Quizer posted a comment on Thursday 18th August 2005 3:06pm for 1 - Discovery

A highly interesting and well-written story, with a unique pairing as well. You had to use your freedom as an author quite a bit to make Pansy a likeable character, but that just proves how poorly and flat she was written by JKR.
I'll go on reading now ;)

Quizer

CRose posted a comment on Sunday 31st July 2005 4:51pm for 1 - Discovery

This is the kind of story I like to see when I read. It's long, well written, and you aren't rushing through the plot at a million miles per hour. Now on to the next chapter!

UdderPD posted a comment on Sunday 17th July 2005 1:03pm for 1 - Discovery

Excellent start

TTFN UdderPD

frazzled posted a comment on Saturday 9th July 2005 4:17am for 1 - Discovery

Once again another BRILLIANT fic! This Means War is the fic that got me hooked on HP fan fiction to begin with. I've always been a Harry Ginny fan. I never expected to like a Harry Pansy story, but thought I'd give it a go because I love your writing style. I can tell already this fic is looking to be one of my favourites! I've already cried in this first chapter! lol! The only downside to your fics seems to be my lack of sleep! Once I get started I can't stop reading!

crawfsh posted a comment on Saturday 2nd July 2005 1:31am for 1 - Discovery

Fantastic! I really like your ideas about Pansy and her family not being toadies of Voldemort. The characters are believable and likable. Can't wait to read the entire story.

You're a fabulous author!

Rocky235 posted a comment on Wednesday 15th June 2005 3:08pm for 1 - Discovery

Unique story line, good grammar, and easy to read dialog all make for happy readers.

In fact, I'll read it again before going on to chapter 2. It's that good.

mashimaromadness posted a comment on Friday 10th June 2005 9:51pm for 1 - Discovery

I totally love this. I'm glad you updated it so I could find it and read it, because it's awesome! I think I should search through all your stories and read them. However, now is not the time. I'm thinking one more chapter for now. But it's hard! I can't back out, it's too good!!

anonymous5 posted a comment on Tuesday 7th June 2005 3:54pm for 1 - Discovery

mercedes? bentley? what kind of car do they drive? I'm so confused...

other than that slight inconsistency, amazing story!

jb238238 posted a comment on Sunday 5th June 2005 12:56pm for 1 - Discovery

"Yeah. So," her lips curved slightly. "Can I keep him?" ;-)

"Grey" fits. Not really evil like Lucius Malfoy nor naïvely good like the Weasleys. No hesitation to use unforgivables on Muggles but also not unnecessarily cruel.

How do you pronounce "Gruoch"?

I liked the car changing. Also that one was a Bentley (shows class). In my opinion the sequence should have been Mercedes S-class first (to fit the big boss image), then BMW during the ride home (better yet a dark-green Daimler Super V8), then a Bentley as the true car when arriving home.

Mr. Parkinson being Vernon's big boss gives a nice sense of perspective. It probably would have been too much of a coincidence however. Especially when he overheard Vernon talking about Harry Potter.

Shouldn't Pansy appear not so beautiful for the time being? She wants Harry to like her for herself and not for her looks. On the other hand he now can judge her by her actions.

Looks like I won't get to sleep early tonight as I have to read the second chapter...

Roy posted a comment on Monday 30th May 2005 9:18pm for 1 - Discovery

ALrighty then, I have now read this fic about a dozen times and I definately must say that it is one of my absolute faves and will be printed out and bound fir future reading as a stand alone(having on puter just bites). I love the changes that have been made since it was originally posted(big grins). Although there is still one gender error I found Tonks would be a witch not a wizard(semantics). As I said in my email Tim, I am so looking forward to watching everyones reactions to seeing Harry and Pansy together as well as the amazing bouncing ferret, when he gets his comupance. I will be waiting with baited breath for the next chapter(ch3), when you start posting once a week. As well I am glad and relieved that I will not becoming Kibble for Norbert or Fluffy any time soon.

Patches posted a comment on Friday 27th May 2005 10:34pm for 1 - Discovery

This is a surprise! But, like all your stories, I am spell bound! This is so believable! I can see Harry learning to trust Pansy after finding out about her real appearance and the reasons for it! I really want to hear the rest of this story.

I also want the conclusion to "This Means War". I have been a big fan of yours ever since my daughter (who will be 34 tomorrow) introduced me to "This Means War". Please keep up the great stories but remember we want all of your stories to become complete stories. It is almost painful to hear such good stories and have to wait so long for the "rest of the story"! I will wait but please don't wait too long! Thank you for a different perspective on Harry's Slytherin side!

Makieus posted a comment on Wednesday 25th May 2005 6:12am for 1 - Discovery

So far, I have read multiple parings that you have written. I am glad, you haven't done the one that I don't like, Harry/Cho. For some reason, I just don't like that type of paring. Every other paring though I have enjoyed. This fic has been one of the better parings I have read, and I look forward to more

Thank you

Makieus

Philip Jacobs posted a comment on Tuesday 24th May 2005 12:12pm for 1 - Discovery

Just thought I'd say how much I'm enjoying this story.   I could easily see a Slytherin running the sort of deception that Pansy has been using to get through her years at Hogwarts.   I do have one quibble, though.   Wasn't the prophecy the _first_ true Seeing of Sybil, not the second as Harry described it in the chapter?

Philip Jacobs posted a comment on Tuesday 24th May 2005 12:05pm for 1 - Discovery

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Zev posted a comment on Thursday 19th May 2005 1:11pm for 1 - Discovery

Great story. One of the better ones I have read.  

Serry posted a comment on Wednesday 18th May 2005 7:17pm for 1 - Discovery

Harry/Pansy? Well this fic made a believer out of me, I love it! Please update this one soon.

Anonymous Reviewer posted a comment on Monday 16th May 2005 7:37pm for 1 - Discovery

Wonderful story! First time I can remember someone sitting down and working Hary through his guilt. Please continue this.