Azrael's Portal posted a comment on Thursday 9th June 2005 9:46pm for 3 - Recovery

Sweet. I like the way you are writing Harry. It makes you belive he is (?hard/mean/tough?)enough to defeat Tom, but he still wants to take his relationship with Pansy at a slow pace. I love the contrast. I look forward to reading the rest of this.

greg posted a comment on Thursday 9th June 2005 9:35pm for 3 - Recovery

hmmm...i think my "wallet sense" would be sounding off rather loudly just like Malcolm's!^^ thank you, Tim. This was just great. I also really enjoyed Harry's "pep talks" before their date. I really can't wait for more, so thank you again!

Tom posted a comment on Thursday 9th June 2005 9:18pm for 3 - Recovery

Heh...haven't had much of a chance to read HPFF in the past month, what with moving, my now ex-manager's trial, and the opening of a new store, but this was a very pleasant way to get back to things!

I read one story before this, and after that and WK,GQ, I suspect that most of the rest of the stuff I'll see won't quite hit the mark.

I'm impressed that you can pull this off; I understand now why Mr. Chessman tossed off the "Glass of water" line. And I'm very glad he did, by the way. While I don't expect this to happen in JK's work, it's entirely believeable, and very engaging.

I think that in all of HPFF, your depictions of Harry are perhaps my favorite, and certainly in my top 5. He's a bit powerful (which I like) but ultimately he's reasonable and decent and striving to be normal. It's very easy to go to extremes with him (or Ron or Hermione, for that matter), but I think you manage to present a plausible and likable Harry.

I never thought I'd read H/P, but I find that I eagerly await more. Keep it up!

-Tom

nonjon posted a comment on Thursday 9th June 2005 9:12pm for 3 - Recovery

Lovely as always. Want more. Excited to get back to school with Harry unofficially christened the best duellist in the world. Already 3/8ths of the way and at a current pace that means we could still be a chapter or two from getting to school even.

Consider this the usual gush and encouragement for more. Anticipating this story will make the wait for HBP so much easier. Thanks for writing, posting, sharing, etc. as always.

cycla posted a comment on Thursday 9th June 2005 9:03pm for 3 - Recovery

Oh that chapter was worth all the time that I have waited for it to be posted. The chapter was so riveting that my wife read it over my shoulder, and it gave her a creck in the neck. That she proptly let know was my fualt.

I can see Tonks doing axactly what you had her do. By joining with Harry and the Parkinsons. I can also see Albus fearing to let go of Harry. To the point of forgoing Harry's wishes to be left alone.

I really like how you had Harry and Pansy develup(know that is spelled wrong sorry) their relationship slowly. I am tired of seeing pairings that go from nothing. To them thinking of haveing a very serrius relationship in just a few days or weeks.

Well done and thanks for writing this Fic. As I have come to really enjoy this pairing.

Cycla

Daniel posted a comment on Thursday 9th June 2005 8:39pm for 3 - Recovery

Awesome chapter, I like the lenght of your chapters and how the flow together. I notice that in this chapter you picked up a little speed. I just have one question. Do you know how long this story is going to be? rating:9/10

Malaskor posted a comment on Thursday 9th June 2005 8:11pm for 3 - Recovery

Sorry, no time atm for a real review...
Just to mention the important part: I really enjoyed this chapter and I look forward to seeing more.

Keep it up and thanks for sharing

PS: Here's one quote where I think you got the grammar worn, but it might be colloquial-ly correct but I wouldn't know with English as my 2nd language...#

"Didn’t you used to be shorter?"

Shouldn`t that be [b]use[/b] instead of used?

Jack posted a comment on Thursday 9th June 2005 7:55pm for 3 - Recovery

Well, I was really looking forward to the meeting with Tonks, and you did not disappoint.

Dobby is still the standout character for me, but I have really liked the glimpes we've gotten of Harry's trainers. Also, the more I read about Mr. and Mrs. Parkinson, the more I like them. Obviously, Mal could have picked a better way to test Harry, but still.

Looking forward to some interaction with Harry's friends now. Also, looking to see what happens with Dumbledore.

