Pamr6 posted a comment on Friday 1st July 2005 10:12am for 5 - Planning

ARGH!!! I'm not going to repeat what I said when I read the last night but I will say WHAT A CLIFFIE!!! And what a wonderful chapter - this story just keeps getting better and better. Loved the Marines.

Harry almost seems superpowered until you realize that he is suppose to fight Voldemort and the ill treatment at the hands of everyone around him worked against his developement. Harry is an emotional person; feed his emotions with positive energy and stand back.
Your take on his developement makes sense with canon. JKR is basing her story on what RL does with people; you're giving the poor kid a break. Yea you!

Thanks for the thrilling ride and am looking forward to Chapter 6 where Dumbledore goes down (a little). Heh heh heh.

Joseph Kellogg posted a comment on Friday 1st July 2005 10:12am for 5 - Planning

You are so evil ending it like that I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope that this long weekend gives you time to bring out chapter six.

Zack posted a comment on Friday 1st July 2005 10:05am for 5 - Planning

Love your stories, they are some of the most well written fan fics i have read. Please keep up the good work. I particularly liked Red and Yellow and also This means War. Would you ever consider writting a fic with Harry/Susan, Harry/Blaise or Harry/Katie?

Baiju Gadhia posted a comment on Friday 1st July 2005 9:54am for 5 - Planning

Don't Be So Crual.
How can you leave us hanging like this for a week till you post the next part. Forces me to paraphase
" Muuuust Haaave Fiiics"

I'm not one for posting much, prefering more to lurk, but just had to post a review this time.

Seriously, I'm really enjoying the fic. Love all your stories, and and must have reread most of the too many times to count. Am Egearly awaiting for the last part of TMW.

How is the rewriting of the 5th house going. Are you planning to upload the old story here till you post the rewritten one.

Rob posted a comment on Friday 1st July 2005 8:23am for 5 - Planning

Hi

I love the Story

Keep Up the Good work

Can't wait for more

Rob

Thelvyn posted a comment on Friday 1st July 2005 8:10am for 5 - Planning

Excellent chapter, action packed all the way through. But leaving it there... that's just cruel.

Philipe posted a comment on Friday 1st July 2005 7:53am for 5 - Planning

Love the end, but i hate you (unless of course you realse the nexte chapter, but since i know your a evil spaw of the devil, your gonna let me suffer here until you post the next chapter.

Jokes aside, Love the chapter, but i found the muggle course a little confusing, and i didn't get what Harry did with martial art expert.. I didnt really got a good visual on that one, but i'm going to read again now, so i hope i'll get it now..

God, i can't wait for Albus reaction.. i'm so gonna skin you alive.. *grumbles*

See ya, Philipe

Goyana posted a comment on Friday 1st July 2005 7:37am for 5 - Planning

wow, each chapter keeps getting better and better, this is prolly the most realistic Harry/Pansy story without Harry going dark around. I just hope you actually finish it, because ive read alot of good fics like this, and they get abandoned for no reason.

ENSIGN posted a comment on Friday 1st July 2005 7:23am for 5 - Planning

argh. evil cliffhanger. nooo. excellent chapter. can't wait for the next. particularly love how he popped at the end.

hasapi posted a comment on Friday 1st July 2005 6:36am for 5 - Planning

Fun! Seriously, that was an awesome way to end the chapter. :) And this is SUCH good fun... I can't wait to read the next chapter!

- hasapi

Jack posted a comment on Friday 1st July 2005 5:59am for 5 - Planning

Outstanding.

I like the fact that Bones had a backbone, and that Harry did not need to impress the goblins much. You handled Minerva particularly well.

I did think it odd that, as uncomfortable as the thought of giving 'the talk' to Harry was, Malcom did not have Remus do it. Speaking of which, as Remus is supposed to have moved in, odd that we don't see him here.

On the other hand, I do like the way the talk played out between Harry and Mal. I really liked the way it played out between Pansy and Gruoch. Pansy seems more human and less perfect with a few simple misconceptions.

Nice that there was an explanation for Harry and Pansy's performance on the commando course -- that was feeling a bit over the top.

My only real disappointment here was that I hoped to see at least a bit more of the welcoming feast.

Looking forward to the next installment. :-)

Mickey posted a comment on Friday 1st July 2005 5:09am for 5 - Planning

Very nice. However you have the parkinsons have too muc power. With that amount of power they wouldn't have neededHarry's help.

Mickey

Brad posted a comment on Friday 1st July 2005 5:09am for 5 - Planning

wow I cant wait for the next chapter, this is going to be really evil! I mean harry apearing like he apparated into the great hall! it's going to trough tumbledore off his sherbert lemons! Hermione is going to freak! oh and the look on everyone elses favces is going to be well worth the description from you tim! i await with bated breath your and your beta readers finishing of the next chapter!

Itinerant posted a comment on Friday 1st July 2005 4:48am for 5 - Planning

Jeconais,

Your work is well done. It is engaging even for those of us who are not intimately familiar with Harry Potter.

You have managed to paint interesting, believable characters that are worth taking time to know.

Thank you.

Itinerant

Kelvin posted a comment on Friday 1st July 2005 4:39am for 5 - Planning

OMG, i cant believe you ended this like that, now i dunno what i would do to wait for the next one.

Please update soon, i am dying to know what happens next.

Hannah posted a comment on Friday 1st July 2005 2:52am for 5 - Planning

Brilliant, as always. I just wish you hadn't stopped. I know that it was an apt time to finish the chapter on that line, but I really want to know what every ones reactions are to both Harry and the 'real' Pansy.

It really was a great one liner at the end there.

Camille posted a comment on Friday 1st July 2005 2:01am for 5 - Planning

I loved this chapter!!!!!!! I think that you're now my favourite author (and yes, that's supposed to be a compliment).

TheGimp posted a comment on Friday 1st July 2005 1:35am for 5 - Planning

First of all, I will say that this rewiew will do nothing but inflate you ego and hopefully get you to get the next chapter out faster.

Now on to the praises and begging for more. I LOVE THIS STORY!!! It's great. I love how harry acts in it and how he's taking control in a very believable way. Keep up the great work and PLEASE PLEASE PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE get the next chapter out soon. I really want to see the reactions of Dumbledore and the events with him and the rest of the scool.

BferBear posted a comment on Friday 1st July 2005 1:19am for 5 - Planning

Great story so far, am really looking forward to reading it further. I find myself anticipating this story much more than anything else you have written.

robin82 posted a comment on Friday 1st July 2005 12:29am for 5 - Planning

This story is fantastic!i love the Harry/Pansy story, and yours is absolutely the best!
if you want my advice because i'm italian, the correct phrase:
"La vendetta è un piatto, servito il più bene il freddo"
is:
"La vendetta è un piatto che va servito freddo"
Dobby is one of my favourite character, and also Malcom and Grouch. great story!!!