FireFairy posted a comment on Saturday 28th June 2008 7:24am for Chapter 6

Nice Chapter, I like how he knew the Quibbler office pretty well, and also knew all the answers to the questions. I also love how you potray Gabreille as a real person! Great Job and i Can't wait for the next update!

BaltaineShadow posted a comment on Saturday 28th June 2008 5:48am for Chapter 6

Good chapter - it is really interesting to see how Gabrielle managed to manipulate all those peoples!
This modified memories she saved for Harry were brilliant!
Go on with this story - I really love it!

Milhent posted a comment on Saturday 28th June 2008 4:46am for Chapter 6

is it any clearer who the bad guy is now?
I'm sorry? (quickly reread previous chapters) There is the bad guy here? Aside from general morons like Malfoy, Fudge and their friends?

Great story, as always. Can't wait to see the rest.

spurio23 posted a comment on Friday 27th June 2008 10:30pm for Chapter 6

Very good. Sweet and it makes me giggle. Loved the last half of Chap 6 at the quibbler and Harry being the straight man for one of Hermione's pranks.

noylj posted a comment on Friday 27th June 2008 10:28pm for Chapter 6

The Prince can't look at other breasts?
Nice to see an adult Ginny.
Somebody had to have "grabbed" Luna by now. Even if only Fred and George. She's too much to still be single.
Who is the bad guy is? So far, I'm leaning towards Mr. Delacour.
I'm still worried that Gabbi isn't back yet.

Lady Metheglyn posted a comment on Friday 27th June 2008 2:12pm for Chapter 6

Yes, and her psychiatrist seems to fit the bill of evil advisor to the monarch who causes the monarch to do something BAD.

Hero Harry to the rescue!

Lady Metheglyn posted a comment on Friday 27th June 2008 2:09pm for Chapter 6

By and large, it sounds like the bad guy(s) is going to be Gabrielle's parents, because they don't believe her and seem very concerned about her relationship with Harry, and because she has not yet returned from going to see them. And because she mentioned the Rapunzel situation earlier and therefore being mewed up by her parents would fit the fairy tale theme nicely.

Excellent chapter as usual! Only two left to go? Sad!

Tetu posted a comment on Friday 27th June 2008 12:37pm for Chapter 6

Wow! What a surreal day for Harry.

Viridian posted a comment on Friday 27th June 2008 12:22pm for Chapter 6

Why do I have the feeling that Gabby won't be returning from France under her own power (at least not any time soon)?

Great chapter. Gabby's manipulations of the penseive memories were quite ingenious. But I thought Ron and Hermione had been married for longer than just a year or so. Weird impression on my part, probably.

Watching Fred and George restrain their normal impulses because they knew they were standing in for Harry was sweet. You kept the tension just right - nicely done!

And Hermione's statements regarding Gabby's psychologist were spot on. (And I'll compare professional qualifications with anyone that takes exception to them - the guy clearly bungled how he handled his client.)

Memory King posted a comment on Friday 27th June 2008 9:48am for Chapter 6

Brilliant chapter as expected, long and entertaining. This take on the Gabrielle situation probably needs to be read in one setting in order to make sense. Love the story, can't wait to read more of it, whatever others might say. Keep posting!

VelvetMouse posted a comment on Friday 27th June 2008 9:22am for Chapter 6

*falls over laughing* oh wow, that was wonderful.

The concept of a phoenix with gas is truly frighting... the potential for disaster is amazing. Don't ever tell Gred & Forge about that!

The math geek in me is hanging her head in shame that I actually had to look up the Catalan sequence. That was definitely a Hermione-worthy delayed prank.

Thank you for this delightful story and, as always, I am on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter. Metaphorically speaking, anyway.

cheryse posted a comment on Friday 27th June 2008 9:14am for Chapter 6

I think that this is my favorite chapter so far. I love how you write Luna. I'm also glad that you cleared up the mistake made by the therapist with Gabriel. I don't suppose there's any chance that we get to see the results of said mistake in the therapist's life? Awesome work - as usual!

amysds posted a comment on Friday 27th June 2008 8:41am for Chapter 6

So funny! and why does there have to be a bad guy?

Mionefan posted a comment on Friday 27th June 2008 8:29am for Chapter 6

Pretty good chapter, I liked the surprise Harry pulled on Albus.

Zucht posted a comment on Friday 27th June 2008 7:05am for Chapter 6

Great chapter! Lunas is so innocent but uninhibited. It was nice to see a mature Ginny - most often she's polayed like a star-struck fan. Hermione was as expected - brilliant, i really like your interpretation of her. Gabrielle is an incredible character - complex, brilliant and just a touch of psychosis.

This maybe your best story yet.

I think the 'big bad dragon' is going to be her father.

Zucht413@yahoo.com

Entilzah posted a comment on Friday 27th June 2008 5:30am for Chapter 6

Woah.

Dear lord this chapter was so full of excellent goodness that I don't know where to start... or finish!

Suffice it to say that this was your best chapter, perhaps out of everything you have posted ever.

Brilliant psycological analysis/byplay of Gabbi. The "puberty progression" was sufficiently twisted goodness - yes, imagining a 13 year old in a shift was disturbing, but it was so perfectly in character for our wonderfully messed up Princess. The wedding was excessively well done and showcased the personalities of everyone involved. The Fawkes scene(s) were wonderfully manic, and led very well to the Escher-esque Quibbler. Just darned near perfect.

I will probably save an in-depth analysis of Gabrielle until the story is finished, but she is probably the best character I have read in fan fiction, and one of the best I have read ever. It must be so fun (or frustrating) two write a genius character to whom the normal rules we live by just simply go around.

The only bad thing? Only two chapters to go! But what a wonderful story and ride this is.

taxzombie posted a comment on Friday 27th June 2008 4:07am for Chapter 6

Up to your usual standards, quite good and most entertaining. It is always a pleasure to read your tales. Loved F&G's prank, most appropriate, finally had the wizengot doing something at thier true levels.

Thank you again for the read.

DrT posted a comment on Friday 27th June 2008 2:52am for Chapter 6

The only person approaching evil would appear to be Gabbi's shrink!

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Friday 27th June 2008 2:05am for Chapter 6

I like the idea about if Harry was no longer her Prince, she'd move on. Though I'm not convinced she'd do it at once. Classic Luna. I liked the Fred and George speech though it was deliberately a little understated for them. Good chapter. More please.

Chris Steadman posted a comment on Friday 27th June 2008 1:49am for Chapter 6

"is it any clearer who the bad guy is now?"

I had no idea there WAS a bad guy, or even a dilemma for the hero to overcome. I though this was an *extremely entertaining* "Harry Messes With Everyone's Heads" story.

Don't get me wrong, I *love* it from start to finish (so-to-speak), but an underlying story behind the "What do I want to do today?" progression of Harry and company's actions... I must have missed it.

Although I'd call the psychiatrist a "bad guy" by default.