Happily Ever After
Chapter 5
By Jeconais
Reviews
jakjakattk posted a comment on Thursday 19th June 2008 9:01pm for Chapter 5
a very great chapter. you had Harry just say that whole speech and there wasn't even Hermione there to take notes.
You have to keep this up, your doing a great job.
I will be waiting for more.
jilumasam posted a comment on Thursday 19th June 2008 9:00pm for Chapter 5
Very nice.....
millie johanson posted a comment on Thursday 19th June 2008 8:43pm for Chapter 5
Hello,
I have just coppied ch 5 I haven't read it yet. It looks really good, but glancing where's Ginny?
could you tell me if this is a H & Gabrielle story?????
2emillie@comcast.net Please thanks
Miss Millie
Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Thursday 19th June 2008 8:29pm for Chapter 5
*Laughs* Ah, yes, such a fun time for all concerned. We do get a much better "feel" for Gabrielle in this chapter and it deepens our understanding of her and what she's accomplished. I almost feel sorry for those who try and stand in Harry's way, I doubt they realize just how much power and "pull" he has and just how far reaching his intentions are, and they won't realize this until too late since I rather suspect that few will really note his comments at the end of this chapter. He really spells out his long-term goals here and makes them quite individually desireable.
darthloki posted a comment on Thursday 19th June 2008 8:20pm for Chapter 5
She nodded. She nodded. "I used to compete in dance competitions, but I was banned."
"Why?"
"My partner tripped and fell on me. I didn’t admit until later that he had broken one of my ribs."
Harry winced.
"I wanted to win," she said. "They thought it wasn’t healthy for me to do that."
LOL! She's singleminded alright. I've done things like that when I'm really stubborn.
I think your view of Gabrielle the sociopath is interesting. There are a lot more sociopaths around than people think and most of them live fairly ordinary lives, not like in the media, just being charming and manipulative. You should read about organizational psychopaths. They're fascinating. Half the time they make themselves absolutely vital to the organisation in some way, so that without them things fal to pieces.
Wonderbee31 posted a comment on Thursday 19th June 2008 8:01pm for Chapter 5
Very good, and liked the explanation about Gabby, and with that, going to definitely look forward to more of the parents, Harry and Gabrielle at school, and what happens when the dragon makes it's formal appearance, and it the Prince will survive like he usually does in fairy tales(well the more modern ones, the older, well, sometimes not).
hallie posted a comment on Thursday 19th June 2008 7:56pm for Chapter 5
This new story just keeps getting better and better. Keep up the good work and the chapters coming - I keep checking for a new chapter every Thursday and can't wait for the next installment.
Gardengirl posted a comment on Thursday 19th June 2008 7:32pm for Chapter 5
*cheers loudly*
Ooh, he will get to slay a dragon? Gotta love that.
riegert8 posted a comment on Thursday 19th June 2008 7:13pm for Chapter 5
It great that Harry still meeting with people Harry knew before his nap for 8 years, I wonder what would happen if Harry meet Gabrielle parents. You could expect that Gabrielle parent would be upset and little trouble in how Gabrielle planned the last 8 years, but I never thought that Gabrielle be so upset that he have to take a walk and the mother trying to get her daughter away from Harry. At this part of the story I doubt that Gabrielle parents would ever like Harry but they would get along, there are an lot of cases that a person can't stand their girlfriend or wife parents. But the good new in time Gabrielle parent would understand her actions, and will move on from this.
Beonid posted a comment on Thursday 19th June 2008 7:05pm for Chapter 5
Mmmph. I like it, but maybe not as much as Hope. Still very good, though, like your other fanfictions.
Wolfric posted a comment on Thursday 19th June 2008 6:43pm for Chapter 5
Great chapter. I continue to enjoy your fine story. I have often thought that the portrayal of the wizzarding world was totally illogical until I figured out that it was a satire on power and those who have it. Thanks for writing. W.
Lady-Hope posted a comment on Thursday 19th June 2008 6:42pm for Chapter 5
yeah, i hope that dragon comes in soon. i like the story, but its seemed a little...well nothing is hapeneing yet. boring almost. but i have complete faith in your ability to make it amazing!
~Lady_Hope
DrT posted a comment on Thursday 19th June 2008 6:09pm for Chapter 5
Gabi the sociopath? That actually makes a lot of sense
Silo posted a comment on Thursday 19th June 2008 4:46pm for Chapter 5
nice hope u update sooner then next thursday
RaguajBlack posted a comment on Thursday 19th June 2008 4:43pm for Chapter 5
Amazing story for sure... Its so good im being forced to review this one ^^
Keep up this piece of art.
ps: Know any stories in this style?
c3markh posted a comment on Thursday 19th June 2008 4:42pm for Chapter 5
Love the story. I love to read Harry / Gabrielle fanfiction stories and you write alot of the better ones.
Memory King posted a comment on Thursday 19th June 2008 4:33pm for Chapter 5
This chapter was brilliant! Can't wait to read more!
Crys posted a comment on Thursday 19th June 2008 4:07pm for Chapter 5
> "With the right protective potions though, it can be excellent."
Snerk!
> You are his Quidditch hero."
His captain considers Harry his hero? My, that'll make for some weird situations as far as order and responsibility.
> The elf’s eyes, which had been going back to normal, went back to their widest state.
Wow. Not even house-elves are immune to the Veela Charm (tm)
> "I can show you my pole dancing!"
[Crys wipes some very inappropriate images regarding a young part-Veela from his mind.]
> you could execute Fudge and we’d still love you."
> "Oooh," Gabrielle said, "that’s an idea."
And a good one it is, too.
> I’ve just channelled my mild sociopathic tendencies into a useful channel."
[hard blink] Now there is a bombshell . . .
> They want to lock me in an ivory tower until I could grow my hair long enough for you to climb up it — and that sounds painful — and it would be so irritating to take care of that much hair!"
Talk about a fixation. Still, you needed to do that just to prove just how deeply driven this is into her psyche.
> Gryffindor bravery combined with the overwhelming urge to gush at you, and as everyone here will tell you, I talk far too much.
*laugh* I like him
> what is a fairy tale without a dragon ?
You're just a mean tease, you know that? Unless you mean Draco, which doesn't appear to be much of a challenge.
Srikanth posted a comment on Thursday 19th June 2008 4:01pm for Chapter 5
Does battling the dragon involve invading France? I seem to remember something from one f your signatures. Brilliant as usual. Thanks
dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Thursday 19th June 2008 9:08pm for Chapter 5