Alone
Part 1
By Jeconais
Reviews
JLHERC posted a comment on Monday 12th September 2005 11:40am for Part 1
Less of a review, more of a question. Just wondering how the moving is coming and when we can expect the explosive finale's of WK,GQ and TMW.. as well as the continuations of this story and Hope. Hope everything is well.
DeeDee posted a comment on Thursday 8th September 2005 2:31am for Part 1
Interesting start, but I hope your updating really really soon, because I haven't heard from you in a while.
Camillekiss posted a comment on Wednesday 7th September 2005 5:17am for Part 1
Do you ever get tired of writing these stories? Because you seem to have an endless imagination, and I think this is one of your best stories this far (well, that I found on this site). So, a heartfelt thank you for taking the time to write them, coz otherwise I would have a lot of spare time on my hands and a lot less imagination to turn to!!
ThunderGod posted a comment on Saturday 3rd September 2005 12:35pm for Part 1
ARRRrgghhhhhh...cliffie.....more please, I like this story...very much so.
ThunderGod
Marte posted a comment on Sunday 28th August 2005 7:21am for Part 1
Loved it, looking very much forward to the next installment! Hope you have settled comfortably in your new house!
James posted a comment on Thursday 25th August 2005 6:28am for Part 1
I know I keep saying this but this is great. I can't wait for the next chapter, though I suspect the Weasleys are going to get a nasty surprise when they find out exactly how much Ginny has to be cocky about. The Games should be fun. And, like everyone else, I can't wait so update soon
hoss posted a comment on Saturday 20th August 2005 4:01am for Part 1
"Damn it I knew that introducing you to muggle movies was a bad idea." Don't be koncking Samuel," Kingsly said seriously. This and the paragraph before were pure prefection for the Kingsly in my head. I guss I'll one more to look forward to thanks
Malika posted a comment on Friday 19th August 2005 11:26am for Part 1
Wonderful! This story really uplifted me! I can't wait to see what happens next. It will be nice putting Ginny in her place. But i think that her and harry would be cute together. He needs someone like her. Anyways i hope you continue soon.
justme posted a comment on Tuesday 16th August 2005 3:44am for Part 1
A quick question:
Why was Hermione so upset about Harry taking on the Aurors?
Was it because she was afraid that he might slip back in to his *isolation shell*?
Patches posted a comment on Monday 15th August 2005 10:38pm for Part 1
I like your 3 part stories. They are good by themselves and I look forward to the last story in each group. I know you have written other stories but I'm a little partial to the ones where Harry and Ginny end up together. I hope this turns out to be one of those. I hope your moving is going well and without any major problems. I look forward to your updates no matter which story you have worked on recently. Of course I am looking forward to the completion of TMW and WK/GQ. Thank you for all your stories. I think I've real all of the ones on this web site now.
Rose posted a comment on Saturday 13th August 2005 2:14pm for Part 1
I think its really good, and I really like how you pretty much destrpyed the steriotypical Weasley girlfriends. Like, theres usually Ron/Hermione, Fred/Katie, George/Angelina, Percy/Penelope, blah, blah, blah, but I really love how you reversed it, its really nice to read something different that doesnt suck lol
Great job :)
Jamie posted a comment on Tuesday 9th August 2005 8:09am for Part 1
Love it love it love it! :-D wow. AWESOME! :) hehehe. I liked the previous story, but this sequel, this intro into Harry's "regular" life, the Weasleys, etc etc etc, is all wonderful. :) I loved Sammy; she's so cute. And I can't wait to see how the next chapter goes! I'm so glad I randomly decided to check your site for updates! :-D >hugs
The Resident posted a comment on Saturday 6th August 2005 5:02pm for Part 1
Excellent as always. My you never run out of ideas. I love Sammy; I've met one or two like her in the past 58 years.
He who used to be Grossclout.
P.S. After 28 years in the USAF, I know all about moves and movers. I wish you good luck ;-)
Brad posted a comment on Saturday 6th August 2005 4:36pm for Part 1
Loved the story, Tim. I'll review here since it's too late for your Yahoo group, everyone else there debated the story days ago :-(. I just can't help tendency to 'save' good stuff for proper quality reading time on the weekends.
