AngorMike posted a comment on Friday 13th September 2019 1:47am for Halloween

I'm liking the story.

One thing that stuck in my mind was how you had willow complaining about their ages, being five years apart. It really shows how Willows can be viewed as a touch hypocritical in this instance, seeing as how she was encouraging a 17 year old Buffy to date a 200 year old vampire.

Paul Blay posted a comment on Sunday 28th February 2010 9:02am for Halloween

Nice story, but the "future summary" section starting with
'As Dawn had said...'
rather messes up the flow of things.

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Sunday 10th August 2008 6:19am for Halloween

Every time I run across this story I am compelled to reread it!

Excellent work.