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keichan2 posted a comment on Sunday 26th October 2014 1:03pm for Chapter 6

I really liked this chapter!

You gave a lot of depth to many of the characters, and your “magic is magic” was well explained!

Thanks for the new chapter!

I hope to read more soon!

noylj posted a comment on Sunday 26th October 2014 11:27am for Chapter 6

I am totally shocked by Amelia's reaction. Is she another imbecile like Bumbles? Like the story, but don't understand neither Daffy or Hermy wanting Harry romantically, but that's the biz, I guess.

preier posted a comment on Sunday 26th October 2014 10:39am for Chapter 6

The "anti-DE" armor scenes are very graphically powerfull, very good job, i had to shiver while picturing them.

love the delacour sisters here, each in her own way ^^ and viktor/'ralda as a mature couple compared to cedric/cho as still schoolchildren was something i'd like explained(shown) more often, especially given fanfics tendency to pair people so very young.

thank you for sharing your tales

sleepygirl68 posted a comment on Sunday 26th October 2014 10:06am for Chapter 6

I'm really enjoying reading this story and look forward to each update.

I did contemplate waiting until the story was complete before reading it, but I don't seem to be able to do that!

Thanks for writing and sharing your story with us.

gadriam posted a comment on Sunday 26th October 2014 7:18am for Chapter 6

Fantastic. Nuff sed..=)

One little thing, though. It feels a bit fast. It isn't, but if you elaborated a bit more on how much time is actually spent on different things, that feeling would go away. It's not important, but if you cannot give some form of constructive criticism, i see no point in reviewing.

Thanks.

g

Rob Clark posted a comment on Sunday 26th October 2014 7:15am for Chapter 6

An excellent part. Hope Harry doesn't get too angsty about killing DE's.

I can't decide if it would have been better or worse for the Aurors to help kill them..

alucard964 posted a comment on Sunday 26th October 2014 7:02am for Chapter 6

the end that bellatrix truly deserved. cut down like the trash that she is. looking forward to next weeks chapter.

Wolfric posted a comment on Sunday 26th October 2014 6:10am for Chapter 6

Another fine chapter. I really enjoy your character interactions. Thanks for writing. W.

potterfrkintx posted a comment on Sunday 26th October 2014 5:59am for Chapter 6

LOL "Come to the insane side... we have cookies!" Brilliant!

Joe Fenton posted a comment on Sunday 26th October 2014 5:16am for Chapter 6

I really like this story. In general, I like alternate GoF stories where Harry actually pulls his head out of his ass, and this is a really good one. I can't think of another Harry as an arcane blacksmith story out their. And I love how seamlessly you've worked in bits of Skyrim into this. It works really well.

mwinter posted a comment on Sunday 26th October 2014 5:13am for Chapter 6

Cool. Thank you for the update. Awaiting more.

maddog6295 posted a comment on Sunday 26th October 2014 5:06am for Chapter 6

Good chapter and a very entertaining story over all. Between your explanation in chapter 4 of Hogwarts Dawn and Magic is Magic theory in this chapter you have given a solid description of magic in the Potter universe, thank you for your thoughts. I look forward to future chapters of your writing.

Jenara posted a comment on Sunday 26th October 2014 2:47am for Chapter 6

wow, just wow. I love how this is playing out. Would love to see a small paragraph on how the "friends" left behind are reacting to the change.

Jason Karr posted a comment on Sunday 26th October 2014 2:03am for Chapter 6

it is nice that so many death eaters are dead it is also nice that Harry has friends that care about him.

Commando987 posted a comment on Sunday 26th October 2014 1:39am for Chapter 6

Can't wait. I read this story once a week. I adore your writing. I'm excited for hogwarts dawn, but when will you update your Harry/Wednesday fic?

red jacobson posted a comment on Sunday 26th October 2014 1:14am for Chapter 6

Another good chapter, and I liked the scene with Harry and the Champions just having fun and flying around. You've done a lot with Viktor in this story, and I'm enjoying the character development he's showing.

Had to laugh at the scene showing Gabrielle as a little brat, it was an interesting change from her portrayals in other stories.

See you next weekend

Red

myredturtle posted a comment on Sunday 26th October 2014 12:38am for Chapter 6

Another great chapter, thank you very much!