By Jeconais
Reviews
Elle T posted a comment on Monday 9th January 2006 8:48pm
This is just geogeous and a fantastic, wonderfula nd great piece of work!!
i really love it and i will be looking forward tot he rest of the story!!
Thankx
Elle
Elle T posted a comment on Monday 9th January 2006 8:26pm
Very very very very GOOOOODDDD!!!
I love it!!
Good lucka nd great work!!
Elle
Jarrod posted a comment on Friday 6th January 2006 8:56am
Jec, Well done and well written as your stuff is. Though I gotta say, you need to work on finishing stuff up and not leave us hanging in a bunch of different stories ;-) Keep it coming!
Phoenixdor Dragonclaw posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd January 2006 9:09pm
Great I love it, especially Little Sammie.
phsname posted a comment on Saturday 31st December 2005 10:09pm
haha...sammy is too cute...i loved it.
im surprised at how much you managed to pack into this chapter, and still manage to make it so...good?
as i said before, this is a very fun story, and i cant wait for the third part.
:D
phsname posted a comment on Saturday 31st December 2005 9:21pm
the trading of the "normal", or more common at least, ships in this story are kinda awkward, but i find it sort of amusing as well.
anyway, while this story doesnt seem to stand out like your TMW and Hope stories do, it's a very fun read. i'm enjoying it a lot.
keep it up, :D
N Reynolds posted a comment on Friday 30th December 2005 3:39pm
Took me weeks to read this.
Getting a password takes you to a blank page.
Logging in gets a blank page.
Trying again asks your birthday which leads to a blank page
Trying again asks your consent leading to a blank page
Trying again actually brought up the story to read.
I'm using firefox mozilla, but the problem seems to be the html code, with the form action ending "&refer=" without referring to anything.
EricThorsen posted a comment on Thursday 29th December 2005 8:58am
I like this better than the story its a sequel to, if that makes any sense. I especially liked Sammy. There has been a lot of discussion about the realism of Harry accepting Ginny after the manipulation, especially with his reaction to Dumbledore. I see it more as a difference between level of importance... one manipulation lasted most of his childhood, the other lasted a few months with him as the target rather than the manipulated one. Goood work overall... I especially like the game of capture the flag.
spurio23 posted a comment on Monday 26th December 2005 10:28pm
I rather like this set of stories. Love Sammy. I like the realism and how this Harry is becoming balanced and mature. He's a good man.
DJ posted a comment on Monday 19th December 2005 9:36pm
Just wondering is that the end or will do more with this very good story? I hope you add to it and soon. Your Harry & Gabrielle story is also grate I would love to see more of that one as well. Thanks for all your work.
Jonathan Langford posted a comment on Monday 19th December 2005 12:03pm
Cute! I like it, even though I don't particularly like Ginny...
edo posted a comment on Sunday 18th December 2005 4:24pm
Sigue asà tus historias son geniales, un excelente trabajo.
Esperando las actualizaciones
IXper posted a comment on Saturday 17th December 2005 8:42pm
Awww, too bad for Sammy. If Ginny had to go through all of this to get Harry's attention, I would have loved to see what a grown up Sammy would do. Especially one as smart as her.
Donald McLeod posted a comment on Saturday 17th December 2005 5:16am
nice story I like the interplay between Sammy and Harry. But would have liked it more if Ginny and Harry had a chapter to themselfs for demension. ---- thank you
Don
brad posted a comment on Saturday 17th December 2005 2:07am
Well, it's a bit far-fetched, I reckon, to have the whole reason behind the Auror war games be a romantically frustrated Ginevra Weasley. "Acting like a bitch to [her] family for the better part of a year" seems a bit of an extreme method to get Harry to notice her. I *know* she explains why ... but, I dunno ... she could have just asked one of her family. Fred says "none of us bothered to tell" her ... which means if she'd asked, they could have easily done so?
Oh well, just nit-picking, fun story regardless.
The bit with Sammy at the end ... have you ever read Heinlein's "The Door into Summer"? Lovely story, with a nice fantasy/romantic conclusion that has a bit in common with what Sammy was after here (an *excellent* punch line/surprise twist - for me, anyway - that is really moving). I won't spoil it for you, but odds are either you've read it, or the Heinlein fans in the group have already talked about it.
(In all seriousness, it would be possible - without an associated 'ewwww' factor - to have a Harry/Sammy romance, were you to go down that path)
Enjoyed the actual war-games, of course; I'll have to read the chapter again in a couple of days time to absorb it better. My goodness, a) I didn't expect Harry to deck a girl, and b) I got a bit of vicarious satisfaction myself when I found out it was Marietta! Excellent. I think I must have read a couple of Harry-forgives-all stories when it comes to her for the last six months (including a re-read of Kokopelli's TLOS) so it was excellent to see Harry get his revenge here!
Harry's ... evolution? ... into a second Dumbledore was an interesting thought, but very satisfying; that and the emphasis that he wouldn't be alone. Good stuff.
Looking forward to the final story! Thanks for this one.
Alex13 posted a comment on Friday 16th December 2005 10:49pm
That's the end of it?
How dissapointing.
The last bit was very nice.
The question about boobs and such had me laughing for a full minute and I had to share it with all my friends.
Anyway, despite that I'll be looking forward to the next part.
Alex out.
The Resident posted a comment on Friday 16th December 2005 10:36pm
Exceelent part. I really like this confident Harry. I like the interaction with Sammy there at the end as well. All in all, a very enjoyable read.
stormmaster posted a comment on Friday 16th December 2005 5:35pm
... WOO HOO! That was awesome! I didn't expect that twist with Ginny, but hey, it was a good twist. The image of a seven year old girl throwing fireballs is particullarly funny. You have once again outdone yourself, Jeconais, and I salute you. :D
uten posted a comment on Friday 16th December 2005 5:17pm
I quite liked this chapter. The tactics in the fight were extremely well done, and did show that the Aurors were becoming sloppy.
Thye scenes between Harry and Ginny were well done as well. A typical Weasley reaction, as you wrote, but we are yet to see if Ginny does land him for good - even though it's in the Harry/Ginny section. Ginny's attempts were a little childish..
I find the intelligent little Veela you have created to the most interesting part of the story however. The interaction between Sammy and Harry, and Fleur in this chapter as well, is extraordinarily well done. Her love for Harry shows, as does her intelligence and wit. Her argument for Harry waiting for her to grow up and then marry her was quite sound, and even though Harry said he couldn't love her that way, I find myself hoping that it doesn't work out with Ginny and he does wait for that very interesting young Veela to grow up and become a woman, just as she suggested. Ironic, as normally the idea of that sort would squick me, but Sammy is just so interesting, and to be honest, from what you've written, she seems almost more mature than Ginny is. Makes me hope Sammy does land Harry eventually, even if she has to share him with Ginny. I look forward to the next chapter a great deal.
Lira posted a comment on Wednesday 11th January 2006 3:08am