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Sue posted a comment on Sunday 20th August 2006 5:45pm for 9 - Harry Potter's Day Off

Tim, I was just re-reading this story. I still do not know who the spy is and I hope that we get to find out soon.

Daven posted a comment on Saturday 19th August 2006 10:21pm for 9 - Harry Potter's Day Off

Must update... To good to rot dammit!

Jamie' posted a comment on Sunday 6th August 2006 10:07pm for 9 - Harry Potter's Day Off

Quote: "I promise that there will not be another massive wait for the final part, because I need to have this story finished before HBP arrives."

It's been over an year...

Little Miss Sci-Fi posted a comment on Sunday 6th August 2006 6:11am for 9 - Harry Potter's Day Off

You promised there wouldn’t be another long wait!!!
I absolutely love this fic when you will finish it!!! PLEASE PLEASE post more soon!!!!!!

tekajay posted a comment on Monday 31st July 2006 6:36pm for 9 - Harry Potter's Day Off

Hey......Can u please finish this story. It is great.

kapperky posted a comment on Friday 28th July 2006 7:42pm for 9 - Harry Potter's Day Off

Hey man great story! Cant wait for the rest of it! update soon!

MarinePotterfan posted a comment on Monday 17th July 2006 5:20pm for 9 - Harry Potter's Day Off

You have got to finnish this story, with only one chapter left. And you promised that it woulf not be a massive wait for an update and you did not make it. Its like watching a movie and missing the end. UPDATE UPDATE.

MPF

Katherine Summers posted a comment on Monday 17th July 2006 3:02pm for 9 - Harry Potter's Day Off

if u had to have this story out before HBP, does that mean ur not continuing this? i really wanna read the last chapter.

Adriana Lant posted a comment on Saturday 15th July 2006 11:14pm for 9 - Harry Potter's Day Off

Just thought I'd let you know, I left a really good review for this chapter(and semi-good reviews for the others) in this story at fanfiction.net, which I know you've banned, so I'll just send you my reviews, but just in case: reviews for your story at fanfiction I actually just visited that site, and my last review is probably the longest one there. If you want to look there yourself, I'm under MadHatter9892. This is an awesome story, and please update ASAP.

(chapter 1)Wow. That was a great chapter. What's an Mmail? I assumed it was a mixture of an e-mail and an owl. Ginny is evil. (Joke.) The stuff she and Harry said about the kiss was so deep. Together! Whoo! Snog! Whoo!(I make random outbursts.) Long chapter! I always tell authors when their chapters are too short, but I don't have to say that. Really, though, what's a tigger? I loved this chapter, and I can't wait to read more of your work. Keep writing!

(chapter 2)Oh my gosh! Wow. Great chapter. There were so many good lines in this chapter, but I'm too lazy to scroll up, copy, and paste them here. I liked the part where three out of the four girls said almost the exact same thing with the "Where's Harry?" business. I also loved the semi-symbolism what with all four houses being represented in a Harry cat fight. I could just picture Ginny diving across the table! Priceless! I loved the "girls mad about Harry" idea. Very cute.

""Cho Chang!" Professor Flitwick shouted, getting to his feet.
"Susan Bones!" Professor Sprout exclaimed.
"Pansy Parkinson!" Snape roared.
"Ginny Weasley!" Professor McGonagall bawled.
And as one, they shouted, "My office. Now!""

Okay, I did one. But it was a good one. I could picture that one, too. Whoo! Kicked in the balls! Whoo! I've never been to Sadie Hawkins dance, but they sound fun. I would ask a guy to a normal dance, probably just like Ginny, but that's just me. I'm selectively brave. Anyway, nice, long chapter. Keep writing!

(chapter 3)Wowzers! That was, so far, the best chapter. Draco's gay! I know it was just a setup, but it was still too cool. I liked the way you started this chapter. I would love to leave a longer review and read the rest of this story right now, but it's really late, and I have to wake up early tomorrow(technically today). Anyway, amazing chapter! Keep writing!

(chapter 4)I liked the class at the end. I understand everything so much better now. I enjoyed this chapter very much. I liked the part where you mentioned that there were a few boys at the Harry Potter fan club meeting. Was Colin Creevey there? Anyway, awesome chapter. Keep writing!

(chapter 5)Wow. We knew Harry was talented, but wow. There were so many good lines in this, but I'm too lazy to find, copy, and paste them here. Anyway, best chapter so far! Prank! Prank! Prank! Prank! Prank! Keep Writing!

(chapter 6)Wow. Ok, first. You do know that chapter could have been split into, like, five or ten(chapters). That would have been easier to review, as well. Anyway, certainly THE best chapter in the story, and one of the best I've ever read! Yay Snape! Yay Harry! Whoo! So much goodness in the chapter! All I have to say is: "Whoohoo!" Amazing! Bravo! Encore! Keep writing!

