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Ben10 posted a comment on Friday 20th June 2008 11:03am for Chapter 5

Sooooooo good. I must say that I'm happy to see the increasing depth in Gabrielle's character. I was afraid that she'd be too much of a face-value personnage.

Meteoricshipyards posted a comment on Friday 20th June 2008 10:57am for Chapter 5

Lovely. Loved his speech at the end. He's certainly setting himself up as a leader.

Enjoyed their floo trick with Bill.

And the antagonist? The King? Gabby's father?

Thanks for the update.

Tom A.

redhandgrunt posted a comment on Friday 20th June 2008 10:40am for Chapter 5

Great chapter. I didn't think that this story was really going to have that much plot but it is shaping up to be interesting.

DukeBrymin posted a comment on Friday 20th June 2008 10:20am for Chapter 5

So, I've been very much enjoying this story, even though it's not a Ginny/Harry pairing, which is, of course, the ONE TRUE pairing. :)
It would be interesting to see the same type of idea (Strong supportive female providing Harry with all the perks and love he needs to remake the world) with Ginny in the Gabrielle spot. Although, I guess "This Means War" comes pretty close.
Anyway, good chapter--although the only hint of antagonist I can find is Gabrielle's parents--I guess we'll see.

Mionefan posted a comment on Friday 20th June 2008 9:41am for Chapter 5

Good chapter, I'll wait to see when Gabby's parents accept him.

Dustin Hoeppner posted a comment on Friday 20th June 2008 9:05am for Chapter 5

Very good. When is the next chapter be out?

Ezra'eil posted a comment on Friday 20th June 2008 8:57am for Chapter 5

Another great chapter, keep em coming mate!

FireFairy posted a comment on Friday 20th June 2008 6:29am for Chapter 5

Ooooooohhhhhhh! I can't wait for the next chapter sounds interesting! Great Chapter, I love how he got the Patils to work in his restaurant and how Remus is helping get integrated! Can't wait to see what is going to happen as Quidditch and how he is going to be as a chaser! Also I have suspicions about the 'dragon' and I can't wait to see if they are right! Great Chapter and I can't wait for the next update! Thank you!

Entilzah posted a comment on Friday 20th June 2008 5:54am for Chapter 5

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Oh... wow!

OK, please forgive me. Reading through the first 4 chapters, I thought "OK, good story, lots of fun... but... um... It seems like another Super!Harry. Harry immediately finding everyone jobs for him. Harry making non-linear brilliant jumps in logic (which, mind you, are still pretty hard to follow in the story). Where are the Jeconais characterizations I love? Where is the conflict to make a story?"

Slam, bam! There it is. The hints from the previous chapters finally all pulled together. Gabbi as a Princess not because it is a good story, but because she is actually really screwed up? Genius. And then you went on to show the negative aspects of that damage. Even better!

I am hooked again and dancing in my seat, eagerly waiting to watch this story unfold!

Ken Warner posted a comment on Friday 20th June 2008 5:25am for Chapter 5

a fun chapter, and Harry's soliliquy (sp?) at the just wraps every thing up with a fancy ribbon.

thanks again for sharing your skill and imagination.

Namizujs posted a comment on Friday 20th June 2008 5:10am for Chapter 5

Great!
(I'm not very eloquent, but glad to read :-)
Thanks

John

Phoenix4life posted a comment on Friday 20th June 2008 4:19am for Chapter 5

Wow. This was exactly what I needed tonight after I found out I failed one of my uni assignments. Can't wait for the next chapter. That was an intriguing twist with gabbi as a low level sociopath.

clt_71 posted a comment on Friday 20th June 2008 4:03am for Chapter 5

Excellent, as usual. Cannot wait for the next update. Out of all of the fanfiction sites that I frequent, you are among the best authors that I have had the privilege and pleasure to come across.

Patches posted a comment on Friday 20th June 2008 3:31am for Chapter 5

Wow! This is such a good story. I love your long chapters. They cover a lot of ground and leave a satisfied feeling of something accomplished. So many writers set a word count for their chapters but you have a story section to complete and you do it so well. It makes is so much better for the reader to have so many people involved in the story line and all the connections are explained so the reader can appreciate them better. Thank you for the regular updates. I really appreciate your efforts. Please continue. I look forward to more of this story. pms

Peregrine829 posted a comment on Friday 20th June 2008 1:58am for Chapter 5

Wow. An honest to goodness sociopath. Definitely never saw that one coming.

noylj posted a comment on Friday 20th June 2008 12:29am for Chapter 5

The Dumbles dragon appears to be slain. The Malfoy dragon appears the be slain. We hope there is no Delacour dragon. That, and the fairy tale is usually "they lived happily ever after" when the prince and princess get together. You know, twenty chapters, or so, of Harry lining up and knocking down ducks and getting the WW to become the magical world would be fine with no major dragons to kill.

joeBob posted a comment on Friday 20th June 2008 12:26am for Chapter 5

Thanks.

This is an awesome spin on the fairy tale. Love the intelligent and well-fleshed characters.

The plot is great too. But, sadly, in real life, someone making so many reforms and/or waves is always assassinated sooner or later.

Tarkas posted a comment on Thursday 19th June 2008 10:17pm for Chapter 5

Why do I have this feeling that you're going all symbolic when you talk about a dragon? What the rabid left-wingers of my youth used to sneer at as "reactionary forces", possibly led or embodied in the person of Eric, the King who falls into evil? It would certainly explain Harry invading France, and the Prince storming the castle in which his Princess is imprisoned is something that could have come out of a fairy-tale.

Eric is definitely not Jean-Paul from Hope, but I do wonder if he has the same sort of political aspirations, something which might be ended rather abruptly if the news gets out that he has a daughter who is known to have sociopathic tendencies. It could explain his anger, and also be a reason for locking Gabbi up, if that happens.

Meantime, in a mixed metaphor that I ought be be ashamed of (but I'm not), Whirlwind Harry-and-Gabbi continues to blow through the British magical world, flattening everything in it path like a steamroller. And soon just a little of that wind of change will leak into part of the Muggle world, specifically a certain village in Surrey... I'm looking forward to that.

But then, like a lot of people, I'm looking forward to everything about this fic. Roll on next Thursday!

Jiapa posted a comment on Thursday 19th June 2008 10:05pm for Chapter 5

Lovely chapter, as usual. I am enjoying this characterization of Harry and Gabrielle.

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Thursday 19th June 2008 9:31pm for Chapter 5

Outstanding chapter to a great story. I love the good times and Harry taking charge and doing good.

gunny