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jilumasam posted a comment on Thursday 5th June 2008 10:52pm for Chapter 3

Now this a a truly fantastic chapter!!!! I can just feel the humour and cheeriness flowing right off my monitor.

*grins*

Lizzy

joeBob posted a comment on Thursday 5th June 2008 10:51pm for Chapter 3

This is an awesome feel-good fic!

A much better wrap to the series with plenty of good laughs.
Thank you.

Christie posted a comment on Thursday 5th June 2008 10:29pm for Chapter 3

Nice one!

And Gabrielle is spookily smart, and a bit like Dumbledore. Manipulative, but believes it's for good.

I like how you've fleshed them out.

I just realized, Gabrielle uses contractions now and and less formal speech....

Jeconais replied:

That was deliberate on my part - I wanted to make sure everyone realised that this Gabbi is NOT Gabrielle from Hope.

Wolfric posted a comment on Thursday 5th June 2008 10:05pm for Chapter 3

That was fun. Gabrielle remind me of Madeline, sort of. I'm glad Harry can appreciate a good plot as long as it comes out the way he wants. Thanks for writing. W.

darthloki posted a comment on Thursday 5th June 2008 9:11pm for Chapter 3

Awesome.

frankocsic posted a comment on Thursday 5th June 2008 9:00pm for Chapter 3

'mrs bill weasley' reminded me of fiona in shrek2, writing in her diary. funny one. also forgot to mention in my other review, it's hilarious of gabbi to think of fleur being as 'ancient' as dumbledore is. i was a bit thrown with the change in perspective, having read chap2 immediately after chap1, but i realized gabbi was a kid then, and i understood.

it's also great that hermione, and ron, was on harry's side all along. i was beginning to think they were all on dumbledore's camp, doing what they though were 'for the greater good' or something. i can't wait to see how this progresses. good job.

nfk posted a comment on Thursday 5th June 2008 8:55pm for Chapter 3

I stumbled upon Happily Ever After a few weeks ago and have been loving it since. It's got that fast paced feel without Harry's life being in constant danger. Which, I must admit, is a bit different for Harry Potter.

But he rolls with it. While there might not be any more Death Eaters or a big bad so far, Harry already is setting plans into motion to get his friends out their rut and bring a little excitement back in their life. I look forward to see just what type of waves Harry will make in Wizarding society.

Hermione's revelation of her manipulations was a fun surprise. Her and Gabrielle are two woman I don't ever want to get on the wrong side of. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Musings of Apathy posted a comment on Thursday 5th June 2008 7:47pm for Chapter 3

Excellent. I'd give you corrections, but really, who cares? It was a great read and everything we could want. Thank you for writing.

Mike (MoA)

Lon Huey posted a comment on Thursday 5th June 2008 7:26pm for Chapter 3

You know, I've never left a BAD review to any of your stories, and I'm not going to start here.

Something just feels a bit rushed to me..............maybe it's just part of the plot and I'm not far enough into it yet.

I'm certainly not going to stop reading, as I have always been satisfied with your work. I guess I was expecting more detail about Harry and Gabbi's relationship.

I always enjoy the interplay between Harry and the goblins in your tales and I am always happy to see Free!Harry.

Jeconais replied:

Rushing this story was part of the fun of writing it - basically, the whole story ends after he's only been awake for around 60 hours ... but there are a lot more details that are yet to be known.

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Thursday 5th June 2008 7:06pm for Chapter 3

LOL! Cute little girls are always dangerous.

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Thursday 5th June 2008 7:03pm for Chapter 3

*laughs* Oh, man, I rather imagine all this comes as a rude shock to Albus; he's not used to being so thoroughly outwitted and it rubs it in that Gabrielle was the one that did it (I doubt anyone is going to tell him about Hermione's share of the effort). I do love the fact that Harry's already starting to become a mover and shaker, just not the kind that Albus expected. I admit that I loved the fact that Hermione had been scheming too and I daresay that with both her and Gabrielle guiding him, Harry is going to be a very powerful man and not a person to get in the way of or get on the wrong side of; he won't get violent unless violence is offered against him, but the power of offensive pranking can go a long, long way.

Jeconais replied:

Never underestimate the attraction of a good prank... all sorts of allies could be made ...

MarinePotterfan posted a comment on Thursday 5th June 2008 6:52pm for Chapter 3

Great chapter

MPF

DrT posted a comment on Thursday 5th June 2008 6:40pm for Chapter 3

A very interesting place to stop to say the least! Glad Hermione was hatching her own plot, and I can't wait to see what Harry does next

Silo posted a comment on Thursday 5th June 2008 6:36pm for Chapter 3

i like it who u pdate sooner then next week

Crys posted a comment on Thursday 5th June 2008 6:23pm for Chapter 3

> "My poor school," Albus mumbled.
*snicker*

I can see Hermione in Slytherin, but not Ron. Yeah, he wanted to get out of his brothers' shadows, but he didn't actually try to do anything to accomplish that. Would Slytherin accept a "ambitious but lazy"?

"trained" her subconscious? Hmm, more like beat it into submission.

Amusing romp.

Jeconais replied:

Of course... Gabii had help in what she did...

My god, is that the sign of an antagonist ?

Jim_xinu posted a comment on Thursday 5th June 2008 6:03pm for Chapter 3

Good chapter, thanks for sharing it with us.

Ltank687 posted a comment on Thursday 5th June 2008 5:24pm for Chapter 3

love it! keep on updating! Whenever you post I get so excited!

ShadeHawk posted a comment on Thursday 5th June 2008 4:49pm for Chapter 3

Very, very nice. A truly "mature Jeconais'" story.

Good work!

ladyimmortal posted a comment on Thursday 5th June 2008 4:26pm for Chapter 3

ANother GREAT GREAT GREAT chapter!

Did I mention great?

Gabrielle literally believing she's in a fairy tale... that makes sooo much sense.

Lovely. I do like a retroactive, assertive Harry.

And a support Ron and Hermione too.

Good stuff!

Memory King posted a comment on Thursday 5th June 2008 4:26pm for Chapter 3

Awesome update, as expected. Will be fun to see the Death Eater sympathisers go down in flames. Can't wait to read more!