(chapter 7)Is Bellatrix serious? Sorry, I had to get that out. Another: Did Harry and Ginny do what I think they did in the park? Third: This chapter was longer than the last, and could have been made into, like, twenty chapters. Fourth: Did Ron get laid?(Ew! I mean, I love Ron(not like "love" love, but you know what I mean), but he's too young, and Hermione wouldn't have gone for it.) Fifth: awesome cliffhanger! I mean, I'm dying to know who Ginny punched(please be Cho, please be Cho!), but it was very good, writing-wise.(Why didn't Harry pull away from the kiss?) Anyway, awesome chapter! Loved the DA meeting! Keep writing!

(chapter 8)Loved the defence lesson at the begining. Yay Ginny! She knocked out Cho! Whoot! Loved the idea of Harry's own room, but Lavender and Parvati were a little suspicious whith the mention of Ginny's prefrences, which I know was your goal. Ron and Hermione, getting down and funky! I guess Hermione's not doing the "No sex 'till I'm married" thing, not that she ever said she was. Loved the confrontation with Sirius and Snape! HARRY CAN'T DIE! ARE YOU CRAZY?!?!?!?! Sorry. I'm sure you have some idiotic reason for killing Harry. Giving Dudders a girlfriend? You rock my socks! Anyway, great(but really long!) chapter! Keep writing!

(chapter 9)Harry can't marry Ginny, Sirius! He's dead!(I'm reviewing as I read, instead of the normal way, to remember everthing. So you're getting my first thoughts on every matter in this chapter, which I've already assumed is too long!) "Taking care of business!" Whoo! I love that song! HARRY'S NOT DEAD! IT'S NOT POSSIBLE! Fred and George, kamikazies? The killing curse had the same effect on Voldemort? Is that possible? Yay Dudley! Luna is very scary sometimes. Like when she tries to KILL someone! O la la, waking up with no clothes. Bad, Ginny's thoughts, bad! Yay! Four houses decorating Harry's(and Ginny's(see, I can make hints, too))room! Sorry, but: Does Ginny really have enough water in her system to react with overactive tearducts? She has to have, like, no liquid left inside her from all the crying she does! Shouldn't Colin be in charge of photography? I guess it really is Harry Potter's day off(Ha ha. I get it. Like Ferris Bueller's Day Off!)(By the way, that's not supposed to date me. I saw it on tv, as I'm only a young teen.) Harry freaked the parents, that's enough.(Sorry if I'm confusing you by jumping from one point to another. I just type them as the pop in my head.) Apocalypse! Whoot!(I'm not gothic or anything. I'm just really weird.) From the description of HAOBbF, I feel like I just walked onto the first(Gene Wilder, which again, should not date me)Willy Wonka set. Yay Draco! He came out of the closet, for real this time! It took me forever to get Terry's joke, and it's hilarious! I'm glad they're together(if they are). I loved the toast. It was a little corny, but it was nice. The "Wand Inhancement" ad sounded like a "something else inhancement" ad, and was completely random. Aww, the dragon's just a cute little doggy. Cute names for the dragons; Bluedust and Starsparkle. "Ginny sighed and rolled out of bed, still in the long t-shirt she slept in. The fact it was Harry’s was fairly obvious." What does THAT mean? Harry busy all morning? Time for that dance lesson we've been waiting for! Ginny is getting the works! And Selene IS clever! Why can't girls do that to their unwanted hair?(especially Ginny) Wait, tell me Seamus isn't gay! Did Harry just become Neo from "The Matrix" trilogies? He can see spells with his eyes closed! Yay Draco! They are together! Sorry, but I think Harry just saw Ginny. Instead of a "dun-dun, dun-dun"(heartbeat), it's more "dun-dun-dun!"(sinister music playing in backround) Yes Charlie, very wrong! Is Harry reciting his wedding vows? Maybe he's just getting ready to "propose" to her(with the first ring.) Nevermind, it's definitly wedding vows. The team names sound like sorority or fraternity names. I thought Angilina was with Fred. I guess they did get mixed up that one night. All I can think of while reading a very intimate scene with Harry and Ginny is: "Just give her the damn ring already!" Hey, he listened! What the hell was she expecting? What's Ron thinking in that horny little head of his?(wink, wink) Cute, with Ginny doing the family thing. *Sword to throat* Dun-dun-dun! Sharing a shower? O la la! No uniform? Dun-dun-dun! That's three halves. You could have said one third, one third, one third. What's the point, killing Dean's parents? Holy-flipping-shit! Who's the spy?!?!?! Oh, my gosh! I love figuring out clues! It's obviously not Bella. Dean's a possibility, seeing as Voldemort wants to kill his parents. Maybe it's Piers, or Sheryl herself. Oh, gosh, I hope it's not Pansy, but that's a good guess, on my part! By the way, I would enjoy reading more about Draco's and Terry's relationship, whether it be in this story or a spin-off of sorts or whatever. Anyway, too long, but I assume the next one's going to be longer. Don't forget the Holloween Costume Ball,(You can put it in a sequel if you don't want to lie to your readers when you said the next chapter's the last.) the dance lessons, and the hawk! I'm not saying it would be bad if Ginny and Harry do the you-know-what, because they love each other, but they're both being a little horny. Any way, you said something about finishing the story before the sixth book came out. THAT WAS A YEAR AGO! You can still finish the story, it's just AU. By the way, I'm really sorry for the REALLY confusing review. Like I said before, I just typed what popped in my head. It might make it a little easier to understand if you skim the chapter at the same time. Keep writing, and post soon!

