June 2008 5:26pm for Chapter 6

*snicker* Ohh, that was a fun chapter. Ron & Hermione's wedding was both touching and, with Fred & George's speech, rather amusing. The time at the Quibbler was also amusing and I loved the interview he gave Ginny. But, the best part, by far, was when he got the drop on Albus and shipped him off to his neglected wife; I daresay he may not return to the school for a while. *chuckle* Hermione's take on that psychiatrist was amusing and likely accurate. 'Twill be interesting to see how Harry being awake and "moving and shaking" changes Gabrielle's perceptions; I'm not sure it'll change her actions.

Shepherd posted a comment on Thursday 26th June 2008 5:02pm for Chapter 6

Bad guy? My only guess is that Gabrielle's psychologist was purposefully trying to turn her into a sociopath. If so, then Hermoine may be in trouble when she confronts him.

Aberbadger posted a comment on Thursday 26th June 2008 4:50pm for Chapter 6

beautiful! Absolutely beautiful! Although you forgot the one about the length of the best man's speech being portentous as to how long the groom lasts making love to his wife their first time as a married couple. Although that one usually comes at the start of the best man's speech, and is almost invariably followed by the best man saying thank you and sitting down for a moment!!' may i just say, however, that i absolutely adore your rendition of luna, and that i have rarely seen her portrayed better by anyone, (although, if you ever get the chance, read anything by nonjon, or rorschach's blot as they are both completely hilarious)

James Barber posted a comment on Thursday 26th June 2008 4:42pm for Chapter 6

Hey I wanna see Luna's Breast too! and ginny, and hermione's, and fluers, and lavenders, and padma's, and parvarti's, and susan, and hannah, and daphne, and tracey, and cho's, and katie's, and alicia, and angelina, and stevie nicks!...whoa wait a minute how did she get in here? oh well yeah her too! and tonks, and hestia, and emmeline and oh of course gabbi's!

Philipe posted a comment on Thursday 26th June 2008 4:39pm for Chapter 6

Reviewing this on my cell, so i'll be quick. Thanks for the formating, so i can read this without having to move right-left bar :D

I liked this a lot more then the last one, and finally understand it. The sociopath thing wasn't doing it for me. But Hermione explanation helped me a lot. But what i loved most about this was Doris and Fawkes :D will review more later. Cheers tim.

lilskippy posted a comment on Thursday 26th June 2008 3:34pm for Chapter 6

I haven't any clue who the bqd guy would be, I don't think Albus or Hermione maybe the doctor though but even then, and Fudge well he is an idiot but if the economy is stuck where it is maybe he just wanted it to be like this because it would keep him in power, then again someone could be hiding in the backround...