Catherine posted a comment on Thursday 9th June 2005 7:28pm for 3 - Recovery

This is the best day ever! First I find out that the third chapter of White Knight, Grey Queen has been posted, then I find out that Wishweaver has posted a new chapter of Realizations on ff.net! This chapter is simply amazing. I love your Dobby, and I think it's marvelous how Pansy is willing to acknowledge that she can't/won't be as good at fighting as Harry as long as she can watch his back. I love that Harry and Pansy are taking their relationship slowly and that Harry had to tell himself that Pansy was perfect for him. I look forward to the next chapter. Thank you!

Daenin posted a comment on Thursday 9th June 2005 6:43pm for 3 - Recovery

Wow! Before starting this I couldn't see how Harry and Pansy could possibly work, but it REALLY works. Thank you. It's an incredible, wonderful story. You're a remarkable writer. I look forward to next week! :-)

Dreadnaught posted a comment on Thursday 9th June 2005 6:33pm for 3 - Recovery

Very nice, long, chapter. I do feel a bit sorry for Ginny though. ALl in all this is a great story, and I can't wait for the rest of it to be release.

David M. Potter posted a comment on Thursday 9th June 2005 6:25pm for 3 - Recovery

What an awesome chapter and awesome fic!!! I can't wait until more is posted! This has now become one of my top 10 fics.

W. Nabors posted a comment on Thursday 9th June 2005 6:14pm for 3 - Recovery

Excellent story telling.I like the idea of Harry showing some of his darker side,so very Slytherine of him.Looking forward to the next chapter!!

anonymous5 posted a comment on Thursday 9th June 2005 5:51pm for 3 - Recovery

Amazing. How do you cover such a short timespan with so many words and keep it this enthralling?? You've got mad talent. Thank you for sharing it with us.

Peter posted a comment on Thursday 9th June 2005 5:30pm for 3 - Recovery

As always an excellent chapter. I am eagerly awaitting the next installment.

Mark Safransky posted a comment on Thursday 9th June 2005 4:55pm for 3 - Recovery

Awesome Tim! The training is going very well as is the relationship between Harry and Pansy. His instructors are turning him into the Wizarding World's version of James Bond. By the time training ends, no one is going to believe this swauve and sophisticated guy was once little Harry Potter. He's now the Boy-Who-Lived grown up and taking control of his destiny. I'm certainly looking forward to how he and Malcolm will get Snape and Umbridge their just deserts. Also looking forward to when Dumbledore and Snape figure out where that tracking charm is. This just gets better and better! So looking forward to the next installment!

Amanda posted a comment on Thursday 9th June 2005 3:53pm for 3 - Recovery

And yet again, we have another amazing chappie by the world reknown HP fic author, Tim, and what does this read think? Holy crap, Tim!! I've been inlove with the HP series since the first book, and you make me wish that you'd helped JKR write the originals! Pansy has a depth of character that makes me want to be her, and Harry is finally becoming a man that anyone would wish for their own daughter. He's not two dimensional either. We get to see his flaws, so he doesn't disappoint us like the psuedo perfect man, and he isn't too moody to make us wish for something else. And I love the fact that Nymph is getting to be a small part of this. Can't wait for the rest of the golden trio's reactions at Hogwarts.

James posted a comment on Thursday 9th June 2005 3:40pm for 3 - Recovery

Bravo!!!!! finally, an overworked storyline done the right way. Your approach is logical and factual, the style is smooth and the flow is riveting. You have achieved a balance between exposition and action which few are able to do. I am completely enthralled with your multi-dimensional characters and excellent plot . Definitely more, please? I give extra kudo's for the reaction of the trainers and the people the NEW Harry interacts with. I can hardly wait for the new Harry and Pansy to be revealed to the school. Excellent work.

Meg posted a comment on Thursday 9th June 2005 3:17pm for 3 - Recovery

Tim, this was....man...I totally doubted I'd like this story, but you've sucked me in. Got to the last line and thought to myself "What?! There's no more?! What am I going to READ tonight?!"

Can't wait for ch4. :)

Meg

HermioneGreen posted a comment on Thursday 9th June 2005 3:11pm for 3 - Recovery

Awesome chapter!!! I would like to see(read) the meeting between the Parkinsons and the four goons. That would be a great scene. I look forward to more. Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us lesser mortals.

'Mione