Told you it was big! Anyway, like I said, please, please post!

Fantasywriter13 posted a comment on Saturday 15th July 2006 10:49pm for 9 - Harry Potter's Day Off

I just wrote a review for this on Fanfiction.net, sorry I didn't read your authors note until after I sent it. I read most of your stories on this site before going on FF.net to check and see if that had the final part of This Means War. As I can not find part ten anywere my complaint stands.

I WANNA READ THE LAST CHAPTER!!!! Please?

Can't wait, thanks.

~Fantasywriter13

Antigone posted a comment on Friday 14th July 2006 11:08pm for 9 - Harry Potter's Day Off

Well?! Don't just leave us in suspense!! I just read the entire fic in one go, and I wanna know what happens!! ::pouts:: Meanie.

Zarz posted a comment on Thursday 6th July 2006 6:31pm for 9 - Harry Potter's Day Off

Please, please update this soon! I know HBP is already out, but frankly I DON'T CARE! I like your version of Harry's sixth year much better than the actual one! Please, it's been over a year since this was updated! I don't care if you divide the next chapter up into a dozen chapters, but please, give us something, I absolutely adore this story! It's an absolutely perfect Harry and Ginny, and I cannot wait to find out how everything has turned out! Great job on building up the suspense by the way! Is Harry ever going to have a normal day? I love this!

Re Nee posted a comment on Wednesday 5th July 2006 8:31am for 9 - Harry Potter's Day Off

hurry up and update! this cliffie has been here forever! love the story though

BackInBlack posted a comment on Monday 3rd July 2006 8:29pm for 9 - Harry Potter's Day Off

I'm not sure if I've left a review for this story here or not. I know I've reviewed it once, could've been over at ff.net.

Anyway, I love this story. It's one of my favorites, and I really, really hope that you'll update it soon!

dbcall posted a comment on Wednesday 28th June 2006 11:32am for 9 - Harry Potter's Day Off

Are we ever going to get the rest of the story?

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Tuesday 27th June 2006 8:34am for 9 - Harry Potter's Day Off

Hehe, Ferris Bueller is one of my favourite films. The Mmails remain deeply entertaining. I love the twins but they’re insane. The girls would hate them for doing it, though the sign is genius. Luna’s performance was superb. I’m slightly surprised that it’s true about Draco, but I loved the way you handled it. The only problem with Mmail is it tends to make Hedwig obsolete as a character. Harry’s football game was wonderful. Love how you wrote Albus as getting lonely and pleased to have the girls act like he’s a friend. Ooh, evil cliffhanger time! If this isn't dead, I'd love more.

dee posted a comment on Sunday 18th June 2006 6:01pm for 9 - Harry Potter's Day Off

aren't u going to update?

littlevixen16 posted a comment on Saturday 17th June 2006 1:46pm for 9 - Harry Potter's Day Off

WELL WHERE THE HELL IS IT?I HAVE BEEN CONSTANTLY CHECKING THIS STORY TO SEE IF IT HAS BEEN UPDATED FOR A YEAR NOW AND STILL NO LAST CHAPTER IM GOING INSAINE I NEED THE LAST CHAPTER AND SOON OR I WILL DIE INSIDE!!UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE

BlackPhoenix posted a comment on Saturday 17th June 2006 10:19am for 9 - Harry Potter's Day Off

Great Story! I've read hundreds of fanfictions and not less of them were Supernatural Harry and I must say yours is one of the best I know so far.
Excellent work. I love it greez blackphoenix

Ivy posted a comment on Sunday 11th June 2006 9:43am for 9 - Harry Potter's Day Off

Emmm Could you please post the last part of this wonderful, exciting, challenging, innovative and entrancing story?

I would, and probably many others, appreciate it.

Cheers !