Kalen Darkmoon posted a comment on Friday 13th June 2008 6:11pm for Chapter 4

Great new story. Harry/Gabrielle shares my favorite shipping place with Harry/Hermione. In fact, Hope sits as my absolute favorite romance HP fic. (I had to specify that since Make A Wish is my fav comedy fic and it's hard to choose between the two for a true first place HP fic.) This one is off to a fun, original and interesting start. You do this pairing so very well.

Keep up the great storytelling!

FireFairy posted a comment on Friday 13th June 2008 4:39pm for Chapter 4

Only 48 hours left? How many chapters is that? This was really a terrific chapter, I loved it! I can't wait to see the publics reaction to the jokeshop and the restaurant! Can't wait for the next chapter and i don't want this story to end!

redhandgrunt posted a comment on Friday 13th June 2008 4:23pm for Chapter 4

Fun chapter. Thanks for the effort put into writing this.

James Barber posted a comment on Friday 13th June 2008 2:50pm for Chapter 4

Hey as usual an outstanding update! You know I have always loved the way you set everyone up for a better job or position, when they were at Percy's I saw and was reminded of the best damn hp universe fanfiction ever written which of course was "This Means War!" I am so looking forward to the next couple of chapters!

willyjoeshow posted a comment on Friday 13th June 2008 2:22pm for Chapter 4

Damn good chapter...Hell, damn good story so far. Keep up the great work.

Ben10 posted a comment on Friday 13th June 2008 2:15pm for Chapter 4

Sure it's true that these four chapters have covered very little time, but the time that they have covered has been very entertaining. And by the way, I don't think I'll ever grow tired of Malfoy-abuse.

Daenin posted a comment on Friday 13th June 2008 12:34pm for Chapter 4

Great chapter, I love it!

Rick D Gale posted a comment on Friday 13th June 2008 10:45am for Chapter 4

Another great chapter! I have no doubt Harry and Gabrielle are about to set the wizarding world on on it's ear (with a little help from their friends)!

I look forward to your next chapter!

rdgale

Jer posted a comment on Friday 13th June 2008 9:53am for Chapter 4

Another excellent chapter of a very fun and worthwhile read. Thanks a ton for posting it for us, and for the excellent stories you keep giving us.

Meteoricshipyards posted a comment on Friday 13th June 2008 9:43am for Chapter 4

Malfoy with regular sessions with Hermione the head shrinker. Couldn't have happened to a nicer guy!

Didn't catch the reference to "winding him up." I think I'm slow.

Still loving this story.

Thanks for writing it.

Tom A.

biged78 posted a comment on Friday 13th June 2008 9:28am for Chapter 4

If you write it, I will read it.

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Friday 13th June 2008 7:53am for Chapter 4

-It’s fun, because not many of them are too terribly bright,
-and I can normally make productive members of society out of
-them with a little effort."

Brainwashing by any other name, even if it is for the right
reasons. *snicker* They don't use their brains much so she
should be having a field day.


-No Prince in the fairytales ever turned down the beautiful Princess
— especially when she finally grew boobs.

LOL! I love how she keeps referring back to that.


-"This is the first, last and only time that we sleep in the same bed
-platonically," she said quietly.

Hehehe. He really should have pointed out that it was not platonic
at all. They really do intend to have sex, so platonic is right out.


-Every professor who had been teaching at the school during the time of the
-Marauders shuddered dramatically — including the Headmaster.

Lily would have been as big a boon as Hermione would have been if the
twins had managed to snag her.


-"That it is going to be a lot of fun; I can watch the fireworks from a safe
-difference."

Albus isn't an idiot, but I'm willing to bet Hermione spent some time
working on him subtly so he'd reach the right conclusions.

Ceres posted a comment on Friday 13th June 2008 7:39am for Chapter 4

lol i think it has been more than 38 hours. umm i like this story because it annoys draco and i think its fun to wind him up and annoying him its just fun. well please update soon oh nd if you have time look at your bugs bunny in hogwarts i know im not the only one who wants you to update. well think about it please and thankyou

BaltaineShadow posted a comment on Friday 13th June 2008 7:29am for Chapter 4

That was as wonderful as expected... *grin* especially the part when Gabrielle destroyed Draco's wand and Dumbledore said: "Do you think you could extinguish the fire? I’m afraid that the smell of burnt flesh might put the children off their breakfast."
That was so good! I almost fell off my chair because I laughed so hard...
Now please go on! I'm waiting for the next chapter! *smile*

rune1806 posted a comment on Friday 13th June 2008 6:53am for Chapter 4

So she is crazy, cool that means anything goes. A naked veela you must be thinking this is a Jbern story (ha ha). Great way to take out Malfoy and Fudge very funny. Overall a very funny and light hearted read.

Jujuberry posted a comment on Friday 13th June 2008 5:25am for Chapter 4

Lovely chapter, as always! Thanks so much for sharing!!

Ruth Smith posted a comment on Friday 13th June 2008 5:19am for Chapter 4

Excellent, very entertaining!

Clell65619 posted a comment on Friday 13th June 2008 4:50am for Chapter 4

- Thank you. The way everything was going I was expecting a reformed Draco who also poured information into Harry's head.

kate19 posted a comment on Friday 13th June 2008 4:29am for Chapter 4

loved it!! and of course is malfoy predictable!! he always is!! can't wait for the next chapters!!

Phoenix4life posted a comment on Friday 13th June 2008 12:36am for Chapter 4

This is totally awesome. I can't wait to read the next chapter. I'm a huge fan of your work.