stacey posted a comment on Thursday 30th June 2005 5:14pm for 5 - Planning

awesome chapter!!!! can't wait until you post more!!! how many more chapters are there going to be? love your work by the way!

John Wilburn posted a comment on Thursday 30th June 2005 5:10pm for 5 - Planning

As always your stories just get better and better. I've read other stories with Harry/Pansy, but yours is the only one I've ever read that is belivable.
Thanks for a great read.
John

Mark posted a comment on Thursday 30th June 2005 5:07pm for 5 - Planning

Tim,

This chapter was brilliant. I really like the hair brushing scene (i liked it in DrT's stories as well) as it alludes to an intimacy that is just off-the-scale.

I really liked the meetings, particularly the one with Ms Bones and the one where Dobby was given clothes.

Are you going to be explaining a bit more on why the Hogwarts elves are so anti Dobby. It wasn't clear to me - though i may have missed something.

Keep up the great work.

Black's Phoenix posted a comment on Thursday 30th June 2005 4:51pm for 5 - Planning

Excellent. Harry deciding to make it look like he apparated into the great hall is going to shock everyone and make them believe that he did the impossible. Time for everyone to see what has happened to Harry and be rocked to their core.

crazy posted a comment on Thursday 30th June 2005 4:27pm for 5 - Planning

I can't remember the movie it came from but "That's just mean!" leaving it at that point, ugh..... thanks

The Silent Legend posted a comment on Thursday 30th June 2005 4:17pm for 5 - Planning

Another outstanding chapter... keep up the great work ;)

Nick posted a comment on Thursday 30th June 2005 3:47pm for 5 - Planning

I really like what you got so far. It is very different. That is a good thing. For some reason I love Hope. Don't why but I enjoying reading that story. I really like the fact that your not one of these geeks hell bent on the ship. Sure you have a lot of romance but you also have a great plot and good action. All your stories are good. I haven't read a bad one yet. You and Ruskbyte are the only two people who can write more then one good story. I looking foward to an update on this as well as your other great stories. Really looking foward to Hope.

Nick

HermioneGreen posted a comment on Thursday 30th June 2005 3:41pm for 5 - Planning

Awesome chapter!!!!! I love the "tests" that Harry and Pansy passed with flying colors. I look forward to more.

'Mione

Anand posted a comment on Thursday 30th June 2005 3:38pm for 5 - Planning

Ha! Absolutely brilliant way to end the chapter. You've laid the pieces on the board, and next chapter, the match truly begins. I can't wait!

silent-fire posted a comment on Thursday 30th June 2005 3:35pm for 5 - Planning

Gah! Need next chapter. Must have next chapter. Evil author. Very, very brilliant but evil author.

kokopelli posted a comment on Thursday 30th June 2005 3:06pm for 5 - Planning

"Just kissing," Harry replied.

Should be -Pansy- replied.

Whoops!

Sorry,

JEC