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MartinEB72 posted a comment on Monday 23rd February 2015 11:25am for Chapter 9

I have read this twice now. I really enjoyed it, but I can't help but wish Daphne had stay stupid. Gifted artist yes, but truly not able to do 2 things at once and continually barely passes classes after a lot of help. You probably wouldn't have been able to do a pairing with Fleur, or if so it would have taken more effort to do. After all maybe you could have written her as appreciating such a sweet but dim girl.

Dorothy posted a comment on Thursday 12th February 2015 2:21am for Chapter 9

I liked this story. Thank you for sharing

gcomyn posted a comment on Sunday 25th January 2015 3:42am for Chapter 9

I really liked this story! Good characterizations, and kept internally consistent.

firedrakegirl posted a comment on Friday 23rd January 2015 4:40am for Chapter 9

Personally, I thought this story was a lot of fun. I read it all today, then was horrified to realize I hadn't done anything to prepare for my trip tomorrow. Ah well, it was worth it to read this story.

Ceres posted a comment on Monday 19th January 2015 2:54pm for Chapter 9

Idk if anyone else would enjoy it but I would love to see a sequel just something that shows who he pick an the summer vacation maybe some new magic, it'd be an absolute blast

andymul1 posted a comment on Thursday 8th January 2015 9:30am for Chapter 9

Hey just gotta day this. I ha e read nearly all of your stories and they are all great so far anyway. I started reading this means war on fanfiction.net and was annoyed till I found u on this site. The stories are great especially this one and Hogwarts Dawn keep up the great stories please. Andy

Neil Glover posted a comment on Tuesday 30th December 2014 8:40pm for Chapter 9

Great story. I know that you have finished it as far as Voldemort goes but I would love to see another chapter or two covering Harry's summer holiday if you had any ideas on carrying it further as I think following Harry's trip abroad for a relaxing holiday would round out the story.

jp0625 posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd December 2014 8:36am for Chapter 9

I liked the story overall. Harry's interactions with the Greengrasses was lighthearted and I loved the Vane gypsy idea. Canon showed how straightforward the wizarding world was if you put someone in magical armor the Death Eaters would be inconsequential. The only thing Id say I disliked is how anticlimatic the end is. Voldemort was no contest, you left the main pairing open ended(which isnt a big deal), the fallout of the families buying the manors, and the summer trip with all of them travelling with the Vanes. /shrug The story feels like it needs an epilogue.

Robin42069 posted a comment on Monday 22nd December 2014 8:54pm for Chapter 9

I loved this story it was very diffrent to most others which is nice.

Socelssr posted a comment on Saturday 20th December 2014 3:43pm for Chapter 9

I don't know who those people are you said that didn't like this story- I found it very well done with entertaining characterization and as always a good reason for a powerful Harry. Also loved all of the pop culture references. Thank you for pointing out that the characters are mostly 14 and younger and thus will probably not be finding their twoo luv any time soon. Keep writing amazing fics, you are consistently one of the better writers I've found.

Tammy Driver posted a comment on Monday 15th December 2014 9:18pm for Chapter 9

I like it. :)

brad posted a comment on Tuesday 9th December 2014 12:12pm for Chapter 9

(Trying my review again with a more modern browser; curious to see if the paragraphs are properly separated this time.)

Good grief, all of the *clanking* in that video! Pretty interesting stuff. My knowledge of such things is now an infinite number of times greater. :-)

Although I had the impression that some knights of some period - maybe *English* knights - had armour that was less flexible, all encompassing gear.

I've said it before, I think ... you REALLY need to invite a guest artist or two to join fanficauthors. To illustrate those stories which have such an overflow of feminine pulchritude. I'm just begg--- sayin'.

Laughed out loud with the chapter where Dobby announced that he'd 'brung it' out of the blue. Good one.

For a few seconds there at the end I thought you were going to go corny and have an ongoing joke with almost every cast member accidentally overhearing Harry's charming prayer to his parents, internally commenting on same ... and each one, in turn, making some sort of reference to Romilda's formidable breasts. :-)

(That was another fun line - Astoria's complaint that the gypsy's bust turned corners 15 minutes before she did. Something along those lines. :-))

Like I said - pictures please. :-)

An enjoyable story that gave quite an 'Iron Man' vibe. Thank you!

brad posted a comment on Tuesday 9th December 2014 12:09pm for Chapter 9

Good grief, all of the *clanking* in that video! Pretty interesting stuff. My knowledge of such things is now an infinite number of times greater. :-) Although I had the impression that some knights of some period - maybe *English* knights - had armour that was less flexible, all encompassing gear. I've said it before, I think ... you REALLY need to invite a guest artist or two to join fanficauthors. To illustrate those stories which have such an overflow of feminine pulchritude. I'm just begg--- sayin'. Laughed out loud with the chapter where Dobby announced that he'd 'brung it' out of the blue. Good one. For a few seconds there at the end I thought you were going to go corny and have an ongoing joke with almost every cast member accidentally overhearing Harry's charming prayer to his parents, internally commenting on same ... and each one, in turn, making some sort of reference to Romilda's formidable breasts. :-) (That was another fun line - Astoria's complaint that the gypsy's bust turned corners 15 minutes before she did. Something along those lines. :-)) Like I said - pictures please. :-) An enjoyable story that gave quite an 'Iron Man' vibe. Thank you!

Yamikage posted a comment on Wednesday 3rd December 2014 2:15am for Chapter 9

I think this is ma favorite between all of your fic. I like it more than Hogwarts' Dawn .I wish i can read a sequel of it or a epilog to know more about their live, business or children. Thank you to let us read this amazing fiction.

DJ posted a comment on Tuesday 2nd December 2014 10:45pm for Chapter 9

This was a fun read thanks for writting it.

tcl7189 posted a comment on Tuesday 2nd December 2014 8:47am for Chapter 9

Great story!! Loved the character developement!! Can't wait to see what you come up with next.

Dad posted a comment on Tuesday 25th November 2014 7:43pm for Chapter 9

Great, feel good story.

jchangpa posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 7:06pm for Chapter 9

Well, thanks for not been an ass because some of us do not like your story. Until chapter 7 I was thinking that the story was good, then on the next two chapters it simple dye. The main problem , at least for me, is that the story start with two over smart ladies with a crush, then you add his real friend on the loop and the sister of one of the ladies. But sudenly you make one lesbian, as before that was ok, but you kill all relation with his best friend, well all relationship were kill. But what really kill me was the end of LV, it was really anti climatic. So sorry at the end was not a good story for me.

Hytekrednek posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 10:18am for Chapter 9

I for one truly loved this story and enjoyed reading it as I have all of your stories. Keep up the great work. James

kstchr posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 6:26am for Chapter 9

Well, I for one really liked this story. I really enjoyed the banter, and glimpsing Harry's growing feelings for girls in general. Would love to see who he eventually chooses as his life partner, and how their ironworks business venture works out for them!! Have you ever thought about a sequel of sorts to this??