No offense, but almost all of your stories to date have had little spelling or grammatical errors in them, or the occasional clumsy sentence. No big deal - one slight occurrence every few pages? - but enough to notice, albeit not marring the story. I don't go *looking* for imperfections, I sit back and *enjoy* the stories, but a small part of me still notices such things.
But 'Alone' was perfect in this cosmetic respect, I thought. When I put it down, feeling most satisfied, one of my feelings was that it was a very 'polished' story ... read perfectly, no clumsiness or technical errors whatsoever. Added to my overall feeling of pleasure with the story.
I enjoyed very much the repartee you had between all the characters, particularly the bits between Harry and Sammy. Just delightful. Quite a shock when Fleur had her 'unwarranted' thoughts ... concern that Harry may have been molesting her daughter, I assume. Sad that real life is like that these days. But otherwise the Harry/Sammy bond was delightful in its innocence as in all its other aspects. *Really* enjoyed that, and overall how Harry is fitting in with the Weasleys.
Glad, also, that Potter genes weren't necessary for the Malfoys. Maybe that's a direction for a whole different story - Harry having a son out of his control, as you note his thoughts on said topic here - but I enjoyed this story for its more positive, optimistic ambience.
Couldn't help but notice the complete contrast between this story and 'Hope' in how Ron and Hermione feel about 'manipulating' Harry. Excellent. My goodness, I imagine you're going to have fun in the other story dealing with how they learn this same lesson the hard way, after Harry confirms his suspicions about how they've set him up with Gabrielle! Very, very clever/nice how you've made a link between the two like that. It must be so much fun to have such a body of work that you can slip in things like that, examine facets of Harry Potter from more than one side! In addition to your ongoing shipping exploration, of course.
Well, I hope you let Harry outclass the aurors ... I'm a little worried that you're going to have Ginny do some one-upmanship on him that will suddenly make him start falling for her. We'll see. Enjoyed also the collusion amongst the non-Ginny OBHWF in 'repeating' the collaboration that worked so well in defeating Voldemort (which we're seeing actually happen in TMW! - more crosstalk between your stories). Happy Endings *are* a delight to read.
I love a weekend where I can read something from you! Well, now that I've posted this, I can get back to reading my Jeconais Yahoo digests. Enjoy your new life in the mansion! Brad.
Treecat posted a comment on Saturday 6th August 2005 11:38am for Part 1
Hey i'm a fanfiction user turning Jeconais. Cool story. update soon.
Cya
Treecat
Lucia posted a comment on Friday 5th August 2005 7:23am for Part 1
I didn't actually read the prequel or the story which this is a sequel :) before because, well it seemed a bit long -ish and the start was suspiciously muggle. Then I had to read for this to make sense and it was really good. I'm so glad I read it actually. And then here's another one of your stories that leave me wanting for an update asap. Do you have any idea how irritating that can be?
... just kidding.
The most, I love your Harry. He's so powerful, purposeful, connected and has loads of charm that I think I saw a little in HBP.
Barkeeper posted a comment on Friday 5th August 2005 3:34am for Part 1
Yay! I'm lost. i think you managed to juggle all couples known to the readers. What's next? Ginny going out with Lee Jordan, Neville being married to Millicent Bulstrode? Seamus dating Eloise Midgen? Vincent Crabbe in love with Marietta Edgecombe?
*shakes head*
Fate posted a comment on Thursday 4th August 2005 8:30pm for Part 1
This is brilliant!!!
I just loved the whole thing, Can't wait for more!!!!
Nick posted a comment on Thursday 4th August 2005 7:33pm for Part 1
Great start to the story, can't wait to see the games begin :P
Keep up the good work.
Random point: -san isn't a particularly respectful honorific; it's the standard, used when the person isn't particularly close and is of similar status. If Sami's being respectful, she'd use the -sama honorific.
Adam posted a comment on Tuesday 13th September 2005 12:50am for Part 1