squiddy posted a comment on Monday 6th February 2006 5:08pm for These Dreams - Epilogue

You two should cooperate more. Simply one of the best fics I have ever read and I've read a lot of em... (from Ranma fics, VoltesV, multi x-overs and more).

I was sniffling when Ginny passed and had moist eyes when Sam cried with Harry. It's testament to a great fic when it can emotionally affect the reader. Thankfully I was smiling softly at the end.

Fluff and waff writtem in exemplary style.

Thanks guys. It was a great read and I'm sure I'll read it again soon.. maybe several times =)

Jay-F posted a comment on Sunday 5th February 2006 1:26pm for These Dreams - Epilogue

very nice, the epologe realy finished this up nicely, i also liked the leeter format.
Thanks for wrritng,
Jay

brad posted a comment on Sunday 5th February 2006 3:58am for These Dreams - Epilogue

I was one of the ones who thought that Ron's 'death threat' against Sammy was over-the-top and unbelievable in the earlier chapter, so I was interested to read Harry's letter dealing with that issue here. Like Harry I "guess I never thought about what Ron was going through" when Sam would 'drop him from across the room'; I didn't grok the severity of her doing that, how it would feel from Ron's perspective, until I read John's comments in your group. Rather frightening, actually, when you think about it that way - how a man could be utterly defenceless and manipulated on such a primal level like that. Almost like rape in a small way; I could see how a man could feel that he's 'betraying' his true love by reacting to a Veela, etcetera. I don't think we've seen the dark side of the Veela attraction quite like that? In canon and otherwise it's always been a bit of a joke, but Fleur and Gabrielle are 'good' Veela.

"You have appear to have broken Hermione" - classic line!

Thank you both for the epilogue!

Jenna2 posted a comment on Saturday 4th February 2006 2:48pm for These Dreams - Epilogue

sweeeet

Robin Westerly posted a comment on Saturday 4th February 2006 8:18am for These Dreams - Epilogue

noo! Cheesy grin it stuck on! Help I can't get it off.
Thankyou for yet another amazing story.

P.S. see no nagging bout TMW or Hagridlessness. I am just grateful forwhat I give us Thanks again

scott2 posted a comment on Saturday 4th February 2006 2:41am for These Dreams - Epilogue

well written in character with the series (the heart trilogy) and I had a silly smile on my face the whole time I was reading...just picture a 6ft 2" bulky bloke giggling like a school girl. it looked friggin hilarious.

Judas posted a comment on Saturday 4th February 2006 1:13am for These Dreams - Epilogue

Wow.

Just wow.

I shamelessly admit that I came very close to crying.

Kokopelli replied:

That's okay - _I_ cried when I wrote the Ginny scene - and had a client walk into my office when I was doing so.

I passed it off as allergies.

HAH!

spurio23 posted a comment on Friday 3rd February 2006 10:11pm for These Dreams - Epilogue

Very nice. I like that Sammy got Harry after all. I liked Sammy better than Ginny.

PhoenixAnkaa posted a comment on Friday 3rd February 2006 8:41pm for These Dreams - Epilogue

Kokopelli, I really hope I did not offend you with my review. I did not mean for that. I guess I so enjoyed the dramatic writing of These Dreams that I was hoping for the same type of continuation. I really did enjoy the epilogue as a fluffy ending once I read it for that. I appologize for the offence.

PA

Kokopelli replied:

These Dreams was 75% Kokopelli.

These Dreams Epilogue was 25% Kokopelli - maybe less. These Dreams was supposed to be a one-shot, but I had some loose ends to tie up, so Jeconais took that ball and ran with it.

jaques posted a comment on Friday 3rd February 2006 5:36pm for These Dreams - Epilogue

nice ending for a great fic.

Regress posted a comment on Friday 3rd February 2006 2:40pm for These Dreams - Epilogue

Thank you! I do so love a happy ending. You don't do anything in halves do you? I mean damn, I need to go brush my teeth. I'm going to have to skip dinner or I'm going to gain a few pounds from pure fluff! Good job by the way, a nice fluffy finisher like this was a great way to end the story.

I could wax poetic about the greatness of your work on this story for ages, but I'm not in the waxing mood, so you get a great big double thumbs up.

Prerna posted a comment on Friday 3rd February 2006 12:12pm for These Dreams - Epilogue

Wow, what a perfect way to top the a wonderful trilogy. Brillant job to you both, and I hope you two will collaborate in the future :)

Lufio posted a comment on Friday 3rd February 2006 10:44am for These Dreams - Epilogue

Hey, there. Loved the back and forth humor going on behind the scenes that's suggested by the letters. However, there was one part I'm confused about.

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"Now, having read your missive in detail, I’m wondering exactly why you didn’t do any studying beforehand. I thought we taught you to always research new situations?"
- - - - -

Where in the letter directly previous to this one did Samantha mention not knowing much about sexual techniques? Was it in an earlier letter? Or am I misinterpreting what Gabrielle is saying to Samantha? Because with the elder Veela mailing that instruction book... It seemed to me that I missed out on a conversation involving Samantha deploring her inexperience in the bedroom.

Philipe posted a comment on Friday 3rd February 2006 7:45am for These Dreams - Epilogue

I like this version with a little bit of the three that Kokopelli posted on his (or hers) livejournal.. The final one there was lacking the final part of the letter.. i tink this looks very good.. I like it, simple but interesting..

PhoenixAnkaa posted a comment on Friday 3rd February 2006 7:24am for These Dreams - Epilogue

I have to say I really enjoyed this trilogy. For as unconnected as the three stories really were, they fit together so nicely. With that said I was extremely excited to see the epilogue update yesterday for These Dreams. Even though out of the three it was the most heart wrenching it was to read Ginny's death, I greatly enjoyed the story and the writing. I have now read the epilogue three times and unfortunately I found it lacking the detail you had set forth in the previous works. As much as I enjoyed it, it was a bit difficult to track the timeline in spots. You also seemed to move their relationship along without any substance to how it happened. I also found the letter/e-mail form of the body of the text trying a little to hard to be comedic.

With all of that said though I did enjoy seeing closure for these characters. I think it would be very interesting to see an expansion on Harry and Sammy's relationship in the future.

Good Work!

Kokopelli replied:

It's a fluffy epilogue!

Terry Swain posted a comment on Friday 3rd February 2006 7:18am for These Dreams - Epilogue

Great ending to your story. congrats to the both of you.

Meteoricshipyards posted a comment on Friday 3rd February 2006 6:58am for These Dreams - Epilogue

Fooled me. I thought it was finished. Nice wrap up. Very fluffy, very real feeling.

Thanks for writing.

Tom A.

Cliff Bryner posted a comment on Friday 3rd February 2006 5:16am for These Dreams - Epilogue

Superb.

Mel posted a comment on Friday 3rd February 2006 5:02am for These Dreams - Epilogue

I love this one! Me

Patches posted a comment on Friday 3rd February 2006 4:31am for These Dreams - Epilogue

Thank you so much for the epilog. What a romantic episode in Harry and Sammy's life. It was beautiful. I really appreciate your writing. I am so looking forward to more.

Since you like "occasions" are you planning on updating Hope on Valentine's Day? Don't put if off on my account if you want to update it sooner. I'll take it any time you want to make it available. I just want you to know I appreciate all that you do. Thanks again.