By Jeconais
Reviews
GremlinXTJ posted a comment on Monday 6th September 2010 7:37am
Heh, this was a TOTALY different banishment story. :D I did laugh quite a bit. :)) Thanks for that. :)
shadowtrey posted a comment on Sunday 5th September 2010 6:51am
Now that was fun. But please, you've gotta tell how the effects everything several months down the line! Does Akatsuki still attack? Does Orochimaru do unyouthful unmentionables to the traitor? C'mon, you've gotta fill us in!
drayconis posted a comment on Sunday 5th September 2010 12:36am
this was glorious! Ilaughed so very hard
NuitTombee posted a comment on Saturday 4th September 2010 9:19pm
Like I've said before, although you focus mainly on Harry Potter you can write a really good Naruto fic. Despite it have no Naruto time it was a really good story and I have another story to add to my ever growing list of favorites. Thanks!
"...grinning like a necrophiliac in a morgue!" ~The Light Fantastic, Terry Pratchett
Dracolych69 posted a comment on Saturday 4th September 2010 9:34am
Yeah. One heck of a Crack-fic. Not to mention that it's an idea that most don't remember. Of course, with the banishment and the after-math being important to their fic, that is understandable most of the time, but I have seen a few...
selonianth posted a comment on Saturday 4th September 2010 8:34am
Bravo Jeconais
darthridian posted a comment on Saturday 4th September 2010 7:23am
great story mate, loved the accidentally blowing up Root HQ.
jgkitarel posted a comment on Saturday 4th September 2010 5:01am
Nice bit of humor there.
frankocsic posted a comment on Saturday 4th September 2010 1:56am
great job squeezing all this in the span of a council meeting. thanks for sharing
Wonderbee31 posted a comment on Saturday 4th September 2010 1:18am
That was fun there, and really enjoyed seeing Tsunade taking charge the way that Sarutobi was hinted at, but never did, just a fun read.
bshaw0000 posted a comment on Friday 3rd September 2010 11:47am
LOL what a silly story. Still it has great promise for an actual story. I'm a big fan of yours and can't wait for your next post. (Hopefully soon)
Brian Drozd posted a comment on Friday 3rd September 2010 10:25am
This was a humorous little story. I like how Tsunade stepped up where the Third let things get away from him.
A couple of errors I noticed.
"Little gaki never let him get it down."
Wait, stop, reverse that. I think you mean: 'Little gaki never let it get him down.'
Also later there was
"To her right, she saw Kakashi swap with Komura."
Whom? I think the name you are looking for is 'Homura', which you used earlier.
marcelhm posted a comment on Friday 3rd September 2010 8:31am
*giggles madly..... ahem chuckles (yes much more manly) madly* and forgets the rest of the review
Daemo posted a comment on Friday 3rd September 2010 5:17am
Given the average Konoha civilian's intellect and how fervent pairing wars can be, if anything Tsunade is being generous to the civilians...
shawn151 posted a comment on Friday 3rd September 2010 1:41am
Everything on Ichiraku Ayame! This fic was hilarious, but I'm a sucker for people dieing, so I'm probably biased.
lydiakate98 posted a comment on Friday 3rd September 2010 1:18am
So funny! But do I smell a Harem crack fic in the offing? Because really, I have smart money on Hinata, since she liked him for who he is, not what he can do or who his dad was. Inquiring minds want to know who Naruto ends up with!
thumper posted a comment on Friday 3rd September 2010 12:53am
This was a very well thought out and written short that I enjoyed reading.
David Thacker posted a comment on Thursday 2nd September 2010 11:42pm
That was great!!!!!!! The best story like it.
Robert Peeples posted a comment on Thursday 2nd September 2010 9:30pm
This made me giggle :)
switchhammerhit posted a comment on Wednesday 8th September 2010 8:18am