Mungoxc posted a comment on Saturday 3rd February 2007 8:17pm for 10b - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 2 of 3)

I have never reviewed a story before. i'd just like to establish that preface. this is THE MOST amazing chapter ever.

why are you so AWESOME!??! hahaha

brad posted a comment on Saturday 3rd February 2007 4:24pm for 10b - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 2 of 3)

Great (sub-) chapter, although I felt that the revelation of Wormtail as the spy was a slight anticlimax; sometimes it seems like every second fanfic has him skulking around Hogwarts, unnoticed. But I'd actually forgotten that he was supposed to be dead! It'll all make better sense to me on the re-read, I'm sure.

I wish you'd had a stronger reason for Harry to be able to *force* Voldemort to pick Thursday for the attack. Voldemort is pondering the date, Bellatrix pipes up "say, what about Thursday, no special reason?", Voldemort says "yeah, why not, it's not my laundry day after all". Why not ANY day after the match; why Thursday? And Voldemort didn't even ask for reasons! He's the sort of stereotypical overlord that would be expected to answer "yes, Bella ... but on Friday/Wednesday, just because". That scene just smelled fishy, unrealistic. I would have liked Harry to have some means of influencing Voldemort to pick that particular day ... a rumour that Albus would be absent from Hogwarts that day ... favourable conditions (equinoxes, all that stuff) ... something that made the choice of Thursday fit in better with his general tactics rather than "Bella, tell him Thursday and I'll cross my fingers that he accepts your advice out of the blue with no substantiating reasons for it".

It's admirable how you've been able to drop back into TMW! mode and make these recent chapters exactly the same in tenor as the first part of the story written eons ago. Chapter 10 really does continue on in an identical vein. And overall, of course, the entire story is wonderful in how it can be such a humourous, positive and uplifting 'fairy tale' without stepping over its bounds and becoming 'unbelievable' or farcical to the reader. That's a great and unique niche you/it has there in the fandom!

Thoroughly enjoyable, a great weekend read. Thank you!

Kathleen posted a comment on Saturday 3rd February 2007 4:05pm for 10b - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 2 of 3)

Wow. It's really coming to an end, which is sad because I've loved it so much. The story has also become much more serious, but it feels right.
What I loved: That werewolves don't get it right (of course! how would they? why didn't anyone think of this before? This is why you're awesome.)

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Saturday 3rd February 2007 3:13pm for 10b - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 2 of 3)

That was an AWESOME chapter. This is a very fun story to read and I am enjoying it sooooo much.

gunny

Magnificent the Destroyer Lord posted a comment on Saturday 3rd February 2007 2:51pm for 10b - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 2 of 3)

Umm... uh... all I can say is ... HOLY FUCK, THAT WAS HEAVY!!!!! (*looks sheepish* pardon my obscenity)

lordblack posted a comment on Saturday 3rd February 2007 2:06pm for 10b - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 2 of 3)

good as always, but you made a tiny mistake----

From: The Head of Magical Law Enforcement

To: The Boy who sends cryptic emails before pulling off coups.

Cc: Kingsley and Tonks

Subject: Re: The Match

---I believe you mean Mmails, not Emails

María1 posted a comment on Saturday 3rd February 2007 1:19pm for 10b - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 2 of 3)

It was amazing. A beautiful job! I hope we can have more soon!

Louie posted a comment on Saturday 3rd February 2007 12:15pm for 10b - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 2 of 3)

Damn, what a great chapter. had me going from start to finish. I so love this fic, can't wait for the next chapter

Nights_Silhouette posted a comment on Saturday 3rd February 2007 11:39am for 10b - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 2 of 3)

An amazing chapter, Keep it up.

atlantis-rob posted a comment on Saturday 3rd February 2007 11:22am for 10b - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 2 of 3)

Wow! Another huge chapter, suprised you didn't split this monster even more really! Great job on all the chars dialogue especially harry and the wolves and how he handled them and remus. The emails were insane and awesome, great job with cissy also! One of the few authors who manages to keep me reading Harry and Ginny and thats impressive (I'm reading mainly odd shisp or oc these days if anyship).

Cheers!

phlybye posted a comment on Saturday 3rd February 2007 10:03am for 10b - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 2 of 3)

I've just deleted my unfinished review for the 10th time and now I'm giving up. No matter what I write, it doesn't do justice to your stories...

So let me just say

Thank you!

for making me laugh, cry, jump and smile.

Philipp

satishramsatya posted a comment on Saturday 3rd February 2007 5:31am for 10b - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 2 of 3)

HI There,

I loved your story so much that i felt goosebumps(nice ones) at harry's recital of his goals. Please Update Quickly. Waiting at the Broomsticks with a Barrel of Ogden's finest for you

thumper posted a comment on Saturday 3rd February 2007 12:37am for 10b - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 2 of 3)

Outstanding Chapter, This has to be one of my all time Favorite fanfictions

Sheepstamper posted a comment on Friday 2nd February 2007 10:18pm for 10b - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 2 of 3)

this is such a great story.....eyes watering, sniffing, the whole works - nearly..

Wolfric posted a comment on Friday 2nd February 2007 10:14pm for 10b - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 2 of 3)

Another excellant effort! I really enjoy the dragons. I don't believe I have read anything of yours that I didn't like. I will be pleased to continue enjoying your wonderful contributions. I can only hope that you continue to find the inspiration, the time and the interest to keep entertaining all of us. Thanks, W

bookish1reading posted a comment on Friday 2nd February 2007 5:12pm for 10b - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 2 of 3)

Wow! As a high school and college English teacher I admit to being picky and critical when reading fanfiction (well, anything, really) as well as somewhat addicted. This chapter had me ignoring the essays that need grading by a deadline. I was drawn in and involved, and not looking for errors. Now I have to wait to continue marking as I'm fraid I will be rather disappointed in what I will see from my own students. Well done!

milk posted a comment on Friday 2nd February 2007 4:57pm for 10b - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 2 of 3)

i had to hold back tears. that was just so beautiful. people that are trying to rule the world should read this story; they'll find the perfect way to have peole follow them; the right way as well. if i could follow harry, i would now. you'll probably make a good motivational speaker. are you made to lead and have the means to do it? if you are, and you believe in total good over evil i'll probably follow you as well. more of the story, please. i hope you show te halloween ball.

goddessa39 posted a comment on Friday 2nd February 2007 3:20pm for 10b - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 2 of 3)

You know, I love this fic and will be awaiting the next one. Ginny finding her form, I defenitely look forward to, though with Harry's love of flying, I didn't think that only one form would have wings.
So, 'Ole Tom is falling for it hook, line, and now we're waiting for the Sinker, 'eh? Cool.

slayersfan01 posted a comment on Friday 2nd February 2007 3:18pm for 10b - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 2 of 3)

That thing at the end was beautiful, simply beautiful. I want to complain about how long this took to be made, but if the quality of this chapter depends on how long it took you to make this then it was worth it. I just hope that the next chapter comes out soon and with the same or better quality that this one came as. This is a great work and I am in awe of it.

NateGold posted a comment on Friday 2nd February 2007 2:32pm for 10b - Werewolves, Goblins and Dragons, Oh My! (Part 2 of 3)

Magnificent. There is no other word to describe the flight with the Queen Dragon, and the view of earth from above. For the first time in a fan fiction, I actually felt the awe and wonder that scene invoked. There is a quote attributed to Leonardo Da Vinci that reads:

"For once you have tasted flight you will walk the earth with your eyes turned skyward;
For there you have been,
and there you long to return."

That is how you made me feel.

Thank you.