qwe33355555 posted a comment on Sunday 16th November 2014 5:28am for Chapter 9

It was an amazing story.I truly do love your work from your older more fluff filled to this newer style of Harry trying to grow up. Please keep writing.

nimaj25 posted a comment on Sunday 16th November 2014 5:14am for Chapter 9

Thanks for putting these ideas down in story format. I really liked the story... from start to finish.

Please continue writing... :)

Ben

mwinter posted a comment on Sunday 16th November 2014 5:06am for Chapter 9

Thank you for wonderful story and insight on a different hp. Awaiting whatever else you post.

GinnyLover posted a comment on Sunday 16th November 2014 4:50am for Chapter 9

As always i'd love to see an Epilogue but i can live with imagining it.

kb0 posted a comment on Sunday 16th November 2014 4:46am for Chapter 9

Hmm, I'm not sure what's not to like, at least in any major way. It was written in your usual fun way and was different, so no tired plot lines. You also had fun taking some minor characters (and some made-up chars) and making them central characters, something that's common for you and again well done. It was a fun read and that's the point, not who's dating whom and other things people get fixated upon far too often.

I appreciate your work and I'm always glad to see new work by you. Thanks for sharing!

Kevin

Orion posted a comment on Sunday 16th November 2014 4:42am for Chapter 9

I loved this story, and I'm glad that it had such a perfect ending. The story never seemed to be about Harry defeating Voldemort, rather it always came across as a story about Harry learning whom he is, and starting to build a future for himself. The final not-quite-battle was totally in line with that, Voldemort was just another minor problem to be overcome.

I could tell while reading this that you enjoyed writing this story - I always believe that the best written stories created when the author loves what they are writing. I can't promise to always love the story too (though as I said, in this case I did) - but you can never write a story that everyone will love, so just keep writing what you love and enough readers will love it too.

Thank you, once again, for sharing your work with us.

ThunderGod posted a comment on Sunday 16th November 2014 4:33am for Chapter 9

Another great story, a dufferent plotline using rarely used characters. Quite enjoyable

Zamia posted a comment on Sunday 16th November 2014 4:20am for Chapter 9

Thank you for a very enjoyable read. You have certainly done your part for promoting equal rights. Another yarn of yours that will be going into my library. Thanks for sharing. Cheers.

Z

Jason Karr posted a comment on Sunday 16th November 2014 4:00am for Chapter 9

this is a nice story the way you ended it is very nice

Riven posted a comment on Sunday 16th November 2014 3:44am for Chapter 9

I loved this story. It's not a standard hp story and to be honest that's a good thing. Standard hp has been done, I'm bored with it so it takes something interesting to catch my interest and you did. I liked how you mixed little bits from different fandoms, some zoolander, some elder scrolls, all good

jilumasam posted a comment on Sunday 16th November 2014 3:39am for Chapter 9

Well thank you for such a lovely story. I liked it very much and appreciated the effort you put into it.

Avieryn posted a comment on Sunday 16th November 2014 3:30am for Chapter 9

I enjoyed this tale a great deal. From the first chapter, I eagerly awaited each following chapter and have enjoyed reading them and allowing my imagination to take flight with this story.

Keep up the good work.

With appreciation,

Avieryn

Tim Sullivan posted a comment on Sunday 16th November 2014 3:24am for Chapter 9

Now that you've reached the end I'd like to give you a review of the complete story. I liked the concept. All of the concepts, actually. Blacksmithing, Zoolander, the Vanes and Greengrasses...that was great. Overall I liked the execution too, but there were several places where it felt forced. One good example: nowhere in the story do we see Daphne as the person Astoria described her as in Chapter 1. Nowhere. I think I get that you were trying to portray her as being Slytherin and hiding her intelligence - she's simple, not stupid - but we have two and a half moments where that persona is described secondhand and we never actually SEE it. All we get is the sweetheart who is naive, simple, and only stupid in comparison to Astoria's genius. In summary, it's a great concept, a good story, and good writing, but you should consider revisiting it to see if you can fix it up a little.

Jason9 posted a comment on Sunday 16th November 2014 3:21am for Chapter 9

Fun story - hope you enjoy it as much as all your readers have!

Greg Johnson posted a comment on Sunday 16th November 2014 3:18am for Chapter 9

This has been a very fun story to ready. Thank you for posting it.

Shawn Pickett posted a comment on Sunday 16th November 2014 3:17am for Chapter 9

I've gotten in the habit of not reviewing stories anymore, but I wanted to drop a line and let you know I enjoyed this story immensly. It's lighthearted and fun for the most part with a bit of silliness thrown in without going over the top. Thank you.

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Sunday 16th November 2014 3:05am for Chapter 9

A solid wrap-up to a uniquely different and most enjoyable story. I quite like this Harry and can appreciate his desire to make things, though my calling to engineering definitely puts me in the way of understanding Daphne's enjoyment of designing things (when it all gels and is right is quite the high, exceeded only be seeing the work of your mind and hands made real and doing what it's supposed to exactly as you expected it to). There are some very real and strong friendships and other relationships formed here and I daresay that the long-term results will radically alter the magical world for the better; and few will see them coming.

notWorthy posted a comment on Sunday 16th November 2014 3:03am for Chapter 9

I thought it was a great story. Harry being a blacksmith was pretty unique and the effectiveness of enchanted armor against normal wizards seemed fairly realistic. I'm glad you made him use his practical intelligence and depend on his friends, rather than just making him some ubermensch. Harry forgetting his wand was pretty funny though.

I can understand your pairing decision, but I would have still liked to see them sharing him hinted at. Or maybe Fleur telling him that she would like to introduce him to her very interested cousins at the enclave. One or the other.

There were a few overly sappy moments IMO, and the ending felt rushed up until the party, then it seemed to overcompensate and stumble around a bit, but all in all a really good story.

Chris1 posted a comment on Sunday 16th November 2014 2:57am for Chapter 9

I loved this story, thank you for sharing it with us! :D

Sasha Botak posted a comment on Sunday 16th November 2014 2:49am for Chapter 9

Jeconais .

Only have this to say, thankyou thankyou thankyou.

Truely awesome story, so bright and happy.

Thanks again :)