lwj2 posted a comment on Sunday 21st September 2014 6:47pm for Chapter 1

Great story, as usual. I like what you've done with Romilda and Astoria. Thanks for writing and sharing this.

srizkm posted a comment on Sunday 21st September 2014 6:33pm for Chapter 1

Alright...you just HAD to write another story where I'll be waiting for the next installments...thanks! Now I'll do my best to be patient...even if I really want all the chapters now...

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Sunday 21st September 2014 5:49pm for Chapter 1

Loved it! Had me grinning from start to finish.

diagonalpumpkin posted a comment on Sunday 21st September 2014 5:44pm for Chapter 1

Great first chapter. The end reminded me of Dumbledore's penance from Enslavement (not that that is in any way a bad thing). I'm happy to see two characters who are barely there in the books become important, and I'm excited to see how they progress. Again, great start to the story, and I'll be looking forward to next weeks chapter all week.

Sweetdoggie posted a comment on Sunday 21st September 2014 4:51pm for Chapter 1

Very interesting concept. I personally find Harry's fourth year to be the most interesting and the point in his life where he can actually make a difference. I like you bringing in two little-used characters and giving us a taste of something different. (Thank you for not using Ginny Weasley! She gives me the creeps.) Looking forward to the next update. Thanks for sharing your work. Most appreciated.

Crys posted a comment on Sunday 21st September 2014 4:21pm for Chapter 1

Nice setup so far.

Hope you're going to explain how Alastor apparently survived an AK.

Clever use of the elves.

Looking forward to more.

Fireshadow277 posted a comment on Sunday 21st September 2014 4:00pm for Chapter 1

Cool m8 realy cool

frankocsic posted a comment on Sunday 21st September 2014 3:54pm for Chapter 1

Great new story! Liking it so far, and I'm looking forward to more. Good job.

smileyface43 posted a comment on Sunday 21st September 2014 3:00pm for Chapter 1

Nice story so far. On a side note, even though the story is nowhere along those lines, whenever I read the title I get the image of an HP crack fic where Harry's character is the same as Zoolander's and the power he knows not is Magnum. And then reviewing the thought I wonder what the hell is wrong with me.

Tenchifew posted a comment on Sunday 21st September 2014 2:24pm for Chapter 1

Nice new story.

Looking forward to see it evolve.

Thank you for writing.

Jim_xinu posted a comment on Sunday 21st September 2014 2:07pm for Chapter 1

Great start. I especially like making the Goblet something really unusual to explain why it can force people.

Kara posted a comment on Sunday 21st September 2014 1:46pm for Chapter 1

Excellent!

I did like the personal hygene angle; I know I've smelled some rather ... fragrant ... people in the ladies' locker room at the gym, and as for the guys: 'nuff said!

A house elf rebellion? Cool... waiting for the next chapter!

musketau posted a comment on Sunday 21st September 2014 1:41pm for Chapter 1

I'm waiting for Hogwart's Dawn, but this was a sweet and juicy surprise in the meantime. You do tend to find new ways to do things, you even make Angst worth reading (like a cat in a bag), but i love these types of stories from you.

Overpowered Harry can be too much, but yours are just right, not trying to make incredible epics, just trying to make a life for Harry in the most entertaining ways possible.

I like the way Astoria is the smart one here, usually people have Daphne as smart and powerful, with Astoria the cute younger sister. You turned that on it's head in the best way, and the addition of Romilda is another surprise. Romilda is rarely used other than as a love potioner, or as a girlfriend for Ron to get him out of the way, so congratulations on finding another way to portray her.

While i'm drooling in anticipation for Hogwarts Dawn, this new story is drawing my attention as well. I read it twice before commenting, and love the fact there is so much already written.

Thanks for the inspiration and entertainment you have given through this and your other works.

Ravnos posted a comment on Sunday 21st September 2014 1:28pm for Chapter 1

This is a great begining to an exceptional story. I really like that you have brought in two realtivly minor characters and made them into very important parts of the plot, I can't wait to see what's next.

Pamela St Vines posted a comment on Sunday 21st September 2014 1:17pm for Chapter 1

You've totally captured my imagination. I love the slant you've put on house elves and can't wait to see what comes next. Thank you for the day brightener.

webdoc posted a comment on Sunday 21st September 2014 12:51pm for Chapter 1

Very interesting, I do not believe I have seen a fic with quite this take on the GOF. Well written and I quite thoroughly enjoyed it. looking forward to reading the rest when you post it. I have also really enjoyed the Hogwart's Dawn fic. Keep up the good work.

NORGCO posted a comment on Sunday 21st September 2014 10:34am for Chapter 1

Good.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Chris1 posted a comment on Sunday 21st September 2014 10:08am for Chapter 1

Woooo! :D I'm liking the exploration of magic in this - gypsy curses, adding some sense to nonsensical canon things... can't wait for the next chapter!

Brian64 posted a comment on Sunday 21st September 2014 9:45am for Chapter 1

Hey Clell, the clue for how Moody survived is in the cracked fake leg... ;)

gadriam posted a comment on Sunday 21st September 2014 9:04am for Chapter 1

Wonderful work.

As for the storyline itself, doesn't it seem like only under very specific circumstances, that just has to be engineered, can the repeated stupidity of Canon occur? I just adore stories where simple changes turns everything on its head. Sure, this time you introduced two intriguing characters, and once again Harry is insanely powerful. As he should be, according to the third book. Still, he gets believed by a rare few sane people. A small change that would have made all the difference.

I've stopped trying to predict your stories. I just enjoy the ride.

Thanks

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