Entilzah posted a comment on Friday 30th May 2008 4:58am for Chapter 2

Most enjoyable! An excellent description of what all happened and why, without being pedantic. Good setup.

And I do like the "slightly tarnished Princess" that you made Gabbi out to be. Perfection is one thing - but bitchy, scheming Perfection is another!

sblackfan posted a comment on Friday 30th May 2008 4:42am for Chapter 2

Fantastic chapter! I can't wait to see what pranks Harry is planning to pull on everyone.

ladysavay posted a comment on Friday 30th May 2008 3:54am for Chapter 2

"Next...we see what really happened." WHAT? I love this story. The dialogue is brilliant, hystericallly funny and so very clever. Like reading Potter by way of Noel Coward. But.... you can't go and change it. If, in the next chapter we find out none of this really happened I'll make you cry!

MORE...Soon.

'
Savay

Jeconais replied:

*laughs* No - this is not Dallas - the whole story is not changing - however, Gabrielle will just learn that there are other perspectives on events...

Namizujs posted a comment on Friday 30th May 2008 3:26am for Chapter 2

Wonderful, You're taking such wonderful liberties with the HP universe, it will be so much fun to read...
Thank You

John

Yamikeckley posted a comment on Friday 30th May 2008 2:00am for Chapter 2

i think that this story is great. great laughs and a good plot that keeps you interested. i kind of have my ideas one something as to the boring aspect the wizarding world has fallen but ill keep it to my self and see if it happens.
keep it up, hope a update soon.
YK

Patches posted a comment on Friday 30th May 2008 1:25am for Chapter 2

This is very good. I like the way that Gabbi explained to everyone how she woke Harry up. It is good that they realized a little how much she had manipulated all of them. The timing was perfect. They will be at Hogwarts together. I look forward to finding out what really happened. Thanks for writing. I always look forward to your stories. pms

liquidfyre posted a comment on Friday 30th May 2008 1:14am for Chapter 2

*dons a giant teddybear suit and snuggles jeconais for his updating*

Hilarious I loved her decking the goblin and the food part was scarily accurate as im a major fan of spicy myself. Got any of the gob recipes you wanna share?

Keep up the good work and there will be more teddy bear snuggles for you

LaCroix posted a comment on Friday 30th May 2008 1:06am for Chapter 2

Great chapter.

The twins, ministry workers? That's the strangest idea ever in a fanfic!

joeBob posted a comment on Friday 30th May 2008 1:00am for Chapter 2

Oh come on! You couldn't have Dumbledore jokingly threaten to send Harry to the Dursleys? ;-)

Anyway, very fun story.

Don't trust anyone who complains about people or things being *boring*. I've never met such who wasn't shallow, troubled, and/or a reckless adrenaline junky.
Wise and deep people can spend hours an a bare room, with no company, books, or electronics and never be bored.

I'd hope Harry had a solid ration of the second personality type.

bjon66 posted a comment on Thursday 29th May 2008 11:43pm for Chapter 2

This is a great story... Its not very often i get to read an original story.. With the billions of stories out there, its got to be tough to write one.... Can't wait for the next chapter...

UdderPD posted a comment on Thursday 29th May 2008 10:47pm for Chapter 2

Absolutly wonderful, twenty thousand words and Harry has only been awake for ten hours. What time scale is the story going to cover? At this rate, with eight chapters you are going to cover two and a half days.

Still a lot can happen in two and a half days.


TTFN UdderPD

Brognus posted a comment on Thursday 29th May 2008 10:09pm for Chapter 2

Harry's gone completely batty! I love this story!

Jimbocous posted a comment on Thursday 29th May 2008 9:57pm for Chapter 2

Good Grins!

Nathaniel Ludvik posted a comment on Thursday 29th May 2008 9:53pm for Chapter 2

Awesome chapter, can't wait to see the next one.

Zicou posted a comment on Thursday 29th May 2008 9:44pm for Chapter 2

Waouh ..... awesome .... very great !!!!
Harry has handle pretty well the after potion effect, why no more yelling ?

Continuuuuuues, 'cause I adore !

Z.

Peregrine829 posted a comment on Thursday 29th May 2008 9:30pm for Chapter 2

Wow. Talk about a substantial suspension of disbelief. Still, I can't wait for the next chapter.

daemon452 posted a comment on Thursday 29th May 2008 8:55pm for Chapter 2

awesome. i love this story. keep them coming.

Rick D Gale posted a comment on Thursday 29th May 2008 8:28pm for Chapter 2

An other great chapter! Harry and Gabbi seem to go great together!

I wonder what happened at Hogwarts when Fleur and the rest heard the sonic boom and figuared out that Gab and Harry had 'left the building'?

It is a pleasure to read such a great story.

I look forward to your next chapter.

rdgale

Wolfric posted a comment on Thursday 29th May 2008 7:58pm for Chapter 2

I enjoyed the chapter. I guess we will see how gullable Harry is, not to mention everybody else. Thanks for writing. W.

Silo posted a comment on Thursday 29th May 2008 7:42pm for Chapter 2

kool man i got to up date 2 at a time it makes life better for us