rowin posted a comment on Thursday 9th June 2005 3:04pm for 3 - Recovery

great chapter cant wait to see number 4

Sarah posted a comment on Thursday 9th June 2005 3:00pm for 3 - Recovery

HOO Baby!!! You give good story! This has all the elements - long, involved, funny, interesting. Thanks.

Philipe (Post Scriptum) posted a comment on Thursday 9th June 2005 2:44pm for 3 - Recovery

Hey Tim,
Yep, that ´s a Led Zeppelin concert! Really good, with enought action, but not thye main part of it.. I'm worry about your Ginny caracter, 'cause i can't see that turning out diferent from what happen in your Padma trilogy(witch was very good, but i'd like to see another view of it).. The Fudge case should be intersting to develop, but can't really see him surviving in the and, but who cares..

I like where Harry's mind is going, a little darker then your usual Harry, but i think is better than a "white", shades of grey are much more interesting..

Congrats on very well written chapter.. Can wait to next week for the next update.. See ya.
BTW, how is your eyesight?

red jacobson posted a comment on Thursday 9th June 2005 2:40pm for 3 - Recovery

Damn! Nicely done; and I really am glad to see you starting the posting schedule; I've been anxiously awaiting this one even more than the next chapter of TMW.

More next time

red

dave gerecke posted a comment on Thursday 9th June 2005 2:15pm for 3 - Recovery

Whooooo, what a ride!
Thank you for wrting this. Great start for the day here in Australia.

dave

Brian Hole posted a comment on Thursday 9th June 2005 1:58pm for 3 - Recovery

I could almost agree with the above review, that it seems it's going a bit fast, but we have to remember that Harry and Pansy have been together in a beneficial environment for over a month now. I think it's been plenty of time.

Tim - your scene with the "toughs" was excellent. Exactly how I expected Harry to respond, and I like Malcom's chagrin when he realizes what's going to happen.

I was really pleased when the notice popped up in my email for this, I can't wait until next week!

Tom Ladegard posted a comment on Thursday 9th June 2005 1:46pm for 3 - Recovery

I'm slightly torn here, but it's almost certainly my problem and not your writing. From the outside, I'm worried that the pace might be a little fast in this, but when reading I'm finding the experience a delight. Thanks for the effort.

- Tom