TheNekoWithWings posted a comment on Saturday 20th September 2008 8:26am for Part 16

Omigodomigodomigod.... you're awesome. Rocking like an 80s metal band. Pleeeaaaaase update! >.<

Tiffls posted a comment on Monday 8th September 2008 3:55pm for Part 16

I have read quite a few good things about this story and it has lived up to everyone of them. Thanks for writing!

Godogma posted a comment on Monday 1st September 2008 10:50pm for Part 16

Excellent chapter, I'd quite like to see it finished. I've read it several times. Its a very realistic take on Xander and Dawn in a relationship - even though it does have some character bashing in the beginning (in my experience its very hard not to have character bashing for later season Buffy - the writers were grabbing more and more stupidity to stuff into the characters/show to try and keep its death knell at bay).

As it stands this is excellent, I've been reading it at the XanderZone and the 16th part isn't posted there.

Lady FoxFire posted a comment on Friday 25th July 2008 2:21am for Part 16

Found and LOVED!!! But please finished this story.

Michael10 posted a comment on Friday 25th July 2008 2:05am for Part 16

Sat and re-read the whole thing. Still a great story. Come on, you say only a chapter or two...PLEASE, in the words of a certain sorcerer from Mortal Kombat, "FINISH HIM" or in this case IT. Please, still awesome story.

Holly posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd July 2008 8:35pm for Part 16

I just found this story and I have to tell you I LOVE it! I've not read any Xander/Dawn pairing stories before but now I think it might be one of my favorite pairings. I hope you update again soon! Keep up the great work.

bsr posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd July 2008 6:31pm for Part 16

was wondering if your going to finsh this

easysam posted a comment on Friday 20th June 2008 9:47pm for Part 16

This is one of the best fic I have ever read. I can't wait for it to be continued. Keep up the great work!

Sam

Chris Steadman posted a comment on Sunday 8th June 2008 12:45am for Part 16

I hope that someday you pick this up again. I've really enjoyed it each time I've read and reread it. It makes for great re-reading!

redjacobson posted a comment on Thursday 5th June 2008 5:31am for Part 16

Hey Tim; just finished re-reading this story; and I really hope you find time to move this one to the top of the 'to be finished' pile,
because I'm really interested in seeing what happens next.

I'll have to admit, I was concerned with how you had been characterizing Buffy in the beginning of the story; but, with the explanation of how Spike has been manipulating her, including the mention of hypnosis; it does make a good bit more sense.

Looking forward to more. Oh, and, a quick question; are you going to be doing any more with the Witch and the Warrior story?

red

James13 posted a comment on Monday 2nd June 2008 11:05pm for Part 16

Aah. I must say I love this story :)

You were right about the first 2 chapters being slightly dodgy with the bashing, but after that, I haven't a single complaint about it, and indeed, I gladly praise you.

Nice to see some thinking characters and it's wonderful to see a grownup Xander, who can have an adult conversation with his once hated rival, and even crack jokes with Angel.

All in all, the chars are true to themselves, once realize that they are actually thinking, breathing entities.

skyblade85 posted a comment on Sunday 25th May 2008 6:33pm for Part 16

hey love this story i dont know how many times ive read it was wondering when you would get back to it or if you would find someone else to finish it cause i really really would like to see how this story ends

redhandgrunt posted a comment on Monday 19th May 2008 8:53am for Part 16

This is a truly great story. You have no idea how much I hope you come back to it someday.

trinkle28655 posted a comment on Wednesday 30th April 2008 8:54pm for Part 16

loved it can't wait for more

child_of_lore posted a comment on Monday 28th April 2008 1:55pm for Part 16

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Wow I love this pairing and this has got to be one of the best stories with it, I read so far. You shoud definalty update when you can get a chance. Cause leaving on a cliffhanger is just wrong! love your stories keep up the good work!

kcgx23 posted a comment on Tuesday 11th March 2008 7:15am for Part 16

I love this fic, please update soon, I want to read more.

Maverick512000 posted a comment on Tuesday 4th March 2008 9:58pm for Part 16

Amazing story, though i realize the odds are slim I do hope you'll fimish it someday.

Nick8 posted a comment on Tuesday 4th March 2008 11:08am for Part 16

... damn you... I'm now hooked on X/D pairing and there are not that many decent ones out there. It's all you fault you know... you just had to be an awesome writer didn't you.

I have found a few other decent X/D fics out there but nothing to the caliber of your three. So please help me with my new addiction and bring out a new chapter or three? Please?

Slade01 posted a comment on Tuesday 15th January 2008 2:39pm for Part 16

need more, this is the best X/D fic that i have ever seen and i hope that more will be posted. please, i want to see more of it.

Chuck posted a comment on Wednesday 9th January 2008 4:27pm for Part 16

Is there any chance we will get to see more of this story? its certainly one of my favorites it nice to see the development and the time taken.