Blue Steel
Chapter 9
By Jeconais
Reviews
Jenara posted a comment on Sunday 16th November 2014 2:07am for Chapter 9
I really enjoyed this story, the "fairy tale" if you will, so many write Hp fiction as depressing and completely serious, that they can't seem to relate to the lighter side of the world, the jumping on the troll, being threatened with being transfigured into a map for being late to class side. I hope you continue to write what you want to write and ignore the people who complain about it. I for one will continue to read anything you want to throw out there.
Brian64 posted a comment on Sunday 16th November 2014 2:02am for Chapter 9
I'm not always sure whether to be glad when a story is completed or not. On the one hand it means it's done and there's no other chapter to wait for, and on the other it means it's done and there's no other chapter to wait for... It's a hard, confusing time for a poor reader!
So, there's no possible way I can write this review without commenting on this line... "I have not been paid enough for this," The Sphinx muttered. "See the world, they said. Get out of your musty pyramid, they said. Yeah, right. See a giant-ass sword right in your face, is what they didn't say." Well, all I have to say is, how am I going to get those coffee stains off my monitor? My people will be calling your people, and I'm sure we can settle on something reasonable out of court, like a sneak peak at the next chapter of Hogwarts Dawn...
Thank you. Tim. My Sunday mornings will no longer be quite as anticipated now. I've enjoyed reading (and regularly re-reading) your writing for years since I first discovered Hope, and I look forward to your next new chapter or story.
Lordamnesia posted a comment on Sunday 16th November 2014 2:01am for Chapter 9
Absolutely fantastic. I loved this story from the start, eagerly awaiting each and every chapter to be published, and the finish doesn't dissapoint in the slightest. I'm an amature blacksmith, and was more then pleasently surprised that you were fairly accurate (outside of not a ton of discription) of the process, but it's cool that one of your beta's is an actual blacksmith, so that makes sense! I like the ending here, leaving you with the oportunity to continue this, or not, but it doesn't feel incomplete, just open ended. Life goes on. Keep up the awesome work, and thank you so much for the great read!
Drake posted a comment on Sunday 16th November 2014 1:42am for Chapter 9
Jeconais, this is by far the best fanfic I've read in the last two years. Everything comes down to generic so and so paired up, super-power activated, go on a quest to defeat the magical troll etc..
It was a joy to read something so different from the usual stories that for the last two months you made me look forward to Saturday evenings.
Although, I do wish you would write a ...19 years later from every perspective. It's something I sorely miss from all timey movies.
Can't wait for the next chapter of Hogwarts Dawn or Perfect Slytherins.
red jacobson posted a comment on Sunday 16th November 2014 1:38am for Chapter 9
And I've finally come to the end of the story. I enjoyed this chapter just as much as the others, and I'm glad that there was a sense of closure for this chapter of Harry's life. Although I think that you could make an extremely entertaining sequel with Harry and the others travelling around Europe, as well as the final resolution of the Tori/Romi/Sophia/Gabrielle quadrangle (if that's even a word? *GRIN*) Plus, I really want to know why Derek lost his confidence in his other abilities, and how the consortium managed to take over the Wizarding World!
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myredturtle posted a comment on Sunday 16th November 2014 1:30am for Chapter 9
Thank you. This story has been lovely, and has livened up my weekends. I will miss waiting anxiously for the new chapter! Thank you very much for sharing with us all.
Richard6154 posted a comment on Sunday 16th November 2014 2:08am for Chapter 9