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Dave Harris posted a comment on Thursday 29th May 2008 2:33pm for Chapter 2

After that, I'm slightly disappointed that it _wasn't_ what really happened... but I'm sure you'll be making it even more interesting in the next chapter!

Seems a silly question, but why has the wizarding world become cautious after Voldemort's defeat? From the previous chapters it seemed that it was only Harry's friends that weren't celebrating, and that the "feel-good" factor should have kicked in for the economy...

Kaerion posted a comment on Thursday 29th May 2008 2:27pm for Chapter 2

Hah, considering Gabbi's age, I had a feeling things weren't as straight forward (in the most liberal interpretation of that term, ever) as she thought, so I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Well, of course I'm looking forward to the next chapter, but with that little hint, I'm looking even more forward to it! :)

I'm also glad to see that Harry's already started working on breaking free, getting the goblins on his side was an excellent idea, and you handled Harry and Gabbi's interactions with them wonderfully. The revelations about the state of the Wizarding World were also fascinating, and I can't help cackling with glee when I think about the reactions Harry will get when everyone realizes that he's nothing like what they were probably hoping he'd be like, and that he won't be following their plans.

As for negative things, the only one I can think of is that things are still moving pretty slowly, in that you're not covering much time with each chapter so far. However, considering where the story started, I think that was pretty much unavoidable, and I'm more than convinced that things will be picking up soon, so it's not something I'm worried about, and I see no reason to complain.

So thanks for the chapter! You're still doing a wonderful job!