By Jeconais
Reviews
NuvaChaos posted a comment on Wednesday 14th December 2005 4:56pm
love it
Orion posted a comment on Wednesday 14th December 2005 4:38pm
I must say i'm very impressed with this. On the other hand, i was really looking forward to Ginny's humiliation and subsiuent realization that she was acting badly.
margaret1 posted a comment on Wednesday 14th December 2005 4:27pm
*woo hoo* Harry, Ginny and Sammy are coming to Australia :)
I do love when you write Harry and Ginny :)
She certainly went to a lot of trouble to get Harry alone — this wasn’t a normal way of getting them together and I smiled at Harry’s reasoning for giving Ginny a chance, 'quite pretty and doesn’t bore me (I’m getting the feeling that Mr Potter may just be a bit surprised by Ginny as the story continues).
I enjoyed the training scenes, Harry certainly is a hard person to fight, especially with such a sneaky team behind him.
The idea of Harry being like Dumbledore was fantastic.
I felt sorry for Sammy, she is great little character and I laughed when she asked if she could throw fireballs at Ginny if she hurts Harry.
I’m looking forward to reading more from you and kokopelli
Margaret
Tarkas posted a comment on Wednesday 14th December 2005 3:56pm
Well, Tim, I don't know why you were so down on this part. It doesn't quite have the charm of the first part, but the plot -- specifically, the games with the Aurors -- doesn't really allow for that, and as a story, it's not bad by any stretch of the imagination. The real reason behind Ginny's behaviour was a clever surprise, and the comedy of errors as she tried to get in touch with Harry was very funny -- though I did wonder whether she was supposed to be able to get in touch with him or not. She tried and tried and tried, all to no avail, failing more than half the time because of her family not telling her about things like Harry's security, and yet Harry seems to think that she ought to have been able to find him anyway. Something doesn't quite gel there. And Harry's dislike of being manipulated does rather remind one of "Hope" -- a case of two stories by the same author with a similar sub-plot inevitably resembling one another, I suppose.
Sammy was as wonderful as ever, though it was a bit of a shock to see her suddenly lose her self-confidence with Harry. Hopefully, part 3 will let the two most important girls in Harry's life become accustomed to sharing him. Might be fun until it happens, though -- provided you're neither girl, nor Harry! < eg >
snuffles007 posted a comment on Monday 12th December 2005 8:37am
This is an excellent story, even with the non-traditional ships. Sammy is very cute and I like the way you have the entire Weasley clan working with Harry to teach Ginny a lesson. I can't wait for more!
Christina C. Keimig posted a comment on Saturday 10th December 2005 7:06pm
Oh, what fun!!!!!
ridmania posted a comment on Friday 9th December 2005 6:36am
i've just re-read this story and i love it sooo much!!! it's been ages since you published it and you left us on a cliffhanger!!! i wanna know how theauror tests go and if harry and ginny hook up!!!! please update soon? keep up the great work you bloody legend!!!
IceBlades posted a comment on Wednesday 7th December 2005 8:12pm
Great chunk of story, i cant wait to continue to the next part
Mir posted a comment on Wednesday 7th December 2005 1:27pm
THIS was excellent! I enjoyed it so much! I think you portrayed everyone fantastically, I love that Harry didn't actually donate his sperm to Cho and Draco, and I ADORE Sammy. Harry's aloneness does seem very realistic and true.
This is a great story!
Angie posted a comment on Sunday 4th December 2005 4:51am
Hi Jeconias!!! I'm from Puerto Rico and my english isn't very good. I just want to say that all your stories are facinating!!. I really enjoy reading them. You have an awesome talent!!.
You're a brilliant writer!!!.
Thanks for share your talent with other people!.
I specially love when you write about Ginny and Harry, and this storie seems to be very interesting so my wish for you is inspiration to continue writing it and all the others stories.
Thank you!!
Have a good day!
Bye bye.
Jordan posted a comment on Thursday 1st December 2005 6:19pm
UPDATE!! very nice story
DJ posted a comment on Saturday 26th November 2005 10:17pm
Two thumbs up Iwould love to see the rest of this story
Kook posted a comment on Wednesday 23rd November 2005 3:04am
Moreee again lol your just gonna keep finding moooooreeee on all your stories lol
Jayy posted a comment on Friday 18th November 2005 6:40pm
I want more! I want to see him take Ginny and the others down a peg. Great Fic. Update soon please!
Zach posted a comment on Sunday 13th November 2005 12:50am
I WANT MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please let me know when the next one is coming.
Manatheron posted a comment on Thursday 10th November 2005 2:28pm
so... when does the next chapter come out
;)
Junky posted a comment on Wednesday 9th November 2005 9:00pm
Damn, I can't wait for the next chapter! :(
Logan_MacLeod posted a comment on Tuesday 8th November 2005 11:00pm
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! Ever sine I found your story "This Means War" I have been reading all of your fictions. Like I said before, I love your dialogue and the way that you write Harry. He's not all-powerful (he is incredibly gifted) but he comes off a little like Wolverine (He's the best there is at what he does!) Please update this story because I really really like this one. On the flipside, why not bring in say Padma like in your other story because I'm pretty sure that since she went to school with him she doesn't see him as the "HARRY POTTER" just a thought. Until then Rock on and I'm gone!!
kada posted a comment on Friday 4th November 2005 5:44pm
I hope you continue this sometime -- I've always liked post-war Harry stories. And his relationship with Sammy is perfect!! Too Slytherin for words.
Gardengirl posted a comment on Wednesday 14th December 2005 5:44pm