By Jeconais
Reviews
Stone Cold posted a comment on Thursday 15th December 2005 6:21am
Not bad at all. I would have preferred more Hope, but not a bad fic.
At least your Ginny is more fleshed out than JK's Ginny Sue.
Antosha posted a comment on Thursday 15th December 2005 6:17am
Wonderful!
I loved the training exercises--and it was perfectly IC that Ginny had set the whole thing up.
And of course, the conversation with Sammie was a lovely payoff.
I look forward to the collaboration!
Louis IX posted a comment on Thursday 15th December 2005 6:15am
I like it a lot, again.
Crys posted a comment on Thursday 15th December 2005 6:12am
Very nice fight scenes.
Kinda roundabout way for her to get to talk with him. It's made to work, I suppose, just feels a little weird.
"Are you trying to spread your legs for a one night stand with me?" Harry asked. "A lot of trouble to go through for that."
"No," Ginny said, feeling herself blush. "Not the one-night part."
Very direct of him, but it does get the point across. She didn't deny the rest of his question and flatly admitted what she DOES want with him. Rather straightforward of them. Refreshing to see an adult Harry and adult Ginny.
I like Sammy. She even had a good argument for WHY he should wait.
parakletos posted a comment on Thursday 15th December 2005 5:33am
A thought it was a bit subdued, but that may be down to current circumstances. Interesting that everyone you would expect was included in Harry's inner cicle except for Ginny. No wonder the poor girl felt moved to desperate methods.
darktail posted a comment on Thursday 15th December 2005 5:22am
Can't wait for the next update, really! I fell in love with your story! Keep up the good work, bye!
m4rk6 posted a comment on Thursday 15th December 2005 4:25am
Cute fic. Grown up Harry kicks ass!! Will you write a prequel for this? Harry vs Voldymoldy?
Looks like Ginny has some growing up to do.If Harry isn't even mildly attracted to Ginny, hope he doesn't string her along. I mean... pretty enough, definitely good in a fight, and she didn’t bore him ... that's how he chooses a mate? Where's the sparks, the oomph, the bang, fireworks and all that crap! He should definitely hold out for better.
Mir posted a comment on Thursday 15th December 2005 4:15am
This was very good, but the ending ruined it a big. I didn't enjoy that you ended it with Sammy and Harry because it's a bit...i don't know...it's not a very happy scene, and i love happy scene endings. I also feel uncomfortable with Sammy and the fact the loves him. I didn't like that Ginny was being sort of stupid and i didn't like how Harry didn't really feel anything for her. I guess it was too realistic or something...
I would have liked more fluff in it, I guess.
Jamie46 posted a comment on Thursday 15th December 2005 4:07am
Awwww :) Poor Sammy; she was trying so hard to stop what she could tell was coming. ;) Cute, in a sneaky little girl kind of way. ;) lol. I have to give you props for how Ginny "engineered" the whole contest. A manipulation, yes, which was a bad idea on her part (or at least, not a smart idea), but from the last chapter where she was such a stuck-up little twit, I was wondering how on earth you were gonna make this a Harry/Ginny story (as it obviously would be, since it was in that subcategory). :) So yeah for throwing me for a loop. ;) hehehe (Not that that's particularly hard to do, but you still managed to blindside me. ;) Good job.) That was quite the cute little read. I'm really looking forward to the last installment. O:-)
UdderPD posted a comment on Thursday 15th December 2005 3:10am
Excellent, as allways.
TTFN UdderPD
Lincoln posted a comment on Thursday 15th December 2005 2:04am
Pretty good.. I didn't even see Ginny's master plan coming! but does Harry still give all the auror's a bollicking? Nice hints of fluff through it too!
Mickey posted a comment on Thursday 15th December 2005 1:55am
Very nice. Liked the way you showed Harry having grown up enough to try and figure out why Ginny had manipulated him.
Adam posted a comment on Thursday 15th December 2005 1:10am
Great chapter, I would have loved to hear what the aurors were told in the evealuation of their performance. Yes it may have been setup by Gin, but they really didnt give a good showing did they lol. It was good to see Gin finally get herself together and just tell him what she wanted, and that talk with Sammy was so sweet :)
scott2 posted a comment on Thursday 15th December 2005 12:22am
A nice little ongoing universe without harry being ultra powerful just a hardworking above averge joe.
Keep it up and I'll give you a lollipop :)
makieus posted a comment on Wednesday 14th December 2005 11:08pm
Love the Red Dwarf reference. I am a complete and utter Smeg Head. Have every episode, and keep hoping they make Red Dwarf, the movie. Oh well, won't bother you about This Means War. I would rather have you take your time, to have it end well, than just hash something out. Love your Hope story. Actually, like just about everything you have done, and epsically this website. EXTREMELY glad that there is NO SLASH HERE!!!!!!! THANKYOU
Well, back to the grind, Final in a few hours. Thanks
Mak
roastpuff posted a comment on Wednesday 14th December 2005 10:04pm
Sooooo cute! I love the ending.
AzureSky posted a comment on Wednesday 14th December 2005 9:51pm
Great chapter. I didn't expect that all of that is Ginny's plan to impress Harry lol.
Jim_xinu posted a comment on Wednesday 14th December 2005 5:55pm
Cuuuute! I was rather surprised that it was a set up by Ginny. Sammy's very sweet. Did the idea for her come to you in relation to Hope?
Looking forward to Kokopelli's part.
Thanks!
Carlos posted a comment on Wednesday 14th December 2005 5:47pm
great chapter!!!
I was shocked that how these aurors were so lazy and esily manipulated by ginny...
great chapter...
cant wait till the final chapter comes out!!
Shawn Pickett posted a comment on Thursday 15th December 2005 6:27am