By Jeconais
Reviews
TheHard posted a comment on Thursday 16th February 2006 5:44am
Hi!
I've read this story a bunch of times now, and i going to be never tired of it, is great!
It's any posibility of a next chapter, of Harry meeting Padma parents? that's would be nice :)
Thanks for sharing...
Michael Foerster posted a comment on Tuesday 14th February 2006 12:43am
In one word: wow.
Good plot, good writing (style, spelling, grammar, ...)
Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Tuesday 31st January 2006 11:09am
Final - - Well past excellent. The chat between Harry and Dumbledore might have been even better than the final battle.
I loved it.
The idea of a Gryffindor being so affected by a Ravenclaw is fascinating. And since Harry is the hero of the tale, that change is most obvious. But the changes in Padma are there also, and I like how you've written it more subtly, yet made it clear.
Great Draco revenge, at the Three Broomsticks and after the battle. Thanks also for letting Ron punch him out first.
Terrific!
Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Tuesday 31st January 2006 10:33am
Ch.2 - - The trilogy concept of a longer story being done in three chapters is new to me. I like it. I get errant story ideas from time to time and I'd like to do something with them, but I have enough on my plate in fanfiction, much less the real world.
I also like your McGonagall - very different and yet not beyond possible, just highly unlikely to show up in canon.
Great stuff!
Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Tuesday 31st January 2006 9:55am
Ch.1 - - I like the fact that you have done so many different Harry and Whoever fics. This is one is 'vintage-Jeconais.'
I'd like to see a Harry and Millicent. Seriously. I have known several girls outgrow their baby fat and harder looking faces in early teen years to become not great beauties, but uniquely attractive in indefinable ways.
A good partner can bring the best out in someone, and being cared for improves anyone's appearance.
Maybe I should write it. It is the weird twist kind of thing that could tickle my muse.
Back to your H/Padma. I really like it! Just a brilliant set-up, and loads of potential. It is finished at three chapters, but it could be a longer tale to rival Gray Queen.
Cheers!
the-ravenhaired-one posted a comment on Tuesday 31st January 2006 6:13am
i really enjoyed this story - it was seriously cool. also, though i didnt want to, i found a lot of similarities between me and luna. thank you for making me admit there was a problem, and even though it didnt work out for me i'm glad that for ron and luna it did.
Raye posted a comment on Friday 27th January 2006 1:09pm
Why can't Harry in the book be more like this. I thought this was one of the most amazing fics I've ever read. Ron isn't a complete idiot. Hermione isn't annoying. And Harry isn't some CAPSLOCK screaming moron who thinks that everything is about him. Great I tell you.
jmcqk6 posted a comment on Monday 9th January 2006 4:45pm
I just finished reading this for the second time. This has got to be one of the best fanfics I've ever read. It brings tears to my eyes everytime. It wasn't the ships, the pranks or anything like that that makes it good, although the interesting ships certainly added something. The plot was marvelous, and Harry's new attitude was perfect. great work. I'm sad to see this one done, but I realize it served it's purpose.
syamx posted a comment on Saturday 10th December 2005 5:32pm
great story. great dialouge. gave me a wierd smile on my face for the next half hour. i just loved it.
James Benfield posted a comment on Wednesday 7th December 2005 4:02pm
Great story! Another one that touched me. Keep up the good work.
James
Wytil posted a comment on Thursday 24th November 2005 11:53am
Actually you needed a 4th section "Meeting the Parents". That has been done by some authors in a very funny way.
Robin Westerly posted a comment on Wednesday 23rd November 2005 3:55pm
Interesting new style.
I have never met people who talk like that but hey i would like to.
And you mentioned Hagrid!!!!!!!!!YAY!!(Am I obsessed)
Thankyou for yet another wonderful story.
You make me smile
Robin Westerly posted a comment on Wednesday 23rd November 2005 3:17pm
um. Interesting and different. But why no explaination of background, such as where powers come from?
Having said that I a m too methodical and I love it!
Ike posted a comment on Thursday 17th November 2005 3:13pm
I just found this story on your site, after reading through White Knight, Grey Queen. I was just wondering, by any chance do you read David Eddings? He happens to be one of my favorite (real life) authors, and, well, your whole explanation of the difference between light and dark is almost exactly the way he eventually ended up descibing them. Though it took him 10 books, instead of three, to get there. Awesome story, man, awesome story.
Ian Zellmann posted a comment on Wednesday 16th November 2005 11:26am
Personally, I truly do not care about the pairing as long as it's a nice story. And you have the gift of making great stories, whether they are comedy, romance, angst, etc.
Hagrid posted a comment on Wednesday 9th November 2005 9:42pm
With great tenderness and humor, that is how it seems to me that you finished off the old school evil.
Logan_macLeod posted a comment on Tuesday 8th November 2005 4:27pm
I have to say that I love how you write dialog. It is so enticing
Rewzone posted a comment on Thursday 3rd November 2005 11:51pm
Well I must say this is one of the best fics that I have read to date. And while I do not ship Harry/Padma I did truly enjoy reading this fic. I hope that you continue to write more fics which I have no doubt will be as outstanding as this one is.
Rewzone
Manatheron posted a comment on Tuesday 4th October 2005 9:35pm
Absolutly brilliant... need I say more?
Dan posted a comment on Saturday 25th March 2006 11:29pm