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kstchr posted a comment on Saturday 21st July 2012 4:16am for 2 - Who Wants to Play - Kiss Chase?

Hilarious chase for Harry! Am so glad Ginny got to him first, as it was a little bit painful watching all the different lead changes!

Dragen posted a comment on Monday 22nd November 2010 9:50pm for 2 - Who Wants to Play - Kiss Chase?

Great work mate, but I have to say you never did explain what 'Amorous Mode' of the map did... do you know what it does and if so could you email me what it does at ranger_dragen@hotmail.co.uk

supergirl3684 posted a comment on Monday 17th May 2010 11:20pm for 2 - Who Wants to Play - Kiss Chase?

Harry finally told Ron!! Brave, brave, in not a little, lot foolish, boy! Then again...if I were Ron, I'd be more scared then mad! :D

Slytherin66 posted a comment on Saturday 1st May 2010 4:00pm for 2 - Who Wants to Play - Kiss Chase?

A very funny chapter Sirius and Remus are always funny but the girls hunting Harry was best of all.

Hermyd posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd November 2009 4:52pm for 2 - Who Wants to Play - Kiss Chase?

I love your story, but I wanted to point out a small inconsistency. You have this beginning several weeks before Halloween in Harry's sixth year. (the ball is supposed to be for Halloween). But later you talk about how Sirius was gone for months before he was able to get back. As the Dept of Mysteries happened in June, that doesn't seem to fit. Also, you have Blaise mention that she has been training in the DA (enough to take down Snape). As she wasn't a member in fifth year, that can mean she has only been a memeber for at most a couple of weeks. That doesn't seem like enough time to learn that much. Perhaps it would be better to have the ball be a Valentine's dance? That would allow for plenty of time, and shouldn't be too hard of a fix.

ClaudiaLilly posted a comment on Wednesday 29th April 2009 7:22pm for 2 - Who Wants to Play - Kiss Chase?

For a brief second, Harry's expression was a perfect mixture of James and Lily: Lily's hangdog eyes when he had done something that went a little too far, and James’ reproachful look. Shouldn't the names here be reversed? James=hangdog eyes and Lily=reproachful? Aside from that gret story!!!

gaharbert1 posted a comment on Saturday 14th February 2009 3:21pm for 2 - Who Wants to Play - Kiss Chase?

wow this is great i have not laughed so hard in a long time. i just about fell out of my chair. i don't sign up for websites much but i had to just to let you know that i love this... keep up the great work

joy glennie posted a comment on Tuesday 21st October 2008 2:11pm for 2 - Who Wants to Play - Kiss Chase?

oh, the m-mails between padfoot and moony are hilarious...especially the last one!!! Loved the war to get to Harry first!

Cassie_Heart posted a comment on Friday 25th April 2008 3:26pm for 2 - Who Wants to Play - Kiss Chase?

i luv this chapter it is really funny. oh and i agree i like the idea of MMail. Also i luv the conversations that padfoot and moony have.

Gil posted a comment on Saturday 24th November 2007 5:47pm for 2 - Who Wants to Play - Kiss Chase?

XDD
This is funny stuf !
Luv the cheapter, actaully - i luv all cheapters (:

mathiasgranger posted a comment on Tuesday 13th November 2007 3:29pm for 2 - Who Wants to Play - Kiss Chase?

Just the mental image of Padfoot humping McGonagall's leg....well that's worth at least a smile on my face the rest of the week.

Thanks for writing,
Matt

mathiasgranger posted a comment on Sunday 28th October 2007 6:48pm for 2 - Who Wants to Play - Kiss Chase?

Oh man this story is priceless so far....

Thanks for writing,
Matt

Jabe Washburn1 posted a comment on Friday 23rd February 2007 8:42am for 2 - Who Wants to Play - Kiss Chase?

I know the mmail concept wasn't your idea, but you've done better with it than any of the others I've read - and by a pretty serious margin. Actually, Anya's Naked Quidditch Match was the very first fanfic I ever read. I didn't know what fanficdom was before that.

mashimaromadness posted a comment on Wednesday 24th January 2007 4:21pm for 2 - Who Wants to Play - Kiss Chase?

Yup, I've definetly never read this, but oh how I love it. Very, very nice. I'm glad I have the opportunity to read this. I'm surprised I stopped getting alerts from you and all of a sudden got them again. I don't actually know what that's about but I went to the alerts link and I think I fixed it. We shall see at your next update, I suppose.

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Monday 25th December 2006 9:12pm for 2 - Who Wants to Play - Kiss Chase?

Outstanding, loved that chapter.

gunny

rocky_griffin_az posted a comment on Friday 1st December 2006 4:11am for 2 - Who Wants to Play - Kiss Chase?

on to the third chapter this chapters detox scene is a reminder of back to the future when doc was inlove. though i enjoyed the added imagry my mind puts in

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Tuesday 27th June 2006 3:58am for 2 - Who Wants to Play - Kiss Chase?

“Harry proved, in that instant, that he was a heroic Gryffindor by refraining from rolling his eyes at the two of them” was such a funny line. I think poor Sirius would be dying of embarrassment as well as Harry. Poor boys, but that was so funny. Still loving the Mmail format too. Sirius’s bad behaviour as a drunk dog made me nearly cry with laughter. I loved the scene in the hall too. Too, too funny.

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Thursday 3rd November 2005 8:06pm for 2 - Who Wants to Play - Kiss Chase?

That was great...lol...I'm still laughing.

gunny

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Friday 22nd July 2005 5:13am for 2 - Who Wants to Play - Kiss Chase?

Sirius...one of the main points of the Talk is to persuade the youngster NOT to immediately dive into having sex. Not to make him into some sort of God.

LOL!

Dana posted a comment on Tuesday 28th June 2005 10:30am for 2 - Who Wants to Play - Kiss Chase?

Yay Ginny. Once again, I really love this story. It is very well written and I look forward to more. BTW, I love the names for the "to" and "from" on the mmails