smog2187 posted a comment on Friday 27th June 2008 1:45am for Chapter 6

As always a great chapter. The most unfair part about reading good writing is that the more you read the more you want.

Poor Fawkes, not being able to find/catch his own food despite having had all time to learn how =)

joeBob posted a comment on Friday 27th June 2008 1:42am for Chapter 6

Swell chapter, thanks.

Yamikeckley posted a comment on Friday 27th June 2008 12:33am for Chapter 6

so yeah i got to thinking more and how this story is like sleeping beauty and all, or atleast the cure wise. i was thinking it could be doris maybe as like evil old lady that is in alot of fairy tales. ugh i should go read something else or actually write on my own story and get my mind off of this.

Yamikeckley posted a comment on Friday 27th June 2008 12:23am for Chapter 6

i was so happy when i got off work Thursday night and your chapter was up. it just brightens my night after my crappy job. as for the bad guy reasoning from your story so far seems to rule out anyone that is/was a death eater. draco malfoy was dealt with, thought he could make a reappearance. you seem to have dumbledore good this story, so that rules out him, i hope. i am thinking either greyback, voldemort somehow, or the ministry or maybe neville. the neville one is a off shoot, but it seems somewhat reasonable since he seems insecure about harry and ginny. and this last one is a far fetch one, it could be the delecour parents or the therapist. but even if i am way wrong about it i can not wait for your next chapter and i hope it is out next week or sooner.

Panaka posted a comment on Friday 27th June 2008 12:09am for Chapter 6

Good chapter. Looking forward to next Thursday to find out what happens next.

My prime suspects for the evil one:
The Dark Lady Hermione: She could see Gabrielle as a threat. She did give her the portkey.

The Dark Gryf Zach: Unknown entity and makes the list for that reason.

Mr/Mrs Delecour: Want to lock our princess away. Don't really seem to understand their daughter and it scares them into doing something stupid.

Zicou posted a comment on Friday 27th June 2008 12:06am for Chapter 6

Waouh ...
Another awesome one !

Continuuuuuuue !

Z.

Patches posted a comment on Thursday 26th June 2008 11:52pm for Chapter 6

This is great! I love the way Harry deals with all the questions from Hermione about Gabrielle. Hermione is being over protective of Harry and he is letting her know that it isn't necessary. That was a great way of Harry to catch Albus by surprise! I sure hope Albus and Doris make up. That would be incredible. He should have appolgized to Doris years ago. I'm glad McGonagal thanked Harry in Albus behalf. The pensieve scenes were great. Gabrielle really knows how to keep Harry focused. It is good she went to see her parents. She and Harry needed some time apart to take care of individual things. That was great that Fawkes gave Harry a tail feather for Garielle's wand. I love the way the receltionist at the Quibbler ignored Harry as a person when he went to see Ginny. That was a good interview and I love what the twins did to Fudge's office. What a good reprisal against Fudge and his minions. Thanks so much for writing such a long chapter in such a short time. I really enjoy your long chapters. pms

namelis posted a comment on Thursday 26th June 2008 11:46pm for Chapter 6

the bad guy is quite obviously the state of the magical world and people running it that are afraid of change gradually killing it by being the definition of insanity with there idea of 1000 years ago we had all these advances in magic and the magical community but at some point since then it slowed down and has now all but stopped so lets fix it by doing what we did then... un that didn't work so what can we do obviously we didn't try hard enough we need to emulate our ancestors more fully because they obviously had the right idea... it still didn't work just keep trying they obviously had it right and we obviously don't

instead of realizing that that way of doing things has been milked of all it can give us and trying something new

well Harry's the one that is trying something new so if he is the good guy then the bad guy is anyone or anything that gets in the way and trys to keep that cycle of 'they had it right because they advanced lets copy them so we can advance going' if you try to copy the past in order to advance cause they were good at it all you get is back where you are if not further back

so that is what i see as the bad guy in this story but the real question is was that who you meant to be the bad guy or did i just find another one

Phoenix4life posted a comment on Thursday 26th June 2008 11:23pm for Chapter 6

That was brilliant. Every chapter just reminds me of how much I love your work.

Ezra'eil posted a comment on Thursday 26th June 2008 11:02pm for Chapter 6

This was a really good chapter, funny too!

rabio posted a comment on Thursday 26th June 2008 10:59pm for Chapter 6

you've got a bit of a mistake with the catalan numbers. you said 'Let’s just say that the next floor would be 132 and be done with it,"' actually, the number after 1430 is 4862.

Jeconais replied:

Although 4863 is the next number in the sequence I used, the numbers in the lift stopped at the floor they were on - so techincally, as far as Locutious needed to know, the next number would have been 4862.

FenrisWolf posted a comment on Thursday 26th June 2008 10:52pm for Chapter 6

Best guess as to the villain's identity? Well, since he has yet to make a physical appearance it would be Gabrielle's psychiatrist, with her father running a close second (seeing as she's late returning from talking to her parents)....

mrrlyn posted a comment on Thursday 26th June 2008 10:45pm for Chapter 6

my guess is either gabby's parents and/or the shrink.

ginnysohma posted a comment on Thursday 26th June 2008 10:17pm for Chapter 6

Wait, there's a bad guy?
uhhh....

Wolfric posted a comment on Thursday 26th June 2008 10:14pm for Chapter 6

Another great chapter. I am quite interested to see where the story is going. Thanks for writing.

darthloki posted a comment on Thursday 26th June 2008 9:56pm for Chapter 6

Two more chapters to go - is it any clearer who the bad guy is now?

*pouts* No.
Well, I feel I should know, like it's in the back of my head, but not consciously, no. Unles it's the therapist, but I dunno.

SassyFrass posted a comment on Thursday 26th June 2008 9:53pm for Chapter 6

Very funny. I liked the idea of Hermione playing a very time delayed joke on Harry. It just goes to show that some of the boys did rub off on her, in a very Hermione way.
I look forward to seeing what Hermione diagnoses Gabbi as.
Please update again soon.

kain posted a comment on Thursday 26th June 2008 9:42pm for Chapter 6

your bad guy is pretty well hidden. then again the bad guy might be obvious.

The shrink that Gabby saw or Hermione is your bad guy i think

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Thursday 26th June 2008 8:53pm for Chapter 6

The twins' speech at the wedding was good and I love the prank they played on the Minister.

Luna makes an appearance and we don't get to see her breasts. Oh, Poo!

Albus and Doris was a nice surprise.

Man, I could compliments for days on this chapter, but I'll just sum it up with, Great Job!!!

darthloki posted a comment on Thursday 26th June 2008 8:44pm for Chapter 6

"You!" a voice shouted. "Do you know what you’ve done?"
"Yes," Harry replied instinctively.
"Good," the man responded. "So many people come in here and don’t know."


LOL! I loved all of the Quibbler stuff. :) Love to work there.

I also loved Harry's way of 'helping' Albus fix his mistakes.