Paul Blay posted a comment on Sunday 28th February 2010 9:02am for Halloween

Nice story, but the "future summary" section starting with
'As Dawn had said...'
rather messes up the flow of things.

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Sunday 10th August 2008 6:19am for Halloween

Every time I run across this story I am compelled to reread it!

Excellent work.